||Forgiveness|| A Rishabala Short Story

-CrazySobtian- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
#1


I hold the soul ownership of all my work and nobody shall produce it without my permission.

Hi guys! I am here with a new SS requested by arunsunita_gm.

(The main idea is provided by arunsunita_gm)

Basically this SS will be on the MU's created by Deepali, Ria and Pabo.

Here's the prologue. I hope you all will like it and support this SS the same way you all support my other FF on Rishabala. 😊

PROLOGUE

"You are responsible for everything, Madhu!" RK screamed and his voice echoed in the whole mansion. There was pin drop silence in his mansion. No one dared to talk. Madhu stood their lifelessly and numb. She couldn't believe what she was hearing. But only two members of that house enjoying that moment and it was none other than Pabo and Deepali.

"RK" Madhu tried to explain him but RK interrupted and said, "Just get out from my life and this house. I don't want any trace of yours in this house. Do you get it!" RK screamed and stormed off from their and Bittuji ran behind him to explain him. Madhu fell down on the floor and started to cry bitterly when Deepali and Pabo went near her and said, "Didn't you hear what RK said. Get out of this house." Saying these both went to their respective room leaving Madhu there.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Guys this SS will proceed in a really fast pace and I will try to end it withing 10 to 12 chapters and maximum it will reach 15 chapters and not more than that. Please leave your likes and comments and for PMs please buddy me or just leave your comment.

Edited by -MallyluvsJ2M- - 11 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

22

Views

4.4k

Users

17

Likes

55

Frequent Posters

uma88 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Nice start, wil be waiting for the first part to be updated
arunsunita_gm thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Yayayyy
yu have started ss on my idea superb dear
Rimu_coldfire thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Nice prologue dear!!!! cnt. soon...nd pm me...
namita25 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#5
nice prologue
waiting for the next part...
swetha10 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Plzzz continue soon...
waiting for the updates..
Secret_Giggle thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#7
nice concept
plz continue soon and pm me
punam2712 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#8
CONGRATS FOR THE NICE START
4ever4love thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#9
That was heartbreaking but really well written. Pls continue!!!
ship13 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Interesting start. Please continue soon. 😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".