NEW FF :The Unexpected Wedding - Chapter 16 Updated , DT: 28-FEB-17

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Alll MBIAns..DVDDIans..
Here comes the new FF...I got this idea when I was discussing something with my Mom...couldn't have asked for a reason to start a new FF..hope u all will like and appreciate my work 😆😆😆..

Anyways...don't get into conclusions..will get more details in next update

The Unexpected Wedding

Prologue:

"MY Son will get married..it happens soon..." furious Radha, vowed to Suma...everyone in the hall looked ta Radha...with shocked expression...tears started brimming from her eyes...she immediately looked at her Son...Rudr..who is sittign on the couch..looking all sad and upset..she rushed to him and hugged him...

"Rudr beta...please..don't..." she cried her heart out...

After few hours...

"Maa...what happened...why is everyone leaving...wha.."

"Rishu...beta..will tell you..now go to Bhai and be with him..." she caressed his head...being an onedient Son...RK nodded his head and rushed to his elder Bro's room...

"Bro...wha.." before he could finish..Rudr hugged him with heavy heart...his eyes are tear filled...and so is Rishu's...he patted his bro's back and then started talking some random stuff about girls eh who to distract his bro...

"Rishu...u don't want to know..what happened"..he was silent..then Rudr took a deep breathe and narrated how Suma insulted his Mother for his disability when Radha asked for her daughter's rishta to rudr..how she made him realize...his leg(polio effected), made him disable and unfit for marriage...before he could complete further..Rishu stood on his feet in rage..

"How dare she...how can she..." But stopped abruptly after listening to what Rudr said

"Mom vowed to her that she is going to prove her wrong..." ..he smiled sadly...who will marry me Rishu..Mom bhi na"

"Shhh...Bro...apart from this(pointing to his leg)..ur just beyond perfect..ibelieve me...aaah...that thing is.."Rudr looked ta him curiously..

"I am way smarter that you ...so...I am an exception " with a wink...Rudr punched him in stomach..both the brothers...shared a laugh..radha who is witnessing everything...smiled contently...

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Will try to update twice in a week...no promises just my determination which i can keep intact..but still.

KOSHISH EK ASHA..u ccc 😃


Index:

Chapter-1 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4154667/new-ff-the-unexpected-wedding-chapter-16-updated-dt-28-feb-17?pn=7

Chapter -2 ::https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4154667/new-ff-the-unexpected-wedding-chapter-16-updated-dt-28-feb-17?pn=11

Chapter - 3 ::www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=21

Chapter - 4 :www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=27

Chapter -5 : www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=32

Chapter-6 : www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=37

Chapter-7 : www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=42

Chapter -8: www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=47

Chapter - 10 : /www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=57

Chapter - 11 :www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=60

Chapter - 12 :www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4154667&TPN=64



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sufidox thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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good start and the concept is different bt don't pair him along with madhu
i want RK and madh to be together forever.😉😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sufidox

good start and the concept is different bt don't pair him along with madhu

i want RK and madh to be together forever.😉😃


Sufi...its only RK and Madhu...so..don't worry sweety
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Posted: 11 years ago
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intresting start waiting for updates
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amazing start n absolutely different concept
continue soon
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Congrats for the new story!
Interesting concept! waiting for the next update! please pm me!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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If it is Rishbala .m with u dear cont soon thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So far it's a great first part. My first thought after reading this was that Radha will find someone for Rudra. And this someone will be Madhu. But Madhu and Rishu will fall in love. Rishu might fall in love with her because of the care she shows for his brother and how she doesn't care about his condition. For Madhu's part, don't know why she would fall in love with Rishu, maybe for the care and love he shows for his brother. But after seeing how Rudra is happy or that Rishu and Madhu can't break his heart will put their feelings aside and Madhu will marry Rudra. Or maybe Trishna, who happens to be Madhu sister, will get married to Rudra and Rishu and Madhu meet each other because of them. The story is still fresh and the a lot of angles you can play this. But I am liking the story. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Great start Asha Di!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon & pm Me!
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Originally posted by: Ni33

So far it's a great first part. My first thought after reading this was that Radha will find someone for Rudra. And this someone will be Madhu. But Madhu and Rishu will fall in love. Rishu might fall in love with her because of the care she shows for his brother and how she doesn't care about his condition. For Madhu's part, don't know why she would fall in love with Rishu, maybe for the care and love he shows for his brother. But after seeing how Rudra is happy or that Rishu and Madhu can't break his heart will put their feelings aside and Madhu will marry Rudra. Or maybe Trishna, who happens to be Madhu sister, will get married to Rudra and Rishu and Madhu meet each other because of them. The story is still fresh and the a lot of angles you can play this. But I am liking the story. Thanks for the PM.


OMg Ni...gal so many conclusions...ufff..I am happy that , you people are actually thinkinng so much abt my stories...yaya...So...Just a heads up..there is a twist..an unexpected one..so...let me post chapter 1..may be pretty soon ..keep reading sweety

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