Rishabala Three Shots: Bas Haq Hai Ek Mera: Part 3 on Page 26 (24/07) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I read your story on fb but has to come here for comment because I have a lengthy comment.

Here it goes.

First I was missing VD in such a psycho maniac role... 😆 🤣 It reminded of typical RKism infect it was double and plus their tree spot in the college reminded me of his previous show he and Pia used to meet in such only place.

Yes he is total freak out poora pagal hai he needs doctor ASAP in my opinion. 😉 😆

"Oh... he just got in to take a shower." Mohan replies.

"Oh!" Malik says disappointed and then noticing a photo on the wall, he asks, "Is that Mr. Kundra?"

"Yes."

"Ah... now Madhu you know who to go to if you have any trouble." Malik tells her pointing at the photo.



After reading above line I instantly said gayi budffalo mineral water mien... I suspected something is wrong...

Then Dipali she is sweet unlike her uptil now... who will not be sweet by the way when we have phsyco Raja.

I will say Raja in Hungama movie style - wo pagal nahin hai bas uska dimag kharab hai. 🤣

I love his time pass maniac style and tactics but man it is troublesome for Madhu. I wish sometimes Madhu push him up and shout at him - He don't owes her.

As much I rejoiced RK's moment I felt bad for Madhu too specially for her notes. I was very studios in college so felt for her notes very much.

Well Madhu is not habitat to RK's tactics...

Don't know it is right to say or not but has to say I can see Raja too sometimes in RK only sometimes or Raja is no for me (not liking Raja much.)

Ha ha Madhu is sure psycho to fall in love but I gave her cortesy instead of psycho I felt her heart and body started forming places for him with his antics.

About rape... I don't depends how you handle it... the way cvs handled in real serial I hate it and can't see story of rape victim and rapist... it will be ok for me if he half forced on her but do not actually went lower consuming her in force... if he forces her entirely that will make him maniac of high level then don't know how a girl can fall for him.

But it entirely depends how you handle and I trust you ... whatever you will write I know you will make it up like a magic.

Thanks a lot for such a maniac ride and big hug. Keep it up. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just now after commenting entirely I realised I ended up writing Raja him many places don't know why Raja stuck me and see even you thinking of r*** 🤣 Why I don't know but can see Raja in RK many places here sigh I hate Raja then why he stuck me here... chalo 🤪 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Love love the story lazy... totally love this psycho RK... amazing concept. 👏 i read it twice already. it was so amazing. RKs possessiveness towards madhu and madhu acting like a little lamb and then come out of her shell a bit. and i love their silent moments. its like RK kept her with him only bcoz she wanted her beside him. thats it. she didnt need to do anything but just be by side with him. i really loved it. waiting for part 2 eagerly...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part..
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
count me in for that Rapist story...and this 1 i simply loved this psyco RK
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Posted: 11 years ago
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you are an excellent writer dear...i like this rk & plz let him to realise his mistake...cant wait for long...plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
loved it very much...nd psycho RK is kinda cute
thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome and intresting story.😊 Please update the second part soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow lazy loved loved loved this psycho RK 😛😉😊

hehe he is really a crack head ... RK n "Psychopanthi" is a deadly combination 😳

Eagerly waiting for next part and ofcourse for your OS also :)


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome lazy.. I totally loved this crazy Rishu. He is a cute and interesting psycho 😆

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