MADHUBALA - AN OS; NOT MY STORY

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Rani Ansari

@ron.ansari

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

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rekha

@rekha.366

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome os .i loved your story remember me. please pm me when ever you write

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

Good work ron.you did a splendid job in maintaining the suspence.all through the os i thought that its madhu bt it turned out to be trishna.thats a very good piece of writting.

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war_is_peace

@war_is_peace

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

ooo i love it! 😳

btw trishna's life is coming up in my ff...started infact 😆

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice os...the cvs never utilised trishna's character properly...

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mimibm

@mimibm

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was awesome...every story i have read so far has been from Madhu or RK's POV...so accordingly I started visualizing from Madhu's POV...I was angry at first on RK for ignoring her, then started liking the ice breaking and friendliness between the two, became extremely happy to know about their marriage...then the revelation about her sister...although it was a big enough hint, still I forced myself to think ill of Madhu's (the narrator) sister...and what a turn around at the end...bravo...i loved this OS...👏