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Posted: 11 years ago
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DO DIL MIL RAHE HAI
By rima4ever

[THEME 2]

RK woke up after drops of water fell on his face . He slowly opened his eyes . A beautiful sight met him . Madhu was drying her hair after a bath . RK looked on mesmerized . She then combed her hair and wore her ear rings . He called " Biwi " Madhu looked at him " Tum itna saj kyun rahi ho ? Modelling ya ramp walk pe to nahi jaa rahe ho . Itna sajogi to raaste bhi tumse jalne lagega " She said " RK tumhari saath bahar jaa rahi hoon . Thoda to standard maintain karna chahiye na ? " He said " Ahaan " He then got up and got ready . Later Madhu said " Waise RK hum pehli baar tumhare banaye huye ghar me jaa rahe hain . Mujhe bahut achcha lag raha hai " RK said " Biwi jab tum wahan jaoge to aur bhi achcha lagega " She said " Thank u so much . U r d best " He said " Haan wo to main hoon " She punched him lightly . Soon they left the mansion .

In the car Madhu started thinking of their house . When RK had shown her the plan with the candles she could not believe it to be true . But when she had seen him building it with his own hands she then knew that it was real . Soon she had expressed her desire to go and spend a day there . She wanted to spend some quality time with him . She wanted to pamper him . RK had agreed easily . Now they were on their ways . She was feeling so excited . They would be alone in the house with no one to disturb them . They could have a heart to heart chat . Normally she did not het enough time with him as he used to be busy with his shoots . But on her request he had taken 2 days off . She was very happy for this .

Soon they arrived at the house . It was smaller than the mansion but it had a magical feel about it . She instantly loved the house . They went inside . RK gave her a tour of the house . Then he told her " I have another surprise for u . I want to take u to a place where I am sure u will enjoy " Saying this he put a blindfold on her eyes . Madhu started to protest but RK just shushed her up saying " Biwi I am sure u will love this " He then lifted her up in his arms and carried her to the car . " Not very far from here Biwi have a bit patience " Madhu said " Yes i know when u have planned something I am sure that it will be something grand " RK said " Ahaan "

Shortly the car stopped . RK again lifted her up in his arms and brought her out of the car . Then he walked for a short distance and set her down on the ground . He opened her blindfold and said " Biwi open your eyes slowly now " Madhu opened her eyes and then she saw a heavenly sight . They were in a beautiful meadow ( I have taken this concept from the Twilight series . I am a fan of Edward's meadow ) . All around there was green grass and beautiful flowers . He then told her " Enjoy the view Biwi . I am bringing somethhing from the car " Saying this he went . Madhu was just taking in the sight . She felt as if she had come to the garden of paradise .

RK soon came with a large basket . There were food items and fruit juice for both of them . Seeing this Madhu was moved to tears " RK u did all this for me " RK said " No Biwi I did all this for my neighbour . Of course I did all this for u " She could not control herself now . She hugged him tightly . She said " I must have done something in my last birth to deserve u . Thank u so much . I just loved this surprise . But when and how did u plan all this ? " He then said " I saw this place from my car when I was on my way to shooting . Seeing this place I knew that u would love it . I planned to bring u here some day . " Hearing this Madhu was mived . She kissed him softly on the cheek " U know how much u mean to me ? " He said " No I dont " She said " U r my life my reason for existence . Without U I am nothing . I hope that I get u as my life partner in all my births "

Soon she was hungry so they both had the food . Madhu enjoyed eating there . It felt she was so close to nature . After eating RK extended his hand before her and asked her for a dance . Madhu gave her hand in his . He held her waist with one hand and supported her on her shoulder with the other hand . They did a slow dance looking into each other eyes . They were lost but suddenly they felt drops of water on them . It had started raining . RK told Madhu to get in the car and return but she was not in a mood to do so . She was enjpying the rain a lot . She started twirling in the rain . She was very excited and behaving like a child . She called RK " Come here and enjoy with me " He came and gripped her by the waist.

Both were fully drenched by that time but no one cared . Again they were lost in each others eyes . They were almost sticking to each other . It was raining but passion was burning in their eyes . Slowly RK brought down his lips on hers . He took her upper kip is his slowly . That sent electrifying jolts in their bodies . He deepened the kiss . Suddenly there was the sound of thunder and Madhu got scared . She hugged him dearly . RK chuckled at this action of hers . He then said " Madhu lets go . I dont want u to catch a cold " They ran to the car and he drove home .

After they reached RK told her to go and change . Later after both of them had changed Madhu made hot chocolate for both of them . Both of them enjoyed the drink while RK told her of his childhood . He shared many of his memories with her . This was the first time he opened up to her to such an extent . Madhu understood that he was very lonely from within . She knew that he was broken within . She was determined to make him whole again . She too shared many of her childhood memories . Lastly RK had another surprise for her . He had got the DVD of Mr India . They both saw it together . Madhu saw the entire film for the first time now . She did not like the last part though but she enjoyed it with him .

The day passed too quickly for her . She realized that she had enjoyed each and every moment of the day . She had also got to know RK a lot better now . They had come a long way past their hate relation . Now they were forming a strong bond . She knew all his flaws and yet she loved him with all his flaws . She knew that they still had a long way to go but was sure that their journey would be a very beautiful one . She planned to spend some days at their paradise now as that would give them both the required break from their daily routined life . RK on the other hand saw a changed and a happier madhu today . He too had felt immense peace and satisfaction at the end of the day .




Edited by uma88 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12

DEAR ALL,

here are few questions please give your feed back


1.How The Themes Were?

2.Did YOU Liked It.

3.Was It Upto Their Expectation?

4.Did You Had Any Prob In This Contest.

5.Will You Take Part In Next Contest.?

6.When Do you Expect Next Contest(Time Period)?

Thanxx for participating and showing your intrest

WITH LOVE.

CO - ORDINATORS

Edited by JsparrowJ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

HURRY!!! For 3 consecutive times (Registration, Voting & Result) I came first to comment so it proves I'm a "Best stalker" LOL.🤣

MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS TO THE FOLLOWING "WINNERS"🥳

1) WINNER (BEST OS) - Lubeeda (@Mentally-Insane)⭐️

Happily Ever After? - (Lube dear, It was a perfect blend of love, longing, pain, romance, liveliness, trust... U nailed it dear! It was so different. Initially I thought Rk has cheated madhu but nah... I loved every inch of the story)👏👏

2) 1st Runner Up (Best OS) - Taru (@Teekay)⭐️

Tum Aaa Gaye Ho - (Tk dear, I loved it to the core. It was amazing. This was one story with a gripping concept though rishbala scenes where less it was unique & I loved how u used the theme at the very end. I would love to read the next part of the story in madhu's pov)👏👏

3) 2nd Runner Up (Best OS) - Asha (@ashabanerjee)⭐️

Bonded For Life - (Asha baby, luckly it was not 'so far so good' but fully good in fact outstanding. It was the 1st story posted & I read it 1st & at that time itself I was so sure u'll steal one place in top three. Perfect story with a perfect ending)👏👏

4) Most Emotional OS

Meghna (@Abhiya4life)⭐️ - Mended Hearts - (Megna, actually I was shocked to know it you who wrote such an emotional piece. So u are not only a fairy tale written. Baby, u are one talented writer who can write in all genre)👏👏

Pritt (@Hiddlestoned)⭐️ - Masked Desires - (Do I want to say anything about pritt's talent? Girl, masked desires' was so so romantic which I expected in romantic os category. It was so romantic especially Rk's surprise in rain for wanting him to be the first person to wish his biwi')👏👏

5) Most Romantic OS - Shriya (@shriyakadge)⭐️

Capturing Love - (Shriya Baby, capturing love captured so many hearts' including mine. It was simply superb.)👏👏

6) Heartbreaking OS - Suru (@My_Vivjaan)⭐️

Ethereal Love - (Suru dear, I was so sure u would have brought tears in almost all the readers... It was indeed a heart breaking, heart piercing, heart aching, heart pulling, heart swatting story. It was clean & neat. I loved it mainly when RK says he closed his eyes & never opened...Aww.. U made me cry but that's the success of ur story)👏

7) Cutest OS - Azra (@Azrazaidi)⭐️

My Reason to Smile - (Azra Dear, it was really cute & it was even "my reason to smile". i enjoyed reading it! Good job)👏👏

8) Most Sensuous OS - (Tainar)⭐️

Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera - (Oh Tainar Dear, I was so sure u'll solidly win in this category. To be frank if there was no categories but only winner & runners then this story will be in top three. I would say it was a super erotic romance story with a mixture of pain & pleasure')👏👏

Perfect Fictional Package (Judges' Choice) - Sufi (@sufidox)⭐️

Who's the Saviour? - Sufi baby, I knew it! I knew it! It was you. How could I not find my suspense queen's story after all I'm following your 4 dark suspense story like hell!! I could see a glimpse of tycoon RK in this DIA RK! It's really a complete package! Thanks to judges for mentioning it in special category.👏👏


i'm glad that i could judge fair because almost all the stories which i voted won!!😃😃

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A huge round of applause to all the contestants.👏👏👏

⭐️(Arza, Asha, Christy, Lubs, Meghna, Neha, Pritt, Priya, Priyal, Shriya, Sudha, Sufi, Suru, Swagata, Teekay, Tulika, Tainar)⭐️

You guys really rocked & took the contest to a different lever & made it interesting & tougher.👏👏👏

(I really missed Lazy & her story)😭

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Now, coming to the sweet surprise:😛

As U said Uma dear, it was indeed a Big pleasant surprise which was really unexpected. Uff... again I read the 8 wonderful stories in a go (MY Mom was almost in the verge to snatch my lappy & to ask me to sleep lol).😆😆

As you guys surprised me, I want to honor you in your own way.😉

So here goes...

Best OS (Overall) - Winner -CHALLENGE TO SOOTHE UNSAID PAIN

⭐️By beautiful_heart - (beautiful_heart, you have written a beautiful story, in a beautiful way, on a beautiful couple, with a beautiful ending for beautiful persons like us)👏👏

Best OS (Overall) - 1st Runner Up - When Love Met With Retribution

⭐️ BY kg15 - ( Kavya Baby, U killed it!! Ek dum chakaas!! Here goes.. in RK style..

"(Madhubala & RK with goggles encounter - Ahaan...

Their love confession & love making - I like it...

Madhu getting pregnant - Boom...

Rk saying "It's over" - Sounds like PACK UPPP...

Rk leaving madhu & himself heart broken - Sayonara...

I loved this - Madhubala Ek Dokha Ek badla)"👏👏

Best OS (Overall) - 2nd Runner Up - FORGOTTEN PAST

⭐️By JsparrowJ - (Sparrow, i would say it's a master piece of your writing. I loved it but I would have been even more happier if u've killed madhu too.. (omg! I sound like kavya)👏👏

(" jheena ek saat, marna ek saat!

Ye hi hai meri baat!

Iss story padne ki baat!

Mei ne Jagratha poori raat!")🤣

(I'm a hindi sucker so please don't mind my mistakes)

Most Emotional OS - Wheels of destiny

⭐️BY - UMA88 - (Dear, it was so emotional especially Rk's Pov. Poor soul' longing for love from a wrong soul' but finally found his true soul & they became one soul'. I loved the way how she bravely accepted the challenge & succeeded in it too & all assuring RK about the baby was beautiful. Brilliant piece of work)👏👏

Most Romantic OS - DO DIL MIL RAHE HAI

⭐️By rima4ever - (Oh Dia dear, I know u are busy in making wishes & congo' threads but u are a wonderful writer so do write often. It was so soothing to read this romantic piece but Pattinson & Kristen clouded my eyes from the meadow scene)👏👏

Most Heart breaking OS - FORGOTTEN PAST

⭐️By JsparrowJ - ( Right from the very 1st line till end the story pierced my heart. sparrow u have written it outstandingly awesome but don't expect another poem from, okay? If u want re read the above one LOL)👏👏

Cutest OS - Testing his patience

⭐️By desigirl_sydell - (Dear, it was really short & sweet. I loved it mainly when madhu's says about the new member joining their cute little family. A best birthday gift to cherish)👏👏

&

New journey - ⭐️(BY - BALD) - (it was one beautiful journey of a lovely couple Rishbala. I loved the fact that madhu gave him the space & made a space for her in his heart)👏👏

Most Sensuous OS - SAWAN AAYA HAI...

⭐️By Rimjhim (@rg0782) - (A whistle for your apt title... I wonder how could a simple store room kiss & dreamy balcony rainy dance make a story hot & sensual. Great job Rimu but I missed ur hatke hindi' dialogues)👏👏

Thank God only 8 stories for 8 categories so i don't have the pressure of conducting 'voting & counting'😆

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FEED BACK

1.How The Themes Were? - Brilliant!👏

2.Did YOU Liked It. - Obviously!😛

3.Was It Upto Their Expectation? - Yes!⭐️

4.Did You Had Any Prob In This Contest. - Nope!😳

5.Will You Take Part In Next Contest.? - Definitely!😉

6.When Do you Expect Next Contest(Time Period)? - Sooner rather than later!😃

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T.E.A.M - "Together Everyone Achieves More"

Yes, it's so true... The coordinators (kavya, uma & sparrow) worked hard as one team & made this contest a great success. I'm glad that we writers & readers are also a part of your lovely TEAM.

Thank you.

With love,

Sudha❤️

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P.S (a small convo btn me & my subconscious)😆

Subcon - Hey! U again made a page! (angrily)😡

Me - Oh! That's why I reduced the font size (innocently)😊

Subcon - You fool. It will reduce the size of the letter not the content (irately)😡

Me - What to do? My emotions are over flowing. Can I control ever? (worried)

Subcon - No! never! It's manufacturing defect. (smirks)😉

Moral - Please do forgive me for being loquacious😳

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Edited by madhurish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1.How The Themes Were? (AWSMMM)

2.Did YOU Liked It.(LIKE IT NO DEAR LUV IT)

3.Was It Upto Their Expectation? ( yUP IT WAS A GR8 TREAT)

4.Did You Had Any Prob In This Contest.( nooo)

5.Will You Take Part In Next Contest.?( Sure by reading stories as mm a reader )

6.When Do you Expect Next Contest(Time Period)? (every month joking 😳,,,,After every 3 months:))


Thanksss all to give us so much good stories,the co ordinators...kavya di.uma di,Akku...chitra...nd also writers who pen down...nd obiouesly the WINNERS...Congr8sss👏

Edited by noiseygirl - 11 years ago
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Unres..

1.How The Themes Were: all were marvellous..😃

2.Did YOU Liked It: ofcourse i loved it..😳

3.Was It Upto Their Expectation: beyond expectation nd amazing concept write something from pics👏

4.Did You Had Any Prob In This Contest: nope how can i have any problem when co-ordinators are awesome friends.. 🤗

5.Will You Take Part In Next Contest: defo will take part.. i really enjoye it fully😃😃

6.When Do you Expect Next Contest(Time Period): i think once in month. if u all co-ordinators are free...😛😉😉

Now coming to results...
A HEARTIEST CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL WINNERS AND PARTICIPANTS...🥳
I WON IN MOST HEARTBREAKING CATEGORY FOR THIS THANKS TO ALL READERS AND THOSE WHO VOTED FOR ME... ( I KNOW MY STORY MADE U ALL CRY... SO I M REALLY SORRY DEARIES...🤗)
A BIG THANKSSS TO UMA DI KAVYA DI MY MISS.SPARROW FOR THIS GREAT VENTURE... FOR GIVING A CHANCE TO DO SOMETHING NEW... I LOVED IT SO MUCH... 🤗 🤗 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Now coming to BIG SURPRISE will read all OSs soon and comment for them individually...
Edited by My_VivJaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo to all winners👏
and do give feedback dearies
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heartiest Congratulations to all the Winners and the Contestants!!
You all are winners in real...!!!

Keep writing with the same zeal for your readers!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JsparrowJ

<font size="6">congo to all winners👏</font>

<font size="6">and do give feedback dearies</font>



thank u miss.sparrow!!! :)) will surely give feedback!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kg15

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Heartiest Congratulations to all the Winners and the Contestants!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">You all are winners in real...!!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff0000">Keep writing with the same zeal for your readers!!</font>



thank u kavya di!!! :))
agree wid u dear!!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Perfect Fictional Package (Judges' Choice)

Sufi (@sufidox)

Who's the Saviour?

Was this for real or am I dreaming it 😲. Honestly this was really a surprise package and I really didnt expect this award.

Firstly I would like to thank the Mods for allowing this contest.

Secondly I would like to thank the Coordinators who worked really hard for this. I know how it will be like as I usually become the Coordinator whenever Presentation happens.😆

So the next and the most important part... CONGRATS TO ALL THE WINNERS WHO MADE IT WITH THEIR WRITING SKILLS.

AND THOSE YOU NEARLY MADE IT DONT LOSE HOPE AS I AM SURE YOU MIGHT HAVE MISSED THE SAME BY A MINOR POINT.

Finally I would like to thank the Judges for the special Honor and the surprise was really mind blowing and also thanks a lot for making me special 😉

Edited by sufidox - 11 years ago

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