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<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia" size="7"><p align="center">😈Janwar😈</p>
</div></font><div><font color="#000000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hello Guys I am writing a new FF called Janwar. And yes you all have guessed it Raja Kundra is the Janwar. </font>
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<font face="Georgia">So here is a little bit more about the Janwar.</font>
<font face="Georgia">Raja Kundra- is the Thakur. He is the educated ruthless leader in the village. He is a rich Landlord and lives in a mansion. He looks down on the poor. The villagers are scared of him.They bow before himand if anyone disobeys him, an example is made of them infront of the whole village. No one can stand against him. Heowns the villagers land.He gets what he wants whenever he wants. This time he wants Madhu. He will get her as she lighted the fire within him. He owns the mills in the village where the villagers work. He also owns the farm yards where the villagers work.</font>
<font face="Georgia">Madhubala- She is an educated girl who lived in Mumbai for her studies but hails from her small village. She returned to the village on the behest of her aunt and uncle. She is pure sweet but cannot stand anyone being wronged.She returned to the village only to be told she is getting married. </font>
<font face="Georgia">Sharda Devi- She is Rishabh's mother. She stands by him what ever he does.</font>
<font face="Georgia">Bittuji- He is RK's right hand man and ensures that thewhole village respects him.</font>
<font face="Georgia">Padmini- Madhu's aunt. She hates Madhu but has to sweet talk her as her husband loves Madhu as his own daughter.</font>
<font face="Georgia">Shamsher- Madhu's uncle- Her father's brother. He took care of Madhu.</font>
<font face="Georgia">Trishna- Madhu cousin- padmini daughter. She hates Madhu as she is more beautiful than her.</font>
<font face="Georgia">Prologue.</font>
<font face="Georgia">'50lakhs and all your loans that you owe me will be forgiven if you give your niece to me' Rishabh smirked as he stood in the Malik's home. Shamsher looked at him and was about to say no when Padmini held his hand.</font>
<font face="Georgia">'Thakur Saab, please give us a moment' Padmini asked sweetly. Rishabh smirked because he knew he will get his way. </font>
<font face="Georgia">'off course my to be mother in law' He smirked evilly. </font>
<font face="Georgia">Padmini took Shamsher to another room and said to him</font>
<font face="Georgia">'50 lakhs.. it will buy us a new home in the city. Me you and Trishna can live happily. and we have enough money for Trishna marriage. Don't forget that Trishna is your daughter. Anyway, for Madhu look she is getting to marry the Thakur.'</font>
<font face="Georgia">Shamsher looked at her worried and in a dilemma and said</font>
<font face="Georgia">'Padmini our Madhu is only 19 and he is 28. There is a 9 year age difference. Our Madhu is sweet and he is harsh. What if he hurts her?' </font>
<font face="Georgia">'He is her husband to be. Once they are married our duty is over. She owes us Shamsher and you owe me and Trishna' Padmini said angrily. </font>
<font face="Georgia">'Fine your right. Lets do this. Madhu will be married to Thakur'</font>
<font face="Georgia">Shamsher and Padmini came out smiling and said</font>
<font face="Georgia">'She is yours' Padmini smiled inside she was gleeing she was getting rid of Madhu and will live happily with her daughter with lots of cash.</font>
<font face="Georgia">'Thank you. Bittuji start the marriage preparations' He called out. He smirked and left and said</font>
<font face="Georgia">'your money will be with you once Madhu is in my bed on our suhagraat and I have also got you a house ready and transport ready for you in the city' </font>
<font face="Georgia">Shamsher smiled</font>
<font face="Georgia">'thank you son. but take care of my Madhu'</font>
<font face="Georgia">'off course sasur ji' He smirked and left.</font>
<font face="Georgia">RIshabh sat in the car with Bittu and drove back to the haveli.</font>
<font face="Georgia">'waah sir how you finally managed to get them to agree to your demands easily selling off their own niece' Bittu laughed as he got a bottle of alcohol.</font>
<font face="Georgia">'That girl, was mine since I saw her Bittu, she tried to run and humiliate me, but now she is mine.. and I will have her and torture her do what I wish to do to her to my hearts contesnt. I will be her Janwar.. She brought this upon herself Bittuji'</font>
<font face="Georgia">This is the beginning of Janwar</font>
<font face="Georgia">So what did Madhu do to anger RK Thakur???</font>
<font face="Georgia">Read Part 1 Next Sunday </font>
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dearšŸ‘
so we wil hav to wait till sunday????šŸ˜’if u can update more early...plz pm me also
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Different n quiet interestingšŸ‘šŸ¼.plz update soon o😃
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nice update
plz pm me when u update
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nice start
seems interesting
awww i so wanted a totally kamina role for rk...and imagining him as cruel zamindar thakur...OMG!
i can't wait to read more
add me in the pm list
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wow dear a very nice start
please continue soon
can u pm me ?
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plz pm me nxt time u update
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plz update dear 😊accept my buddy req too...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Whoppee... Thank you so much for updating this.

Super awesome start. Rishabh definitely knows how get what he wants.
Excited for this Janwar's love story.
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Any more likes?? Or comments 16 is so demoralising

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