I actually went back to reread the first 3 parts and then read part 4 and I am glad I did.
Rereading the other parts made me remember the crazy and sometimes confusing moments. But now I can say that the story flowed so much better for me. And I was able to connect more with the characters.
First of all, I noticed RK and Madhu have really matured in these two years! Yes they are still keeping their secret going but you can feel and see the deep love and connection they have with each other.
The first part of this chapter was so funny with Mohan, Malik and the gang. The Kundras are perfect together. I loved how you have Madhu hiding behind RK, and Mohan explaining the colour code and how even he fears Malik. Priceless.
Miscarriage. Really sad but I liked how you depicted this idea differently. Usually we see the female's point of view in these cases but you showed a different perspective. Not only did you show RK's fear, guilt and helplessness, but you added Malik's too.
Brilliant idea.
And to top it off, you added more by Malik acknowledging the difference between his experience and RK's due to difference of age. It was a perspective that I think Malik has ignored till now.
RK taking care of Madhu and Madhu knowing something was wrong was so touching. They took care of each other. Their relationship is so much stronger.
The truth and everyone's reaction. RK was right, now you can see who your friends really are.
I liked how Madhu stood strong. But really that name calling was nasty! Some perspectives are twisted. madhu rocks!
RK threatening Ria and Dips: loved it. RK is my hero.
Lovely ending and yes it ended on a crazy note: sending your parents to the honeymoon suite! 😆
