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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi all. I wrote this piece after Madhu donned her Revengebala avatar. The "wonderful" time when he probably imagined all sorts of lurid acts that his Biwi may have indulged with Sadakchap. Hope you all enjoy. 😊

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RK wants to cancel his photo shot for the publicity of his new move. But his Biwi has convinced him otherwise. His heart was not into it as his mind's eye keeps wandering to Madhu's heartbroken, tearful expression. His patience runs thin as the photographer keeps making adjustments in between each shot.

RK (yells): Pack up!

Bittuji (protesting): But Chief'

RK (menacing over Bittuji): Bittuji'who's the Chief? You?

Bittuji: Of course you're Chief.

RK: Pack up means pack up! Get a dictionary so you won't be confused next time!

Bittuji: Yes Chief.

RK rushes up to his room with only one thing on his mind. Knowing his Biwi, she must still be crying up a storm. He just wants to comfort her and wipe away all her tears. He doesn't know why her tears bother him, but it does. No one, not even her mother, has the RIGHT to make his Biwi cry!

RK (not seeing Madhu in the room, shouts): Biwi! Biwi! Biwi! (Angrily mutters) Dammit! Where did she go now?

RK (yells): Mangesh!

Mangesh rushes in to do his Chief's bidding.

RK: Where's Biwi?!?

Mangesh: Chief'Madhu ma'am went to the kitchen but then she got a phone call. She went to the terrace.

RK: Ok. Go!

RK storms out of his room. As he approaches the terrace, Madhu's melodious voice wafts over him, pulling him closer. Standing just a few steps away from the door, he can hear Madhu loud and clear.

Madhu (coos): Ohh my sweetheart'you're so hard on the outside.

RK stops in his track and fists his hands in anger.

She must be talking to her Ashiq.

Madhu: But so soft on the inside.

RK clenches his jaw.

I would like to smash him and then Biwi your Ashiqui Pistoli would be really soft.

Madhu: You understand me so well. (Angrily) Unlike that RK.

I don't care Biwi. You are mine'just mine! Only mine to touch, hold and love! Bas haq hi ek mera!

Madhu: You've never broken my trust and betrayed me.

Dammit Madhu! I thought you were ready to give us a second chance?

Madhu: You always manage to put a smile on my face. (Angrily again) While RK's the reason for all my tears.

If you give me a chance, I would wipe away all your tears and never let another tear drop fall again. But no'you just had to run to Ashiqui Pistoli.

Madhu: RK still doesn't understand the pain and heartbreak he has put me through. (Sweetly) But you pulled me through and have been a true savior, a companion.

Dammit! I am sorry for hurting you. You've known your Ashiqui Pistoli for only a few days and he is your savior? No'not as long as I am still alive!

Madhu: You're the best thing in my life. I love you!

RK slams his fist against the rough wall, bruising his knuckles. Yet the pain is nothing compared to that of his broken heart.

I love you Biwi and I promise you WILL love me again. Hero gets the heroine at the end, not the villain. Yes'I can't let the villain take away my heroine.

RK rushes into the terrace and turns to his left. To his utter consternation, Madhu is sitting on the floor with her back against the wall. She is staring lovingly at a piece of chocolate in her hand before popping it in her mouth.

Madhu (closes her eyes in pleasure): Ohh Lindor I really do love you! You really know how to make a girl feel special.

RK stares in shock at Madhu for a long minute, still trying to process that her loving conversation was with a damned chocolate truffle.

Edited by Tainar - 12 years ago

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Laters.Baby thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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🤣 🤣 🤣

Funny n cute OS dr😳 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really funny😆
rk going gaga but madhu simply talking to a chocolate
nice work👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG🤣🤣🤣

RK's new sautan is the chocolate?🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is hilarious!! :) your writing is amazing btw
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey! It was damn hilarious 🤣🤣🤣 Awesome👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: RockchickFaiza

🤣 🤣 🤣


Funny n cute OS dr🤣



Thank you! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hilarious. Os with a twist.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is so hilarious 🤣 Awesome OS... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I can understand Madhu's love fr Chocolate --- Me too love chocolate the most --- Actually more than anything 😆😆

Anyways Sweet OS.

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