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hello buddies this my first ts based on rishbala...this is story is based on real life incident...if am wrong somewhere pls excuse me...leave your comments so that i can

improve my writing .
"unexpected love"


The college bell rang while madhu hurriedly rushes to her class room .she prayed to god ...today also am late "bagavan pls safe me from that irritating idiot"😲 she prayed to god

silently outside her class room fa two seconds ...and she was about to ask "excuse me sir" before that her irritating idiot (professor rithwik) spoke with a stern voice that "i wont

excuse yo ...stay outside or go away"...😑.his voice was so loud and filled with full of anger...for a second madhu saw him as devil with red horns... he was spraying at his full 😈

speed...again he shouted "don't waste my time ,did u understand"...his angry voice brought madhu into her senses, she was about to leave but unable to since she need her

attendence . as soon as he turned to the board...she sighed her class representative dipali(her close frd) to put attendence for her and started walking towards the canteen

...suddenly she saw a guy running very fast while he was about to cross her she slipped aside and bid way to him...he ran swiftly without noticing her while she was about

continue her walk ...her books on her hand faced a heavy dash by a guy who was chasing the before one...madhu lost her balance and her books feel down...the guy stopped

at few steps away from her while madhu shouted "where are your eyes gone?? are yo blind??"😑😲 ...she saw him cuming towards her ...she made herself ready for a fight...she started

scolding him continously for 5 minutes while he kept on looking into her eyes deeply .😑...when madhu stopped for a breath ...there was a silence between them for a sec then

he humbly mumbled as "wow wat a pretty ...figure no 12" madhu was unable to get him she started shouting again ..."its your mistake y did yo mumble now??"...😲she showed

her entire frustation and anger over her proffesor towards him...he finally manged to speak" you are extremely beautiful" as soon as he uttred those words madhu was about to

crush him for his words on seeing madhu's temper he started to blabber"i...mean...am beautiful...am saree...i am so so sorry... i mean sorry ...sorry while he kept on

blabbering by closing his eyes tightly ...πŸ˜•πŸ€’madhu leaves on realizing his fear.⭐️

day 2:
asusual she missed her first class and started walking towards her canteen...she felt bored and messaged dipali to come out of the class ...diplai asked her to wait as there were

only few minutes left for the bell to ring...she started applying the sauce over the pizza she made a happy smiley out of sauce over the pizza and started to smile πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜Šmeanwhile the

guy at the opposite table saw her kiddishness and started to smile...πŸ˜‰.suddenly she heared a soft voice "hello"madhu turned to find a guy standing behind her who is none other

than the guy who got heavy doze from her yesterday...she started to have her pizza while sat next to her and keeping on watching her...she gets irritated and was about to

speak but before interrupted by his talk"hello ...hi...whatever it is ...no need of formalities ...let me introduce myself ...its me "sikander" from the same cse department ,but

a small change am ur senior ...he started to speak non stop ...while madhu saw him as dog which was barking towards her and for a sudden her imagination got one doze

over... she saw him as her irritating idiot for a second and took the knife which was resting near her pizza and was about to tare his mouth 😑😲😲and later managed to get her

senses...when sikki shouted"no entry"...she throwed the knife on the table...while sikki glued his mouth in shock...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†. she took her bag and stood up... she glared at him

angrily and was about to leave ...she turned back fa second and hurriedly rushed to the table back and started to pack her pizza πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ.while he saw her started to move again sikki was

about to follow her but she looked at her sandals then his face which made him understand clearly that ...wat it meant..πŸ˜²πŸ˜†..on moving she saw the guy who was smiling over her

reactions at the opposite table of her's...she left angrily...

day 3:
It was her lunch...her stomach was burning due to hunger...she rushed to have her lunch in canteen where dipali was waiting for her...without even leaving a single word she

started to open her lunch box ...dipali who was looking at her wierd behaviour stared at her and finally asked "what did our principal say??"...y are yo so angry? πŸ˜•πŸ˜•and late for

lunch???...while depali stared at madhu's face for 15 minutes ...madhu replied after finishing her lunch ...her face turned red due to anger and replied to depali... since i

missed all the classes of irritating idiot ...i have been asked to stay for a special class after coll over from tomoro that too for two hours continiously he s gona take class for me 😭😭

and soon am going to face the hell...pls depali do something dear...pls pls pls ...while depali bursted into laugh ...madhu remains silent in anger ...finally deepali managed

her laugh and said sorry my dear "angry bird"..."its all ur fate"...and started to laugh again on seeing her caged bird condition...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...

day 4:
madhu after finishing her college bid bye to her friends with a sad face and stayed in the class where her professor started to teach his ...he was continously making her to study

and made her copy the notes from the board her hand suffered from extreme amount of pain...and finally after her hell hours ...🀒she saw her coll guys playing in a ground

around 5.30 and saw sikander practicing to propose a girl...his actions was clearly visible ...he was kneeling down on the ground in front of the his friend asuming him as a girl and

making practice to propose...sikander gave him a rose and the guy was crying due to his tortureπŸ˜†πŸ˜† and hit his forehead harsh with his hands on seeing sikander' stupid

act...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†madhu bursted into laugh saying "bagavan save the guy please"

day 5:
since deepali was absent ...she had her lunch alone ...feeling too lonely and sad...a second later she noticed sikander and his friend cuming towards him...on reaching her

sikander glared at madhu while she understood wat he s gona do.
sikander: with a shaky voice..." madhu"...
madhu:madhu's face grew darker on knowing he is going to propose her...she glared angrily at him with her temper which reached to the core
sikander:on seeing madhu's reaction he bent his head down...on seeing her sandals his hands started to shiver and his face started to sweat...he hid himself behind his friend

...insisting him ..."buddy pls da u say ...pls...say da...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜Š.and pushed him forward
madhu: madhu on seeing sikkis's reaction ...got her temper low...and was about laugh but maintained it and silently prayed to god"bagavan pls save me from this mental"...
after two minutes the sikkis's friend came forward with a lots of tension in his face...his face was so cute and she reminded his kiddish smile on first day and his childish cry at the

ground...she tried to catch his eyes for a second and rolled her eyes over him...he was quite smart with a pen in his pocket and a single note in his hands with shoe lays which are

not properly tied ...there were some strains of chalk piece on his black shirt which was tucked partially ...his half hair floating in air and remaining falls on his forehead...apart

from his kinder garden appearance ...he looked smart ...madhu finds her temper reduced on seeing his appearance and his behaviour... his hands started where

shivering...while sikki kept on itching him from his back asking him to reveal his love towards to her ...
he took few steps forward ...but still his eyes never met hers...while madhu forgot her temper and was trying to catch his eyes...he kept on looking at her feet ...and his

spoke "mad...madhu...madhubala..."his voice was shivering showing that he has never spoken to any girl before...madhu finds his voice very manly but still his looks and

behaviour added a kiddish look to him ...madhu who was still looking at him trying to catch his eyes...he managed to turn back and saw sikki who was beging him with his

pleased reaction on his face ...he managed to regain his courage and spoke...
madhu...am rishab kundra...by looking at her feet
madhu:madhu who was still trying to catch his eyes ...was happy to hear his name ...without her knowledge her lips made a cute curve ...leaving a dimple on her face...she

cleared her throat and said"okay ...wat do yo want ??...
rishab:rishab on hearing her words managed to see her eyes for a sec...where they had a eyelock for 5 seconds...then rishab started to blabber about himself
rishab: am also cse departement ...final year...i am ...i am here to...i am...his words got struck...he again turned to sikki who was begging him like a kid to reveal his love
madhu mean while giggled quietly inside her heart ...she kept her face as possible as angry she could ...and glared at him ...finally she interrupted...πŸ˜†
madhu:yo are here to?
rishab: on hearing her stiff voice ...he caught her eyes which was already registered on him...which gave him some fear...his stomach made some sounds ...which was only

audible to him...out of his fear he saw sikki who urges him to reveal...
on seeing madhu's glare his temper rose ...madhu who was unable to maintain her laugh stood up and was about to leave
rishab:madhu...madhu...madhu...wait ...pls...madhu glared at him ...rishab who was confused that where to start, how to say... rishab in hurry losses his tongue and said
"I LOVE YOU madhu"
instead of sayins "sikander loves you"
madhu:madhu who was unable to control her laugh due to confusion that happened ran away smiling at rishab...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
rishab on realising that his toungue got slipped ...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜Š was about to cal madhu ...but before he remembered sikki
rishab managed to look into sikkis face...while sikki stood numb like a statue with mouth opened widely in 'o' shape...πŸ˜†

friends ill continue the next part only based on your comments...dont worry... i wont bore yo if yo guys are not interested...pls forgive fa my grammatical mistake and if am

wrong somewhere means...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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good update dear...
funny...
i feel good for rk...
super shock to sikky😊🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its too funny yaar insted of sikki rishab praposed her...waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Start
Poor Sikky 🀣
Continue Soon πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear
ha ha rishabh telled he loves madhu...πŸ˜†
in ur story rk is little shy but madhu strong,right?,,,,,,,,,,i liked it😊
Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago
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Hey dear,
Nice start, about the story, as i read the name madhu,i understood she is the heroine, and i was wondering who would be rishab, and first i guessed the guy who dashed her, but then you told it was sikkander, then i thought the arrogant proffesor would be rishab, but finally you brought out the hero in a very different way and the way he told " I love you madhu instead of sikkander loves you was very nice, waiting eagerly for the next part
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unexpected love

part2

sikki was hell shocked on hearing rishab confessing his love instead of revealing his love. rishab gazed @ sikki feeling sorry for the confusion😭😭😭. he came towards sikki .sikki hugged rishab, rishab thought of consoling him but suddenly rishab's eyes popped out on hearing😲

"congrats buddy".

rishab was hell shock😲😲😲 to hear those words from sikki. " is this boy gone mad...i have to say these words after making everything fine between them ,but he is congratulating meπŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜• ?

rishab broke the hug and gave sikki a confused lookπŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜• while sikki again hugged him repeating the same words

rishab: " ai, you mad she thinks that i love her,you r congratulating me?...wat the hell is wrong with yo😑😑😑" rishab took hand full sikki's hair and spinned his head in a friendly manner😊😊😊

sikki: ha ha no problem buddy no worry,no pain no gainπŸ˜‰, no madhu then its dipali. madhu for u and dipali for meπŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜› ...he he sikki giggled on kidding rishab

rishab: you idiot ,shut up. stop playing he left smiling ,thinking how a mental has become a close buddy for him😑😑😑.

madhu was laughing the whole night hiding her self in the pillow. padimini was shocked to see her daughter laughing out like mad, she even thought of talked to madhu asking her to meet his friend psychiatrist to check weather all her screws are tight πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†.madhu revealed the entire story to her ma, while padmini too joined madhuπŸ˜†πŸ˜†. padimini after being normal told madhu "funny guy madhuπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰"

madhu: yea mom. madhu blushed on remembering his rishab's love confession

she turned herself to all the position rotated her body @ 360 degree to push her mind to sleepy mode. she tried her maximum level to forget his memories, but nothing worked...

rishab too blushed in his room ,thinking how mad he is ...he thought about madhu and prepared himself to seek an apology from her tomorrow...he eagerly waited for the next day as he blushed the entire day on realizing his funny behaviour

day 6: he was thinking about his funny behaviour, his mind flashed the memories madhu's angry glare from day 1😑😑😑 ...he smiled on realizing his heart melting for that angry girl even though he was sure about the apology. the classes passed as rishab kept smiling thinking about madhu while madhu too did the sameπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

rishab searched for madhu in her class, but unable too see her as madhu searched for him in his class. they returned back to their respective classes with empty stomach.

It was eve rishab sat alone in the ground thinking about her...madhu's finished her extra class and walked through the ground. suddenly her eyes popped out😊😊 and face lit up with a smile on seeing rk. she ran towards him .rk sat turning his back to her was unaware of her arrival. she stopped few steps before him and blushed☺️☺️☺️ finally she managed to give him a angry glare, by clearing her throat

rishab' eyes directly met her's ...he was hell shocked by her sudden presence

rishab: mad...madhu...madhu yo? (in a surprised tone)

madhu: madhu continued pretending to be angry on him

rishab: i ... mean ...i am sorry madhu

madhu gazed him as if she doesn't know anything. rishab on realizing her gained his courage to speak

rishab: madhu ...madhu actually i came to say (interrupted)

madhu: I LOVE YOU RISHAB

rishab continued without placing her words exactly on his mind saying " I CAME TO SAY...but suddenly his eyes popped out as her words echoed in his ears now ,he was not clear still (interrupted)

madhu: I LOVE YOU RISHAB.

his eyes popped out he was hell shock to her the words from her. he saw madhu who was smiling at her and felt speechless...he started enjoying the moments words never came out of his mouth ,while he silently realized that "HE TOO LOVES HER" ...he registered his eyes on her, madhu rolled her eyes over his face before they could share the eyelock...madhu spoke breaking a long silence " rishab...i..."

rishab: madhu ...madhu madhu... rishab shouted like a kinder gardern student out of urge to stop her...

madhu smiled and waited for him to speak...as he continued

rishab closed his eyes tightly knowing that he wil deserve a tight slap from her after revealing the truth...started to blabber " it was dicky madhu, sry madhu ,its sikki who told me to reveal his love towards you, but i revealed mines...sry sry...i wrongly let out the words that i love you (interrupted)

madhu :shhh

rishab opened his eyes partially ...while madhu closed the distance between them...his heart started to beat as heavy as it could...taking his hand in to her... she whispered in his ears " i know everything rishab "...rk's eye's again popped out on hearing madhu's words .she continued " i love you rishab ...that's it" rk closed his eyes feeling her soft running through his hair...suddenly he opened his eyes to see madhu running out of shyness. out of impatience rk shouted " madhu"

she stopped few steps before him...showing her back to him. he closed his eyes which was full of madhu's memories and continued

rishab: yes madhu...I LOVE YOU"

madhu blushed on hearing his love confession... she was about to run while rk stopped her holding her waist...madhu turned to look into his eyes which was already register on her...madhu whispered again " i love you rishab"

rk chuckles and hearing it for the third time...madhu made a slow move reducing the distance between them...she placed a soft kiss on his forehead...as rk longing for passionate kiss ...placed his lips on her's sudden ,sukking her breath she bid a way to his tongue...as rk expected it turned to a passionate kiss. she pulled him more into her, they parted breathing heavily. rk blushed while madhu winked asking him once ,they started to laugh followed by the eyelock

sorry friends 😳😳😳i know its tooo late to update this right now, but i don't want to leave it incomplete too😭😭😭. hope you will like it , leave me your precious comment's ...am eagerly waiting to know ur views... ignore the spelling mistakes etc etc... mistakes kindlyπŸ˜‰

Edited by rishbalaa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ha fab update .. all blushy mushy ☺️...
it was cute sweet n well evrythn !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVELY UPDATE 😊
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hey hey cute end dearπŸ‘
i like this sikkyπŸ˜†
aww,they kissed!😳...wow😊

cngratz for being groupbieπŸ‘
Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago

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