FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140 - Page 51

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aaliya14

finally some on said it on his face that he needs madhu and that madhu's not deepali.i loved madhu's optimistic words, that was my favourite part


Thank you. That was kind of hard to write :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nithunavi

Firstly thanx for giving us fast updates tk u r marvelous writer...u r sketching every charecter and their emotions really well...I'm not at all thinking it as fiction sometimes...the charecters are playing front while reading...just a THUMS UP for ur fabulous work...Continue soon...thnx for PM !! :)


Trust me, I don't think of it as fiction when I write. I am so inside the head of these people, that I write thinking what would I say, do or react at that moment. I don't want stuff to be OTT. I want to do what you would do if you were that strong, battered girl.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashitha235

Fab update... Trishna saw and realized both RK and madhu like and care for each... she is very influential person in RK's life so her words will surely affect him... hope he will try to believe all r not dipali and madhu is definitely not her... like u said he starts realizing her goodness and falls for her for what she is... cant wait for that journey where RK actually starts knowing her to falling for her badly...

This story so much close to reality and touches everyone's heart and that credit goes to u...u r such a fab writer... keep writing...
Thnx for the pm... continue soon


Thank you for reading and supporting.😃
Trishna makes a huge difference to RK's outlook, but the chasm is too wide, isn't it?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rdave1

There is absolutely not one thing I didn't just love love about this chapter. I really wish we could keep Trishna around but for the minimal time she was around she has done her job beyond expectations. I love that she doesn't have a filter when she needs to tell RK how it really is. Loved that she picked up they have feelings for each other before they did. I just hope RK with what Deepali did to him doesn't think that Madhu "loving him" as per Trishna is a trick to get to his money.

Phenomenal update. Now I will stalk till you update again. :)


Aww. I loved loved loved your comment. 😭😭 (tears of joy)
Trishna's done her job! Now story has to move forward.

RK kind-of understands Madhu and her innocence, so hopefully he wouldn't fall in the $$ trap. But trust...aah...trust.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TAVAM

Awesome update dear. ...love d line...
nice people really got happiness in the end even if there was hurt on the way..lovely.
Love madhu d way she care for rk.
Thanks for the pm.



Thanks dear.

That line was me trying to be optimistic, like Madhu 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love the slow realization. it's not here yet. but I can't wait till it hits !
You have a way with words my friend :) keeps the reader hooked :)

Keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for the next chapter :) <3


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Tainar

Excellent update! Well done Trishna. Hand the girl RK's credit cards so she can go shopping all the time! It's the least she deserves. 😃 Hope RK takes her words to heart and gives it some serious thought, which I know he will. The boy is now starting to use his eyes. 😃

I absolutely love every bit of this chapter but my favorite is the beginning, the tenderness in RK's eyes. He needs to keep it in stock because poor Madhu needs some serious TLC.
So when will RK find out about her sordid past? Now that Trishna is gone and he doesn't have to hide his "relationship" with Madhu anymore, I hope he questions her about the scene with her brother. *Fingers Crossed*


Ha ha. I love your love for Trishna! She's clearly adored by more than just RK bhai ;)

Yes, Madhu needs tons of TLC, but RK first needs courage to be able to give her that.

The past is in the future. somewhere.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aan-rish

Awesome update teekay

Trishna is very smart to understand the feelings flying between Rk and Madhu. She voiced her thoughts to Rk which he refused to acknowledge. Trishna was really worried about RK but Madhu is sure that he will heal (with her help ofcorse 😆). Now Trish also believe that RK will heal. I love what Trishna said about Madhu's past. She dont care about the past what matters is the present and future. I hope RK learn that funda from Trish.


I love Trishna's atitude, don't you. RK needs a piece of her mind!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: teekay


Ha. Ha. Congratulations for successful stalking. 😊
You know, some days you guys make me feel almost loved.


I hope we will make u feel loved every day nd my stalking is still going on and i guess it will end only after this story finishes 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -StephinesS-

I love the slow realization. it's not here yet. but I can't wait till it hits !
You have a way with words my friend :) keeps the reader hooked :)

Keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for the next chapter :) <3


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Thank you. Slow realization...sometimes I think I am torturing myself with the slowness.
*sigh*

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