Rishbala FF- Madhubala EIEJ- Reborn Part 25 on Pg 110(26/03/16)

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Seema

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

lovely update.rk n madhu r really made fr each other.watever happens dey still care fr each other,nw dey r out of jungle.looking forward to next update.thanx fr pm

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Mrs.Somerhalder

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

Lovely update Rimi!!! Thanks a lot for the PM!! Rishbala are coming close again!!! Loved the way you wrote RK's thoughts and feelings!!

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: madhurish
do i need to say again how much i love this story?? god! i'm crazy abt this story!⭐️ Even me...after all for me its my most appreciated work...😊😃
seriously girl! what & all they missed in serial u r showing it here!😛 thnk u!
Rk was left with little guilt in serial but here he is really feeling bad for what he did to madhu!😳
u r nicely using the serial scenes here & making a perfect blend! i loved the studio nite scene were Rk will clean her wounds & same here!!👏 & also laying madhu on his arms & sleeping with lil peace was lovely! 😳 It was one of my most fav scenes di...😃
when Rk reminded abt the village nite i thought what they left unfinished on that nite will finish it here but nah..😆 It will take time di...abhi to bas shuruwat hai...😉
oh my! now Rk is confident that madhu will never ever love anyne other than him huh? then bring raj close to madhu make rk burn in jealousy & make him think what he thought abt madhu was wrg & show him that madhu has moved on!!😉 but the fact is madhu has never moved on! still she is loving him madly & getting herself hurt more! poor girl! i wish Rk realises his mistake & give a chance to both madhu & himself!😳 RK will realise his mistake and make it up in his own way..😉😉
great! madhu escaped from this vampire getting her blood sucked!😆 so u were watching PKYEK & using it here! good! by this u r not only relishing madhubala but also PKYEK to us! lovely!😛 Seriuosly I could not get enough of that show...I completed the whole series yesterday...😃😃

our soul connection is lil weak so i'm in 4th spot but better when compred to last time! will try hard to come 1st choti!😃 Best of luck badi behna...👍🏼 😃
thanks for the pm!😳 Welcm and thanks for such a longgg comment!!!😃

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: shruthi14
Very nice update. Good that rk is feeling guilty for his doing. Dil ki dressing was a heart touching dialogue .i miss my rishbala now

Thanks dear...dnt miss Rishbala they r coming back very soon...😃

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: karamukku
I read all the chapters in one go... Super writing... Superb dialogues of both RK and Madhu ⭐️

Thanks dear...kep reading..😃

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: NehaVdian
aww such a beautiful update rimu Thanks di!!
i m glad rks inner rishabh is waking up 😃
n he is realizing his faults too
i m sure he will correct everything in his own ways That he will definiteky do...
n yup rk is known for his attitude n dialouges n u r showing him perfect Thank u!!
i m loving it
waiting for next part Will try to update today/tomorrow...
plss update kurbaan hua too

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: kg15
Firstly, Congrats for becoming a Senior Member, Rimu! 😆 Thank you Kavu...u know no one wished me...*pouts*😆😆
But ye kya yaar, where is the Jungle Mein Mangal thing??? I was waiting for that... 🤣 I guess you got it what I meant... 🤣 I tried hard to write but then I thought mangal will not happen between two enemies...for that they have to be ishqi-mushqi...u know what I mean...😳😆
Still I loved this part... It was cute yet emotional at many points... And your dialogues add charm to it...
Now waiting how will this tiff turn into Love??! It will take time..as of now Madhu will be separating from RK soon...
Continue Soon.

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: PRATHA1
Awesome update Rimjhim!
As usual your dialogues are superb "ulta tumse hi dar jate, daravne bhoot bunglaw mein darvni chudail, tum apni agli film yehi karna, bohot hit hogi"😆
Now RK feel bad for hurting madhu! waiting for the next update!

Thank you dear...will try to update within today or tomorrow...😊

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Rimjhim Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hi readers I am back with another update...

Part 17

The days were passing swiftly. The film was on the verge of completion. One day Madhu was sitting upset in her room. As Radhajee was passing by she saw her and asked, "Kya hua Madhu tu itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi hai???"

M- Maa kal shooting mein ek intimate scene karna hai mujhe...aur aap to jaanti hi ho ki main bilkul bhi bold acting karna pasand nahi karti...upar se mere opposite RK hai...main nahi jaanti maa main apne zasbaado ko kaise control karungi...

R- Yeh baat hai??? Madhu, yeh duniya hi aaisi hai, yaha pe tumhare personal ya private mamle kissi ke liye kuch nahi hai...yaha pe jo hai woh publicly sabke saamne aayega. Beta Madhubala RK se nafrat karti hai par Anamika aur Karan to ek doosre se mohabbat karte hai na?? Yaha tu Madhu nahi, Anamika hai aur tera kaam yehi hai ki tu Karan ko apna pyaar jataye...RK ko nahi, Samjhi???

Madhu kissed Radha's hand and said, "Maa agar aap nahi hoti to pata nahi main kaise yeh sab karti..."

The next day Madhu confidently reported on the sets. She looked stunning in a black see through saree. As she was coming near RK, who was looking smoking hot in a black coat, Deepali stopped her and asked, "To Madhubala, Karan aur Anamika ke iss ishq ko dekhke tumhe apni iss bekar si zindagi mein kuch khaas pal yaad nahi aa rahe???"

M- Nahi Deepali...maine apni khaas zindagi ke unn bekar palon ko humesha humesha ke liye peeche chor diya hai aur unhe apne dil se nikal diya hai. Abhi mujhe sirf apna kirdaar dikh raha hai aur kuch nahi...

She stood near RK for the shots. They got ready as they were ordered.

"LIGHTS!!!" "CAMERA!!!" "ACTION!!!"

(I am not describing the sequence here its just like the 'aaja rasiya' dance shown in the show...)"

Madhu slowly felt RK's lips on hers. Memories of the nights at the farmhouse came flashing in front of her eyes. Without breaking the kiss RK took her to the bed. He slowly placed her and came on top of her.

"CUT!!!!"

The lights were flashed. RK moved away from Madhu. She opened her eyes and draped her saree around her back. Avoiding everyone she went to her vanity. She could not resist RK's kiss, it was a passionate one, as if he exercised his right over her. She splashed water on herself to calm herself.

Here RK too felt restless, he never knew that Madhu would have such a great effect on him. He felt as if he was taking in all her pain through the kiss. He felt his pounding heart, he never knw that it still existed.

He calmed and prepared for the next shot.

Madhu sat on her vanity with a cup of coffee. Thankfully she had no scenes right now. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. Madhu opened with a frown, who could be here right now? As she opened the door, Trishna almost jumped and hugged her, "GLYCERINE!!!!"

Madhu was very happy, due to the busy schedules she did not get enough time to spend with her family so meeting with Trishna really made her happy. She hugged her back and made her sit inside. As Trishna was going to tell something, Madhu's phone rang. Madhu signalled her to wait and received the call, "Hello??"

Caller- Hello am I talking to Mrs. Madhubala Kundra??

M- Yes??

C- Hello Madhubalajee, Main Steve Mehta hoon, one of the producers of bollywood and aapke supervisor, Mr. Mehul Chopra ke bohot acche dost...

M- Oh..so How can I help yo Mr. Mehta??

SM- You know Madhubalajee, I have watched some of the clippings of your film, Mehul has shown and I must say, mujhe aapki acting bohot acchi lagi, you have an awesome screen presence too..

M- Ahh...thank you Mr. Mehta...

SM- Madhubalajee, lets not beat aorund the bush and straight come to the point, that is ki main aapko ek contract offer karna chahta hoon...

M- Contract??

SM- Jee, a three film contract with Mehta films, main chahta hoon ki aap mere teen filmon ki heroine bane...are you interested..

M-(after a while) Mr. Mehta, I am still working in my first film...

SM- no probs, aapki shooting khatam hote hi we can talk about it..

M- Mr. Mehta, I am sorry but main..main ek break lena chahti hoon industry se after this film...so if you don't mind, can I talk to you about this later on??

SM- Okay...agar kabhi aap apna faisla badalna chaho and iss contract ko apply karna chaho then you can me in this number...have a nice day...

M- Same to you Mr. Mehta...

As she disconnected Trishna furiously asked her, "Madhu tune offer decline kyun kar diya????"

M- Didu, main aur kaam nahi karna chahti...

T- Madhu tu pagal ho gayi hai kya?? Iss industry mein logon ko kaam milta nahi hai aur tujhe waha pe teen filmon ka offer aaya tha...aur tu keh rahi hai ki tu break lena chahti hai?? Are you out of your mind????

M- Didu please...Tu jaanti hai ki main kabhi bhi heroine nahi banna chahti thi aur nahi ab banna chahti hoon...

T- Okay fine...

RK Mansion

RK sat on the armchair and thought deeply, it was two weeks more for the film to complete, and after that all his relationships with Madhu will end. His thoughts were interuptted by Deepali, "hero, breaking news suna hai???"

RK- Tum maa bannewali ho?? Ya tum ghar chorke jaa rahi ho???

D- Come on hero...mera dil aaisa to nahi ki main tumhe chorke chali jaoon??? Anyways the news is this ki tumhari biwi...oops...aadhi adhoori biwi ko teen filmon ka offer mila hai...

RK- To???

D- Don't you understand RK?? Teen film ka offer aa chuka hai isse lekar ho gaye chaar...Madhubala ka carreer to set ho gaya...

RK- Haan to???

D- Come on RK...tum yeh socho ki tumhare naam se woh chawl mein rehnewali top heroine ban jayegi...tumse competition karegi...

RK- Deepali, do baatein...pehla ki RK ka competition RK khud hai...kissi ki bhi aukad nahi hai ki woh RK se competition kare samjhi??...aur dusra ki agar meri biwi mere naam se jaani jaaye aur mere wajah se famous ho jaaye, to mujhe usmein bura nahi balki proud feel karna chahiye ki main ek top rated actress ka mentor hoon...

D- Par agar woh tumhe apna mentor kahe tab na...

RK- Deepali chand ko yeh sabse kehna nahi parta ki mujhe dekho, sab apne aap usse dekhte hai...theek ussi tarah Madhu de ya na de, uska mentor to main hi rahoonga kyuni woh meri find thi... aur haan woh Madhubala Rishabh Kundra, Deepali Sikander Bhatia nahi...Meri Madhu apne carreer ka credit mujhe hi degi got it??? Now get lost...

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