Rishabala SS: Kabhi Hum Na The : Part Five on Page 65 (16/02)Completed

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sufidox

@sufidox

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

hey don't worry about the end lazy.😃

it's ur story and it's ur pov which i find quite interesting and of-course waiting for the epilogue eagerly👏

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parimaniya

@parimaniya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

superb...awesome... wonderful m speechless b4 ur writing nicely described...waiting 4 epilogue...update soon

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snowgud

@snowgud

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

Fantastic update 😛 loved the bonding between the childrens with their parents.The way the childrens got angry with Padmini when Madhu cried was very cute.Eagerly waiting for epilogue 😛

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

woww..as said earlier this is such an emotional part...the emotional trauma Madhu has gone through and RK's love for Madhu..realizations..bonding..families, parenting, love, compassion..what not,,you have added evrything in this SS...loved it Lazy...n doubt ur one of the best writers..👏

Thank you for the story and PM..

but Dont stop here..when r u starting "Sleeping with the enemy"..wanna know about that..

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#345

awesome update

RK is been a man with a matured mind

the way he supports madhu is awesome

and he reasoning the children is so nice

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mahimesha

@mahimesha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

awesome update 😃

i like the reunion of family 😃 loved it it that finally they are together 😃

now she love him she also confessed and come clsoe then why not marriage 😕

but still i love the emotion you portray 😃

Rk dialogues were solid haaannn😉

thanks for pm 😃

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#347

awesome update loved it Tfs for pm 👏⭐️

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Rose Maria

@meiejrishbala

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#348

do you know what i liked the most in this update...the way ayush and ayusha protected madhu when she started to cry...and the way rishabh make understand the kids that everybody does mistakes 😊😊😊...yup atlast with the bracelet,rishabh got his moment 😊😊

you are gonna give us an epilogue???????????oh lazy,i love you dear...i wil make a birthday thread for u for writing us this story and gonna giving us epilogue 😉😉😉