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*snap**snap*

"Hey you, you better get out of my house and then you can dream. As I told you earlier I don't know you so I can't let you in, moreover even dad's not home." This time irritation was clearly visible on her face.

"Hey please, let me in. It's raining so heavily out and my damn car broke down. There's no single place nearby here I can stay so please let me in. " Rk played along.

Madhu saw him literally begging her to let him in."Poor guy! He is a superstar but still he speaks so politely, moreover it's raining so heavily outside, what should I do now , even dad's not home ..." she was thinking deeply when Trishna came running down the stairs.

"Di, who's at the door?"she screamed .

Suddenly she saw Rk completely drenched in the rain standing at their door. She gaped at him as if she saw a monster standing there! She slowly pinched herself to make sure she isn't dreaming.

"Oww! It hurts", she said rubbing her hand.

"She seems to be my fan. It won't be hard to take her on my side." Rk thought.

Just then he was taken out of his trance due to Trishna's voice.

"R...R ...Rk ...You ..you here ..."

" Uh ...yeah ..Actually as you can see that it's raining outside and my car is broken, plus there's no hotel nearby where I can stay. But your dear sister isn't letting me in." Rk said trying to act all sad.

Meanwhile Madhu was watching both of them intently.

"He does seem good. But then why does he have a BAD BOY IMAGE in the industry? I don't think I should let him in, especially after what the media has to say about him." Madhu thought to herself, just when she was jerked out from her thoughts by Trishna.

"Di, please let him in na! See it's raining so badly outside. And how can we just let him stay outside. What if he falls ill? Please di. Only for me. You know na how crazy I am for him. Please na di." Trishna makes a puppy dog face which she knew Madhu could never resist.

Madhu angrily glares at her. She had decided that this time she won't get affected by trishna's talks.

"Trish...you know very well that dad isn't home. And if he finds out that we have let somebody in without his permission he will be very upset"Madhu said with a straight face.

"But di he is not somebody ...he is Rk ...everyone knows him and do you know if I tell my friends that Rk the superstar is staying at my home, I will be so popular in college and that ria..."

"Stop it Trish ...this is not a joke. I don't care if he is Rk or anyone else. None of us knows him personally so he is not coming in and that's final. Got it? " Madhu almost shouted at Trishna.

Rk was looking intently at both of them when Trishna left from there crying.

Madhu looked at him and said, "What are you waiting for? I hope you aren't thinking that I m letting you in."

Rk knew that if he wanted to get entry in the house he has to act polite.

"Why did u talk like that to her? She was such a sweet heart. And you are acting as if I am asking for your damn life, I am just asking for a place to stay for. And it's just a day. Its noon now, and I will leave your house as soon as the storm stops."

"I.AM.NOT.LETTING.YOU.IN" Madhu said quite irritated now. Saying this she closed the door on his face.

"What the!" Rk started knocking the door. Madhu went inside ignoring the loud noises.

"Dammit. How can she do this to me? I am RK. How dare she slam the door shut on my face? Who the hell is she too do that? Madhubala, you are gonna pay for this." Rk shouted in anger.''

It was evening now. And Rk was sitting inside his car. After 14 years when he was finally outside his dad'd murderer's house how could he go back now? He couldn't lose hope now.

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Rk's POV

God dammit! This Madhubala, I am gonna kill her, because of her I am sitting here right now.

Suddenly my phone rang. I saw the caller id. And as guessed it was none other than Bittuji. I picked up the phone.

"Haan Bittuji."

"Chief...chief ...are you fine chief? Did you meet him? Do..."

"Stop Bittuji..I am in no mood to answer your questions right now."

"But chief ..it's getting late chief and it's raining so heavily...I think you should come back home. We can search for that that man tomorrow .Even I will accompany you chief. But please come back home now chief"

"Stop it Bittuji. I am not coming home now. That Madhubala ...I am gonna kill her . She slammed the door on MY face Bittuji. Can you believe it? That woman's got a nerve Bittuji that she didn't let me in. And it's gonna be fun to play along with her. It's gonna be fun to see that confidence, that attitude vanish."

"Wha...what are you talking about chief? You are there to take revenge from that Shamsher Malik right? Then why are you dragging that innocent girl in between? Please chief don.."

"Shut up Bittuji. You are no one to tell me what I should do and what not. You aren't hired for that. You are hired just to follow my orders. Do you understand? And it's none of your concern if I use that girl to destroy that man. And what if I use her huh? After all she is that murderer's daughter. I bet she is just like him. And also you said that she is the closest one after his wife's death, so if I break her, it will be him who will get hurt. After all she is his darling daughter" saying so I disconnected the call and gave a sadistic grin. I turn on the radio.

Radio : The weather out is appalling. I suggest you to stay indoors. I repeat, STAY INDOORS, it isn't safe to go out in the rain. A storm will be hitting us anytime now.

"Damn! Why the hell is this happening with me today?"I banged my fist forcefully on the steering wheel. I looked out of the window to see that it was raining excessively. Damn! As there was nothing to do, I turned on the radio and started listening to songs.

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Trishna's POv

How could she do this to me? She knows how much I love him. I am so crazy for him and also if my friends come to know about this, that Rk is staying here, then I will be the most popular girl in the college. Leave my friends, if that Ria comes to know about this then she will burn with covetousness. And then I will tell her who I am "she grinned foolishly thinking about that.

What should I do now? Hmm...he must have even gone by now. I don't even have a chance now. He just wanted to stay here for one damn day. And even dad isn't at home today, he will come back only till tomorrow evening. He won't even come to know about this. Then why can't she just let him in for a night?

(Suddenly she hears a loud sound from down)

What...what's that noise? Is it coming from down? I think I should check...what if it's a thief or someone? No, why will the thief risk his own life and come out to steal in such a storm. Anyways, I think I should check.

I checked through the window when I saw a car there. Whose car must be that? Let me just go and check. But what if di sees me going out in the rain? Hmm...she won't notice me, I will quickly sneak out.

I went towards her room and saw that she was reading a book. Hmm..she is reading, so I can quickly go and come. She won't even understand. I took an umbrella and quickly sneaked out through the main door. The car was still there. I wonder who it was. The windows of the car were closed. I couldn't get a complete view of the person inside the car as the windows had become misty due to cold atmosphere out. I knocked on the window. The window slowly opened and I was shocked to see the man in the car. Rk?

Poor guy! He has to stay here in his car because of di. I think I should ask him to come inside. Madhu di would be still reading. She won't even understand if I take Rk in. Yes, I will ask him to come inside.

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Edited by shriyakadge - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ahaann yay me first 😉 awesome update shriya tfs for pm 🤗
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Amazing Chapter!!! I like your style of writing!
P.S.- Shriya, when you pm, please send the accurate page rather than the first page. For now it is OK as pages are less but when the thread will increase, it will be little difficult to go to the particular Chapter Page... I hope you don't mind it!!!

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