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OS: MY DANCING DOLL

Hi friend! I'm back with another OS on Rishbala!! I have got an overwhelming response from u guys for my 1st OS "upside down" so I thought to continue with my works!! Thank u so much for supporting & encouraging me with ur likes & lovely comments!!


Dedicating this story to:

It's in his kiss - Book.worm / lazy.


Note: Guys I know next to nothing about dance so I dint technically touch with dancing steps just vaguely written!! Professional dancers do forgive my mistakes!!

I dint proof check it!! It was too lengthy & I was too lazy to read what I have written but I'll do it sometime later!! Okay! Zip lock!!


Here it goes...


(Singapore airport)

"Haan.. mukkund, I'm waiting for her in airport lobby" Rk said to mukkund over the phone.

"Sorry! I could have come to pick her up but suddenly my wife falls sick so I have to take her to the hospital & I will see u tomorrow after u get married to trishna" & "by the way do u know who is trishna? U dint see her photo, then how will u find her?" Mukkund asked.

"I'm holding a name board, if she sees the name, she will come to me! What the big deal?" Rk replied.

"Okay! I have given all my details to her so just say u r the one who agent mukkund has sent & she will come with u"

"Okay! I'll manage!! U take are of Ria (mukkund's wife)!! I'll call u later" Rk hangs up the call.


Rk was waiting for trishna whom he had never seen before & he was looking at each & every girl at the age of 23 or 24 but he could see no sign of that age!! He waited for some more time & then a young innocent girl came towards him.

"Are you trishna?" RK asked.

"Yes" she whispers with her heads down.

"Where is agent mukkund?" she asked him

"He has some personal work so I came to pick u up! Come lets go to my place" rk replied.

"And you?" she asked.

"I'm RK! Rishabk kundra! U r gonna marry me! I guess mukkund would have told u about that! Are u ready to marry me?

She nods but dint reply him.

"Okay come" he said & took her baggage & lead her to the cab.

"Trishna.. trishna.." Rk called her when they enter his house but without replying she went to place her bag in the corner of the room.

"TRISHNA.." this time RK called little louder then she turned with a jerk & looked at him shocked.

"Ur name is trishna, right?" Rk asked confused with her strange behavior.

"Yes" she shakes her head frantically.

"then why dint u reply me when I called u twice" Rk asked her.

"um.. sorry!! I was thinking something else.. so tell me why u called me.. um.. RK"

"Yeah! I want u to get ready quick because we are going to the register office to get married & remember it's a fake marriage for u to get Singapore citizenship which u'll get in a year time & I'm helping u only because u accepted to be my dancing partner for the "Global Dancing Stars Competition" which is gonna take place after three months till then u will stay with me & I'll train u & I hope u r a trained dance so it will be easy for u to cope up with me! so nothing personal only professional! Got it?? Rk said.

"Yes" she worriedly replied.


At noon, they both got married in a register office with two witness from RK side & two as trishna's witness which mukkund has arranged for them. After that they had their lunch in an Indian hotel & headed back to Rk's house.


"There is only one bedroom which u can occupy & I'll adjust n couch" Rk told her.

She nods.

At mid night, she woke up feeling thirsty & went to kitchen to fetch some water for herself that's when she noticed Rk twisting & turning uneasily on couch so she quickly went to her room created a pillow wall so that both can sleep on their sides. Then she asked Rk to come & sleep on bed on one side, initially he hesitated but his back was aching badly so he agreed with her & they both slept on the same with a pillow wall.


"Rk! Did all the procedures went well? Did u started your training with her? Where is she?" mukkund asked Rk.

"Yes! All went well! No, we didn't start our dance training, yesterday only she came & yesterday itself we got married then how come u expect me to start the training, let her get settle first. And she is in bathroom, she will come shortly" Rk answered all his questions little pissed.

"Arey haan! U said trishna is some 23 or 24 yrs old but this girl

seems very small & young!! She looks like a doll & I don't know what I'm gonna do with this doll"

"Come on RK, always Indian chics look younger than their age!!

"Hmmm.. Doll hun? so one side dancing & one side romancing hun? Enjoy!! Enjoy!!" he winked at RK

"Shut up! She is only my dance partner, after the competition she will go her way & I'll go my way, that's it". "Are u sure that really knows to dance" Rk asked doubtfuly.

"Of course, Rk. Trishna is a trained Salsa dancer"

"hmm... let's see! But I couldn't find any dancing grace in her walk or style" Rk said disapprovingly.

Suddenly they heard the bathroom door opening sound & they both turned toward the door.

"Who are you?" mukkund shouted at shock.

"Hey! This is trishna! Don't u know?" Rk asked confused seeing mukkund's shocked expression.

"I knew Trishna, I have seen her Bio-data & photo but who is this girl?" Mukkund questioned Rk but he remained silent not knowing what's happening around.

"Um.. I'm Madhubala! Trishna's sister, agent" Madhu mutters looking at mukkund.

"What? You're her sister! Then where is she? & by the way I'm not ur agent, I had a deal with trishna that she will be Rk's dancing partner & in return Rk will marry her so that she can get Singapore citizenship & also she will get a share from the prize money" Mukkund shouted in exasperation.

"Sorry! My didu's boyfriend din't agree for this deal & in end moment he dint allow her to go to singapore but we badly need this money for my sister's marriage & for my chachi's treatment so I came in her place. Please don't send me back to India!! Please I'll do whatever my didu had promised to do" she said with teary eyes.

"U know dance" Mukkund angrily asked her.

She shakes her head in negation.

"Dammit!!" "Get the hell out of this place, NOW!" mukkund shouted at her. "Rk, u don't worry! Just give me a week I'll bring u a new dancing partner & later I'll handle with that bitch trishna" Mukkund said furiously glaring at madhu.

"Please! Please don't throw me out, I don't know anyone here & I can't go back to India... please help me! I'll do whatever u say?" madhu cryingly begged them.

"Rk, u don't want to hear anything from her, u just throw her out of ur place" Mukkund order but Rk remained still not knowing what to do. Then Mukkund went to the bedroom, collected her luggages & dragged madhu by holding her hand but Rk stopped Mukkund & released her from his hold.

"Mukkund, she will be my dancing partner & I'll train her. No need to find any new dancer for me, I'll handle everything." Rk said authoritatively.

"But Rk.. she knows nothing about dancing & u have only 3 months left for the competition & I know how important to win this competition is to u! What will u do with this useless girl?" Mukkund asked in disbelief.

"Mukkund! I said I'll handle it! RK said with finality.

"Okay! Fine!"


After mukkund left the house, Rk sat on the couch thinking whether the decision he took was right or not but somewhere deep in his heart he believed that this gonna be the best ever decision made in his life.

"Stop, crying" Rk ordered seeing madhu still crying silently with her face buried in her hands.

"I'm sorry, Master" madhu said whipping her tears with the back of her hand.

"Master?" he looked at her surprised.

"Yes! Master! U r gonna teach me dance so I'll call u master, if that's okay with u" Rk chuckles seeing her innocence & some where he feels that he could train her easily seeing her dedication to learn dancing.

"What's ur age?" Rk asked.

"18 yrs old" she replied.

"Is this ur true age or lying to me? U look very small to me" he asked doubtfully.

Are I'm looking older to her? YES, yu are 10 yrs older to her that's why she looks like a baby to you!! His subconscious snaps him.

"Yes, Master! I'm 18yrs old that's why I married u" she replied genuinely.

"Oh! Thanks heaven! Or else I need to face further problems for marrying a minor" Rk sighs heavily in relief. She smiles.

"Go! Sleep. We don't have much time so from tomorrow onwards I'll start teaching u dance from basic & go get some rest" Rk ordered her & she obliged.


Next day, Madhu woke up early in the morning, she got ready in a tight pant & shirt & she tied her hair to a high pony & stepped out of her room to see her master?!! She saw Rk was peacefully sleeping in couch but his face, hands & dress were filled with white paint then only she noticed foot prints painted on floor. She went near him, kneeling on floor next to his couch she slowly rubbed the paints off from his face. This slight action brought Rk wide awake from his sleep & he sat on the couch with a jerk not knowing what she was doing so close to him.

"um.. oh!! Paint!!" madhu point to his face & he rubbed with his paint filled hands which again spread more paint on his face, seeing this she immediately held his hand with her left hand & cleaned his face with her right hand & they shared a brief eye lock.

"Um... why u have painted footsteps on floor, Master" she questioned him to clarify her doubt.

"Madhu.. I'll teach u some basic step, then u'll be practicing alone following the footsteps by that time I'll go to my dancing center to teach for my students" Rk explained her. She nods. Then he asked her to warm up, by that he went to take his shower.


"Madhu... before starting I want ur word, are u sure with ur decision? In the process of learning dance u may hurt yourself physically, so are you ready for it? No back off, later!! Rk asked lil worried.

"No back off, Master, I promise" she swears pinching her throat skin. He smiled seeing her childish antics.

"Shall we start?" Rk asked her.

She nods her hear enthusiastically.

"Madhu... in dancing u need to keep 4 F's in mind.

1. Focus - "u need to focus properly!! I want u to maintain eye contact!! Just dancing is not important but u need to express it through ur eyes!! While dancing u need to consider me as ur lover & ur eyes should be filled with passion!! u should feel the music & love dancing & dance with ease & grace."

2. Flexibility - "u should keep ur body flexible like a rubber then only u wont brake ur bones while dancing"

3. Foot work - "foot work & hip moment are the key feature in dancing. You have a very sexy curves & I hope u'll shake it well" she gasps.

4. Fastness - "speed is very important!! U need to be fast but steady or else u might fall & break ur bones" he warned her "Global dancing stars" competition is very different. There is no rounds in it, only one round, around 30 couples/teams will participate, 10 team in one huge hall so totally 3 floors!! It's just hit out or get out!! Whichever team dance fast, steady & graceful for a long time will win the competition!! Whoever stops will get eliminated!!

Got it?"

"Yes, Master" she whispers nervously still registering the 4 F's in mind.

"Good"

"Initially I want u to practice in bare foot then u ought to get use to heels. Now watch my foot moments closely. Okay!"

She nods.

RK pulled her close by waist & kept one of her hand on his shoulder & clasping another hand with his, he started moving along with her with the BGM. She got hypnotized by his gray eyes & unknowing followed his footsteps in rhythm.

"Madhu... u r standing like a doll, it won't work!! Shake your hips baby" RK kept his hands on sides of her hips & she closed her eyes as his touch passed a chill current through her body.

"Madhu... open ur eyes... I left ur hips 5 minutes back" he said irately.

"Um... Master..!!" Madhu stammers with embarrassment.

"It happens Madhu. Don't get scared! Keep ur body loose! U can easily do it" he said encouragingly & gave her a huge plastic Ring! She looked at the hip ring curiously. "hands up" he orders her.

Then he puts the ring from top & held it near her hip "Now u will keep rotating ur hips, if u stop this ring will fall down on floor & if it falls I'll punish u! Understand??" she gulps & nods her head. Then she started rotating her hips as Rk instructed & he watched her carefully sitting on the couch.

"Madhu... I'm going for work!! u have ur lunch & practice on the painted foot prints then take some rest!! I'll see u in evening!! Be safe!!"

"Bye, Master" she said smilingly.

"Bye"


Madhu was practicing continuously & in evening Rk opened the door with his spare key thinking not to disturb Madhu as she will be sleeping but he was surprised to see her dancing closing her eyes. He stood near the door & closely scrutinized her moves. Suddenly she opened her eyes & stopped abruptly seeing Rk watching her dance.

"Did u take some rest?" she nods. "Stop lying, Madhu" he shouted & made her sat on the couch. He when to the kitchen & after few minutes he came out with a bowl of hot water & a sponge!!

"Show ur legs?" he ordered. He took her swelled foot in his hand & started giving hot massage.

Ah! It feels heavenly!!

"Madhu.. I know u are eager to learn dance but u can't do everything in one day! U need to hold some patience & calmness" he gently explained her.

"Sorry! Master" she murmurs.

"Don't be! I'm glad u are really interested in it & u danced well too! U are a quick learner, Madhu! I'm sure one day u'll make me proud" he said with a hint of smile.

"Yes, Master" she smiles.

"Come! Let's eat! No more practice for tonight! We ll start fresh from tomorrow" he said in a no-nonsense tone.

In one & half months, Madhu quickly grasped all the dancing tricks, steps & postures from her Master!! Now she dances like a professional dancer & complements with Rk's grace. In this short span of time, Master & his Doll become closer. They both started caring for each other! Madhu liked her Master right from the day he accepted her to teach dance & not to throw her out on the street but now she feels more than liking.

Am I in love with my Master? she questioned herself doubtfully. YES! You are head over heels in love with your Master!! Her subconscious quickly stops her salsa practice & clarifies her doubt!!

Yes! I love my Master with my heart & soul! I know even he loves me; I have seen his love for me in his eyes!! I'll let him know about my feeling!! I can't hide it from him any longer!!

"Madhu... what happened to u? why are u not focusing well today? Are you okay?" Rk asked irately yet worriedly seeing her not responding to his moves.

Tell him Madhu!! Tell u love him!! come on!! Her subconscious encourages her.

"What is it, Baby?" Rk coolly asked.

"Um.. Master! I .. I LOVE U" she nervously whispers & shuts her eyes in fear. After a while she slowly opened her eyes to see Rk staring at her but she couldn't read his expression.

"What?" Rk asked shocked after a beat

"I Love you, Master" she whispered. he remained still but he looked hurt.

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"Master! I said, I.." she was cut off by his words "No! Madhu! No! Please, don't say that to me, I don't love u & I don't want u to love me! We are just dancing partners, nothing else!!" his eyes looked red with pain & anger.

"Master, I just said what I feel for u but I dint beg u to accept my love! & yeah, don't say that u don't love me, I have seen ur love for me in ur eyes" she said with tears prickling from her eyes.

"I said u earlier itself while dancing we should dance like lovers & we should express our passion through our eyes & that doesn't means I'm in love with u so don't mistake it" He snaps.

"I know Master, u are very professional while dancing but now? Even now I could see the love at the same time pain in ur eyes which I don't know why?. I know u love me; u care for me; u had stayed awake & watched me sleep for a whole night; if I get hurt I could see the pain in u; u have guided me, guarded me & moulded me!! You love me, master & I love u! I'll always love u!" she declared with teary eyes.

"Baby, you are so young! I'm 10 yrs older to u! it's just infatuation nothing else! U have a long way to go, a bright future is waiting for u! u r a fine dance, u ll reach heights! He tried to reason her.

"Master, I'm a major & I got married to u; I don't give a damn about ur age & please don't insult my true love by saying it's just infatuation; yes! I do agree with u, I have a long way to go, a bright future is awaiting for me & I'll reach heights but only when u are with me & yeah! I'm a fine dancer, no doubt in that because u r my master" she said with pride. "I won't change my decision & I'll wait for u & ur love for my whole life" she stubbornly said & whipped her free flowing tears with the back of her hands & said "let's dance, Master" she took his hands & placed on her back & they started dancing but still Rk was registering what she had said to him.


"Madhu, are you okay?" Rk asked to madhu on the next day.

"Yes, Master" she smile. he nods.

"Madhu, today I'm taking u to a dancing academy where we ll practice in a huge hall since all these days we had practiced only in this small room"

"Okay, Master" she said brightly & Rk was surprised to see the usual enthusiasm on her face even after a heart break.


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"Hey! Darling, how are you? Missing me! I'm always ready to give company & sultan has no issue with that" dipali huskily whispers.

"Dipali, stop ur non-sense & leave us the way" RK barked.

"Who is she? Ur new dancing partner? Hmmm.. Looking pretty like a doll, but be careful RK someone may buy this doll" dipali said.

Rk pulled madhu close to his arms & placed a soft kiss on her forhead taking her by surprise, he turned to dipali & said "Yes! She is doll but she ll not sell herself like how u sold yourself to sultan for money" he walked with Madhu to the dancing hall leaving behind a furious dipali.

"Master, who is she?" madhu asked.

"A bitch" he said with gritted teeth. "don't think about her, let's focus on our dance" she nods.

"Sultan, I'm going home" dipali furiously said.

"what? But why? We have rehearsal" sultan said.

"I'm not in the mood to rehearse, u better do with ur assistant I'll join u in evening, I can't face RK" she said.

"RK? Is he here?" sultan asked.

"Yes! He is here with a new bitch; okay, bye" she kissed on sultan's cheeks & left the place.

"hmm.. RK & his new dancing partner!! Interesting!! Let's go & watch the show" he said to his assistant & went to the hall where Rk & Madhu were practicing.

"Wow!! She is looking pretty young, hot & sexy!! For sure Rk will win the "global dancing stars" title if he participate with this beauty but nah.. sultan will not let that happen moreover, I'm bored dancing with dipali... hmm... what can I do??" sultan stroked his chin thoughtfully

"The same what we did with dipali, like how we bought dipali 2 yrs ago before the competition we ll buy this chic now, boss" his assistant said smiling evily.

"Exactly! I want to meet her alone" sultan smirks.

"Baby! Where are you going?" Rk asked her

"Master, I'm going to the market to buy groceries"

"Go safe!" she nods smilingly.

After shopping the necessary thinks she was happily walking on the pavement thinking about Rk & his changed behavior, suddenly she heard a screeching sound of a car & she jumped a step back in shock.

"Hey sweetheart, I have seen u dancing with Rk in the hall yesterday, u were dancing so graciously & flawlessly!! Rk has trained you too well" Sultan appreciated.

"who are you? Do I know you? Any ways thank you for ur compliment" she muttered.

"I'm Sultan & I don't want ur silly thank you but YOU" sultan said. "I want you to be my dancing partner, I'll pay you how much money you want"

"I don't want your f**king money & I'll dance only with my Master, now move from my way" she growls.

"you don't know me well baby! If I wish anything then I ll get it by hook or by crook" He said evilly & pulled her hands to get her into the car. But she snatched her hands away from his clutch & slapped him hard on his face & started running from that place.

Sulthan chased her & hardly slapped her & she slammed down on the concrete floor with eyes full of tears. She shouted for help but he made her run & caught her on isolated place.

"So, u won't dance with me huh? He asked like a threat.

"No! Never! She replied firmly with tear stained eyes.

"Then u can't dance with ur master too! I'll not let him win the title!! It's only mine!! Mine!! He shouted like an animal & took a golf stick from his car & hit her hardly on her knees & kicked her on her rib with his foot. Her knees started bleeding & she screamed in pain!!


Rk was waiting for my Madhu in his balcony worrying that she has not returned after a long time. Suddenly a car stopped in front of his gate & they picked a partially conscious madhu & threw her out on the side walk. Rk was shocked to see madhu in such a condition & he rushed towards the car but the car went in full speed.

"Madhu... what happened to u?" he asked in a choked voice.

"Master..." she faintly smiled at him feeling safe in his arms & went unconscious. Then he took her in his arms & rushed to the hospital.


"Doctor! How is Madhu?" Rk asked with tear stained face.

"You are?" doctor asked.

"I'm her husband, Rishab" he replied.

"See, Mr.Rishab! your wife is alright! Her left knee got fractured & It will take 6 weeks time for the bones to get join. She has bruises on her rib but not fracture; her vital signs are good so no need to worry!" Doctor said.

After two days she got discharged from the hospital & he took her back home safely.


"Baby! I'm sorry! I'm so sorry! U are in this condition all because of me! Rk cried holding her hands. "I'll not leave that sultan! I'll kill that bas***d" Rk said with eyes full of fury & he stood up furiously to punish sultan for his deeds but madhu held his hands tightly & stopped him from moving.

"Master, please don't leave. I'm scared" she said with fear.

"No, baby no! I'm not leaving u! don't be scared, u are safe! I'm with u but I won't leave that f**ker" He angrily whispers.

"Why Madhu? Why? You could have accepted to dance with him! Seeing u dance with him is better than seeing u in this situation" RK sobs

"How could u say this to me, Master? I'll die but I'll never dance with that monster, your words are aching me more than my physical pain" she said with silent tears rolling on her cheeks

"I'm sorry Madhu! I can't see u in pain! It kills me" he said holding her hands & squeezing it.

"Why you can't see me in pain, Master" she asked with tears

"Because I LOVE YOU!! LOVE U!!" he confessed his love. Madhu brightly smiles with extreme joy & pulled RK who was sitting on the edge of her bed & hugged him tightly.

"I love you too, master" she whispered in his ears & showered him with kisses. Then he planted soft feathery kisses her on forehead, on her eyes, then on her cheeks sucking her tears, then he took her lips in his & kissed passionately showing all his love for her & she kissed him back with equal vigor.


"I know you love me & you too know that then why did u take so long to confess, Master" she asked.

"Because I was scared to love, Madhu" he replied.

"Scared?"

"Yes! That day you asked me about dipali, u remember?" she nods.

"I loved her truly but two years ago she betrayed me & joined hands with that f**ker sultan for money & she danced with him as his dancing partner & won the title too & I was left totally devastated" he said.

"so u were scared to love me that I'll also ditch u like dipali & go with someone for money? She asked in disbelief & he looked her regretfully. "I had promised you that I'll never leave but then also u dint trust me, master!" she asked hurtfully.

"Sorry, Madhu! I was not ready to face another heart break that's why I rejected u when u proposed me" Rk said in a regretful tone.

"You dint participate in the competition?" madhu asked to change the topic not able to see his pain.

"No, I trained a new girl in one month time & we participate, even we were very close to win the contest but sultan had set some men as dancers & they dashed us down on the dancing floor so we lost it"

"Okay! No worries. Master! This time we ll show the real power of dance" Madhu said confidently.

"What? Are you mad? Your leg is fractured & doctor said it ll take 6 weeks time to cure & the competition is in 3 weeks then how come you'll dance" Rk asked in a serious tone.

"Then will find a new dancing partner & participate in the contest?" Madhu asked hopefully.

"No! when you are not ready to dance with anyone then I'm not ready for it too". "we are not participating in the contest, madhu" Rk said.

"Master, please! Train me! We need to participate in it! we can't easily accept our defeat! You said u want to kill sultan, then we ll kill him on the dance floor & we ll teach him a life time lesson" she said in full spirit.

"Baby! Try to understand! He is very dangerous! He ll do anything to win the title! I can't risk your life! You are more than anything to me" RK sincerely said.

"But winning the title is your dream, Master". "Please! Master! I want to dance with you & I'll dance with you & we ll win the title! Believe me, please!" she begged him.

"U are so stubborn, Madhu. Okay! Give me a day time, I'll think what to do".

"Master.."

"No more discussion, Madhu! U need rest so sleep" he said & pulled the quilt for her.

"Master, sleep with me, please!" she pleaded & he agreed. She happily pushed the pillow wall down & snuggled close to him & he made her lay on his chest & hugged her protectively & kissed her on her temple & they drifted to a peaceful sleep.


"Madhu, this is for u" RK gave her two gift rapped boxes.

"Master, what's in it?" Madhu smilingly asked.

"Open it" he gently ordered her & she quickly unwrapped the 1st box.

"Dress" she ask surprised.

"it's called tu - tu, your dancing dress, it's a very short stiff black skirt (with joint white top) made of many layers of material that sticks out from the waist" Rk said her about the dress.

"It's beautiful" Madhu said.

"it will be more beautiful when my doll wears it" he said & peck a kiss on her lips & she shyly smiles.

"Master, so we are gonna dance?" Madhu asked in surprise.

"Yes! We are gonna participate" Rk confirmed her. "Open the other gift"

"Shoes" she looked quizzically.

"Yes! Roller shoes! Madhu with this rolling shoes u can easily dance & ur leg will not pain much because u'll not be walking & it will easy for me to handle u" Rk briefed about the shoes & his dancing plan. "Baby! Will u make it" he asked worried.

"Of course, Master! U r there with me then why should I worry!" she lovingly kissed on his cheeks.

"Haan.. I have registered our name for the contest & our slot number is 9 & that sultan is no. 6 so he will be in our hall only & we should be very careful this time" Rk warned her.

"That'd actually nice, Master! Let him see our win & let us see his defeat!" she said confidently.

"And our team name is "Rishbala"! do u like it" Rk asked hopefully.

"I love it" she smiles. "what was ur team name, last time?" she asked curiously.

"D-lover" RK casually replied.

"D for Dipali?" Madhu teasingly asked him.

"D stands for Dance! Dance - lover" He snaps. "No one as the right to add their name with me other than YOU"


For the few days Rk dint allow madhu to dance but asked her to watch him dance & he explained her with detailed pictures & charts. He even re-choreographed for madhu's convenience. After a week when Madhu was quite able to stand on her feet, they both started practicing. Initially madhu find it difficult to dance in rolling shoes & with her aching knee but she was determinant to give her best & make her Master proud.


On the day of competition

Madhu got ready in her Tu-tu & Rk got dressed in black pant, white shiny shirt & a bow tie. "Madhu... just keep one thing in mind, nothing is more important to me than YOU so if u find it difficult to dance then we will stop on that instant"

"Yes! Master" she said but she was not ready to give up whatever may come or go & she wanted to dance till the end.

"Madhu! U r a fine, strong, elegant, graceful, beautiful & very potential dancer! U are my best ever student" "I'm glad to teach u dancing" he said & kissed her lips & she kissed him back with overwhelming joy. "let's do it"


"Oh! You little bitch! You are here to dance with ur fractured leg hun? Not bad!! Will you last for atleast 3 minutes? I guess it's impossible!!" Sultan faked pity & smirked. Rk was about to hit him but madhu came in between them & controlled Rk from doing anything wrong. Rk murderously glared at sultan & dipali & went to the stage with madhu.

Welcome you to the "Global Dancing Stars" Competition, 2014!!

We have 30 talented contestants to rock the floor tonight!!

The most awaited dancing contest of the year is gonna begin in few seconds!! A host said on the mike.

(All the light went off on the sides of the gallery & only focused on the huge dancing stage surrounded with multiple camera's)


"I'm nervous, Master" she murmurs.

"Baby! Don't be nervous!! I'm here with u!! Just keep dancing!! Good luck!! Rk whispered & pecked on her lips. She smiles in reply.


(Rk - madhu & sultan - dipali in floor 1)

Let the countdown begins!! 5...4...3...2...1...here we go...

(Timer - 00:00:01) (3 floors & 10 couple in each floor) song started playing & all the couples in each floor started dancing!!


The sun in her hair

The tropical hymn

The smell of the sea

With her next to me

She's got the touch that I ache for so much

My muchachita

(Timer - 00:09:53) (twelve contestant eliminated)

It's more than her eyes

More than her voice

More than her smile

That leaves you no choice

Straight from the pain yes of love

She was born Margarita

(Timer - 00:16:47) ( floor 3 washed out & only 5 team in floor 1 (including rishbala & sultan team) & 4 team in floor 2 on stage)

And if I could get back to that dream

I know she'll be there

Waiting for me Margarita

(Timer - 00:22:31) (floor 2 washed out & only three contestans left out in floor 1- team rishbala, sultanrocker & tulips)

In my dreams we are together

And our love goes on forever

When I awake, I'm not there

Mi Margarita

(Timer - 00:29:10) (floor 1 - team rishbala & sultanrocker on dancing stage)

I will search until I'll find you

And the roses will remind you

And I will wake inside the dream

(Margarita salsa song lyrics)

All the audience where watching the show sitting on the edge of their seat & biting nails, curious to know which team will win the prestigious title.

Rk- madhu & sultan - dipali were continuously swaying, twirling, turning & both the team maintained speed & steps!!

Madhu knees started bleeding & RK noticed it & was about to stop dancing not able to see her bleeding legs but she shook her heads & pleaded him with her eyes not to stop & they continued to dance covering the middle stage. Sultan intentionally neared rishbala knowing full well that madhu's leg is bleeding & one slight dash will collapse them on floor!!

Rk was quite aware of his evil intension & he kept madhu close to him. suddenly sultan swayed dipali to hit Madhu's back but Rk very efficiently held one hand on madhu's hip & other on her right uninjured leg & lifted her high & she started waving her hands gracefully towards the audience & all started applauding. In this sudden action sultan lost his hold on dipali & she landed flat on the dance floor breaking her legs. Sultan stood on the floor watching Rk-madhu still dancing on the floor.

(timer - 00:33:33) (Bong) (1st couple to dance for the maximum time & broke the old record of 31mins 12 sec & created a new record)


Madhu snakes her hands around RK's neck & slides side ways lifting her left leg & RK bends her holding her firmly on her waist (RK pose) they kept staring each other eyes passionately & breathe heavily. Then they stood properly & Rk hopped her up to meet her lips & kissed her passionately & she kissed him back fervently & the crowd applauded for this lovely couple.


The most prestigious "Global dancing stars", 2014 title & a cheque of 50000 Singapore Dollar goes to the most talented dancing couple Rishbala.

RK & Madhu collected the trophy & cheque from the judge.

Rk kissed madhu on her cheeks & waving hands to the audience they left the stage.

Rk & Madhu were going out of the hall when sultan stopped then & RK angrily slapped on his face & was strangling his neck but Madhu stopped him as everyone was watching them.


"Rk! I'm sorry for what all I did to u & to ur dancing partner!! I feel ashamed of myself!! U are the deserving one to hold the title" sultan said regretfully & turning towards madhu he said "I knew very well if u dance along with RK then surely u guys will win the title that's why I forced u to dance for me but u dared me so I harmed u but still u danced with ur bleeding legs & won the title too!! I said u won't be able to dance for 3 minutes but u continuously danced for 33 minutes, 33 second & u guys proved me wrong!! I'm so proud of u!! u have got the best trainer!! I'm sure I don't deserve ur forgiveness but still sorry" Rk hold Madhu close to his arms & furiously glared at sultan not ready to forgive him for what he did to madhu & Madhu didn't tell anything to sultan but just let a polite smile.


Rk opened a champion bottle & poured two flute of white wine & handed one to madhu & said "Cheer to our victory" they both clink the glass & drank the wine happily.

"Madhu.. show ur legs!! I'll clean ur wound!! He said & started cleaning her wounds & applied medicine on it.

"Madhu!! U made me proud!! U made my dream come true!! I'm the happiest man in the world!! He hugged her tight to control his joy.

"We will go to India & give the money which your family needed & we will get married with your families blessing"

"But Master, we are already married?" she asked.

"Oh! That fake marriage huh? I don't consider that has a marriage!! That time u dint mean anything to me but now u mean the world to me! he said with heart full of love. "moreover we missed our suhaag raat that time & we will rectify the mistake by getting married once again" he winks.

"I'm ready" Madhu shyly blushes.

"what for? Suhaag raat?" Rk teased her.

"Both for marriage & SR" Madhu blushed & RK chucked. "Always ready for challenges hun?" "So are you ready for another challenge?" rk asked/

"What challenge?" Madhu asked.

"We are gonna participate in another international dance competition which is gonna take place in another 6 months & we are going to London for that competition! So are u ready for it" Rk asked smilingly.

"Of course, Master! I'm always ready to do anything & everything for u!! she launched herself on his embrace & kissed him hard & in between their lips she whispered "I love u, Master" & he kissed her once again with all his love & replied "I love you too, MY DANCING DOLL"

- Sudha

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It was going too lengthy so I rushed up in the end!! So sorry!!😳

Hope you all liked the story!!😛

Please do hit the like button & comment ur views!!😳

Love you.😊


p.s this story is inspired from a korean movie "innocent steps" But i just took d plot & Changed remaining things & Wrote it in my own way. Hope u all liked it..

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay I'm the first person to comment
Awesome OS loved it
Do write more 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Freaking Awesome OS Sudha Di!Thanks fr pm!Pls do write more on RISHBALA & pm Me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Beautiful yaar... like button pe zang laga hai subah se. But everyone including you are amazing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
very nice OS. It was sweet.

But Sultan should have been arrested!!!
Edited by 4ever4love - 11 years ago
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#7
woww...i love dance and love to dance..this kinda touched my heart..lovely OS..👏👏👏
Keep it up and THANK YOU 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its really a good one , i liked a lot, please do write more on Rishbala OS n pm me. 👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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brilliant excellent
fantastic wonderful
i am just speechless
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it's a lovely story dear..
ttally new concept...i loved it..
keep it up..

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