Rishbala OS- Perfomance of a Lifetime

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey everyone...it's been a while...
Back with a new OS
Hope you all like it

Happy Independence Day 🤗

PS school has started for me...so story updates may happen less frequently due to homework...I will still try to update on a weekly basis

Rishbala OS- Performance of a Lifetime

"Madhu, hurry up. The performance will start soon!" Trishna called.

"I'm coming!" She called back, quickly fastening an earring.

It was the night of Independence Day. Madhu was leading a large performance to celebrate India's 67th year of independence. She had preparing for the performance for months on end. It had all come down to this day.

"Madhu! You're on in 5 minutes!" The stage helper called.

"Is everything ready?"

"Yes. Only you are left." She yelled.

Madhu tidied up her hair and then took her position in the front of the group. They were about to begin when suddenly a shower of sparks fell from the generator.

"Oh no!" Madhu gasped. Why did everything happen at the last moment!?

The stage hands rushed to the scene. They looked at the generator, shaking their heads.

"We need to get the spare generator. It will take 10 minutes..." They said.

"Make it quick. We can't have the audience wait anymore."

Madhu was worried. She wanted the show to go well...but she also had another reason to stress. This performance could change her life for the better. RK...her love ...was supposed to attend the performance. But he was upset with her because of a fight they had a couple days before. He was so angry that he tore the invitation without taking even a glance at it.

Madhu stuck her head out of the curtains, seeing if RK had shown up. There were thousands of people already in their seats. She couldn't find him even after scanning the crowd of people multiple times. Her emotions poured out in the form of tears. Her RK wouldn't be here to witness possibly the most important performance of her life.

But thinking of the other dancers in her group, her wonderful friends, she pulled herself together and went back into position. The stage helpers returnees minutes later and plugged in the new generator in. The lights lit up one by one. Then the curtains drew back.

Meanwhile... RK was in all fours on his office floor, tape in hand. He was trying to put the invitation back together. How stupid he was to tear it apart. He had torn Madhu's heart along with it.

He gathered all the invitation pieces from the trash can and laid them out on the floor. He tried to reconstruct it like a puzzle. After a few minutes of confusion, he gave up. He flung the pieces all over the room.

"Shit RK! SHIT!" He roared in anger. He screwed up, real bad.

Not thinking about anything else, he grabbed his car keys and rushed downstairs. He go into the car and began to drive towards the venue. He speed through the traffic, hoping to reach before Madhu's dance started...

The dancers poised to dance. Madhu tried her best to keep a smile on her face. The venue was packed with people. The colorful lights shined all over. The stage had a replica of the Taj Mahal on the back wall. The music had slowly begun to play.

Hooo hooo hooo hooo..
Yahaan har qadam qadam pe dharti badle rang
Yahaan ki boli mein rangoli saat rang
Yahaan har qadam qadam pe dharti badle rang
Yahaan ki boli mein rangoli saat rang
Dhaanii pagi pahne mausam hai
Neeli aadar taane ambar hai
Nadii sunahrii hara samundar hai re sajila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila


Madhu danced with all of her passion and energy...letting all her emotions pour out into her dance. She had her eyes on the entry gate, hoping her RK would come...

Hooo hooo hooo hooo..
Sindoori gaalonwala suraj jo kare hai tholi
Sharmiile kheton ko hakne chunar pili pili
Ghuungha mein rang panghat mein rang cham cham amkila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila

RK parked his car near the curb and ran to the the entry gate of the venue. He tried to get inside, but the security guard stopped him.

"Where are you going, sir?" He asked sternly.

"Inside. Please let me in. My girlfriend is dancing today. She is the lead dancer."

"Yeah right! Do you know how many people have said?" The guard pointed to a group of random boys in the park. They looked over and laughed.

"Please sir! I'm not lying!" RK pleaded. He heard the music from the stage and became agitated.

Hooo hooo hooo hooo..
Abiir gulaal se chehre hain yahaan muskaanon ki toli
Rang haseen mein rang khushi mein rishte jaise holi
Vaadon mein rang yaadon mein rang rang rang rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila

Madhu still watched the gate...she knew that RK would come...

Meanwhile, RK paced back and forth. He tried to watch the show from a distance, but he could barely see Madhu's face. She was too far away.

Another guard, Madhu's friend, was watching RK from the booth. He had recognized him from the pictures that Madhu showed him. He looked at the extra ticket in his hand and rushed out to RK. He tapped RK's shoulder.

"Yes?" RK said.

"Here. I had this extra ticket." He said, handing RK the ticket. "Go...see your Madhu dance."

"Thank you so much!" RK said.

RK went back to the guard and handed him the ticket. The guard gave him a look, but let him in. RK ran up closer to the stage. His eyes met with Madhu's.

Madhu's face instantly lit up. RK blew her a kiss from down below. RK found an empty seat right in the front row. He watched her dance with his full attention.

Ishq ka rang yahaan par gahraa chadke kabhi na utare
Sachhe pyaar ka hahraa sa rang chalke par na bikhre
Rang adaa mein rang hayaa mein hai rasila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila

Yahaan har qadam qadam pe dharti badle rang
Yahaan ki boli mein rangoli saat rang
Dhaanii pagi pahne mausam hai
Neeli aadar taane ambar hai
Nadii sunahrii hara samundar hai re sajila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Ho rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila
Des rangila rangila des mera rangila

The crowd roared with applause right at the end. Madhu felt accomplished. Everyone loved the performance. The group took a bow and exited the stage. RK followed behind them. Madhu saw him and ran up to him, embracing him in her arms.

"RK! You made it! You don't know how happy I am!" She squealed, holding him tighter.

"I couldn't miss this for the world." He said, looking into her eyes. Her wiped her fresh tears with his thumbs.

"How did I do?" She asked.

"Bestest of the the best." He said.

He lifted her up in the air and spun her around. Madhu put her hands on his cheeks.

"I love you Rishabh!"

"I love you too...biwi." Madhu was confused.

"Biwi? But I'm not your wife."

"But I want you to be." He said innocently.

He pulled an intricate diamond ring from his pocket. It sparkled in the moonlight. Madhu stared at it in awe.

"RK...this is beautiful..." She said.

"The most beautiful ring for the most beautiful girl." He said.

He kneeled down into the soft grass, holding the ring in his fingers.

"Madhu...will you marry me?" He asked.

"Yes! I will marry you!" She replied, jumping into his strong embrace...RK kissed Madhu all over her face.

Right then the storm of fireworks lit up the sky. Now RK and Madhu had another reason to celebrate...they were finally becoming one...
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This was based off from the film fanaa... song is from same film
Hope you all liked it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all...Happy Independence Day to you!! 😊
What to say about the os? It was just adorable! You wrote it beautifully. .that u knw it is one of those stories which just brings a huge grin or smile on th readers face..well it did on mine ;) one just feels happy with the events...

Coming to Rishbala...well as perfect as ever! They might fight but they can't live a moment without one another 😳

Thx for the pm 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mentally-Insane

First of all...Happy Independence Day to you!! 😊
What to say about the os? It was just adorable! You wrote it beautifully. .that u knw it is one of those stories which just brings a huge grin or smile on th readers face..well it did on mine ;) one just feels happy with the events...

Coming to Rishbala...well as perfect as ever! They might fight but they can't live a moment without one another 😳

Thx for the pm 😊


thats my job
making people happy😃
really glad you liked it

Rishbala cannot be apart from one another for long

Thank you and welcome for pm😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you aunty😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Happy Independence Day Mehgu !!
Superb OS 😳
Loved it !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhiyan_SHREYA



Happy Independence Day Mehgu !!
Superb OS😳
Loved it !



Same To you Shreya 🤗
Thank you 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovermg

Nice os

Happy independence day



Thank you
Same to you 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Beautiful and Full of True love Awesome OS Meghu Excellently written buddy 👏⭐️😳👍🏼!! Happy Independence day to u too my dear sis 😃!! Love u Tfs for pm !! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

<font size="4">Wow Beautiful and Full of True love Awesome OS Meghu Excellently written buddy 👍🏼!! Happy Independence day to u too my dear sis 😃!! Love u Tfs for pm !! 🤗</font>



Thank you so much chitra di
Love you too...happy Independence Day 🤗

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