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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

finally unresed on all ur stories.

once again sorry for d delay.

i have resed twice...post 2 & 4 On d pg where u have updated. So pls check both d post as i hv commentex twice lol.

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Love-Blossoms

@Love-Blossoms

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

wowww loved all the parts
rk is a vampire i guess
full of passion n obession n mysteries
amazing concept
loved the flash backs
cont.soon

Edited by NehaVdian - 10 years ago

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Ni33

@Ni33

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

"De...de...demon..."

"Demon."

"Demon!" "You are a demon!"

Well we missed that reaction...🤣 I would say a normal person would react like that...🤣 But hey we are talking about a crazy bala here... Of course she isn't normal...😆

She found him attractive even after witnessing him killing a person and making his body disappear with help of the shadows that encircled him...🤣 Wow... She is a goner... She is attractive of the darkness... And Chotu why do I have this sense that not until I make her mine...means either marriage or...🤣

Also Rohan... What do you have against my Rohan...😆 He is a great man... I know you are gonna kill him... I can read between the lines... You'll make him appear awful... And on the day of his marriage with Madhu or something RK will kill him... People will freak seeing RK kill a man that way. So they will either try to kill RK and Madhu will protect him...getting killed in the process...Or the kingdom Rohan came from will retaliate Rohan's death by killing Madhu... Bringing us back to the present...

Either way I know my dear Rohan is getting killed...😭 I hope you'll reincarnate him as well, like you did with Madhu... And he founds a way to kill that demon with no horns and black wings... As I said I imagined RK to be something like Maleficent...🤣 But naa... So far nothing like that... But I like how you portrayed his killing moves... Kill a person without any trace left behind whatsoever... Like that person never existed...With the exception for the people who still remembers them and Think he they gone missing...🤣

But now a question popped up in my head... How come RK knew that Madhu would reincarnate... He waited...300 years I Think...For her to reappear...Was there some prophecy or something like that, that predicted it would happen or was there a curse or protection spell of some sort... Since this is about a demon I assume there is some magic involved... Also did it involve Rohan as well? 😆

You know me...😆 Trying to find logic behind every nook and corner...🤣 And knowing my Rohan is getting killed in the past I want him alive in the present...🤣 Also where was RK during these 300 years? Was he hiding in the shadows like a coward for his Madhu to come back to Life...Or did he get punished by other demons (I assume there are others...There is no way he is the only one like that)...Did they isolate him for 300 years in some hell? Or did they pity him, cause they knew he was in his personal hell for losing her?😆 Thus no punishment...😆

Well I'll stop now...Even though I have more in my mind to ask you... Or you will be cursing me for asking you all of these questions only after 4 chapters...🤣 I have so many more questions to ask... One involving Deepali...🤣

Well thanks for the intriguing killing chapter... I guess you know my favorite part...😆 And thanks for the PM... It served it's purpose now...🤣

Last to comment...🤣

Edited by Ni33 - 10 years ago

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Meghana

@simply.meghana

Achiever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Originally posted by: RM14
Lovely and beautiful update Meghna.😳So Rishabh came in front of Madhubala and she wants to know who is he?He told her that its not the right time to know his identity, and Madhu trust him also,good.Rishabh saved her from danger,great.😛Feeling bad for Madhu,she don't want to marry prince but cn't say no either to her parents.Hope Rishabh do something so that the prince stay away from Madhu.Loved Madhu- Rishabh meeting😳and the forest scene.😃Waiting for next update.

Thank you so much deepti
Glad you are liking it 😃