FF: Ilzaam |Thread 1 | Chapter 23(A)&(B) Pg 140

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Momi

@momi78

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Posted: 10 years ago

#241

So happy that RK had decided to teach Dipali a lesson. Loving the intimacy between Madhu and RK ... they are going beyond the physical level .. great!

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 10 years ago

#242

WOW!! wonderful update dear...loved it

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janvi

@janu_2006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#243

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..

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veni7842

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Posted: 10 years ago

#244

superb very emotional words by madhu... keep writing

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 10 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: teekay

Thanks. I haven't seen you around for a while. I don't write much here, but you can find what you've missed from here

on it!

reading ch 4 onwards 😳

thank u for the link 😳

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

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Posted: 10 years ago

#246

amazing updates! 👏

i love how the relation is slowly growing n developing...love how the emotional proximity is slowly building up...

at this point even RK's thoughts seem mysterious...wat has he been thinking about madhu? interesting! 😳

and madhu's words n dialogues are so awesome and well written...i like the vague lost manner in which she ends up mouthing those words! 👏 👏 well done!

life will come a full circle when Rk actually finds out all abt madhu 👏

keep writing!

love u 😳

ps - sorry i really havnt visited the forum, else i never miss out on ur stories 🤗 hav u written any OS recently? wud luv to read😳

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tavamm

@tavamm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#247

Wow. .awesome update dear. .nicely written. ..amazing! !
Md emotionally supporting rk and gaining trust fr him...love it!
Thanks for the pm.

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rdave1

@rdave1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#248

Beautiful chapter! They are slowly connecting on a whole different level. They are both starting to understand where the other comes from where their pain and grief comes from. I'm wondering what will happen when RK will figure out how Madhu got to this profession of hers. Phenomenal job!

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teekay

@teekay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: Nithunavi
Wow...it's awsomm...simply supperbb...the lines,the emotions...r just amaizingg...u r a great writer...continue soon !!

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it!

Edited by teekay - 10 years ago