~I will always love you~ Rishbala OS - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Hey,

This a great piece of imagination-though am sure many will not agree but how does it matter-u r a gd writer-always told you that--so please continue- u can pick up the threads from anywhere you want. Keep it up baby--now I hve to say this-Vinu Rocks😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: -Stephanie-

Unres!

Whoa! Well written Vinu! Good Job! 😊

I know you warned me, but it still managed to make me cry! Truly touching! 😭

You sooo owe me one of your sugar coated sweet OSs missy! 😡
I was feeling down and this made me feel even worse! 😭 But I loved it to bits nevertheless! 😊

You are getting better everyday, I'm loving your work <3

Keep up the good work Chiki Boo! 😊

Steph Loves You ! 😃 😆

P.S ------> I'm gonna keep on taunting you until you give me one of your signature sweet OS! 😛


I am ryt being her with yur sugar coated sweeet OSs as she says!!!
xxx

Payal2012 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Hey 😉

U r truly great --its proven now u can leave IF.

Though the story has sad ending--wouldnt wish RK to be dead like this-no person -finctional or non-fictional-shld go thru without a Parent.

It makes you cry when you read this.

😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Awesomeee👏
Very emotional and sad though!!!!my request!plsss write an OS in which sultan is killed in the most terrible and brutal way with lot of torture!,😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: aakriti18

Hey vinu !!

I am late 😭

No probs...
But i liked the os 😆
i see some ppl din't like rk being dead
it's not that i liked it ( 🤣 )...but i liked the way the story was written so differently...
of course i feel sad for madhu..who lost her husband just after one year of their marriage...that to due to that b***dy sadakchap 🤬
(you make him villian in all your stories 🤣...except in the romantic one before this ☺️ )

And Muskaan...she is really very very strong !! And very understanding too !!
It is really difficult for a small kid to understand and more importantly accept such kind of a reality...but she did it !!
Really proud of her !!

You said she is an exact replica of rk...i saw another similarity...
even she is without a father like her daddy 😭

For me it was more inspiring that sad...
Because you need to lead your lives even in the absence of your loved ones...

Proud of MM (Madhu and muskaan)

Loved the os !!
Well done my sistah !!

Aww Aku.. glad u liked it 😳 & I know it's too emotional & it's hard to accept as RK is no more & yeah most of them were crying so much & I got some personal attacks too 😆 that means I have written the story better, 😳I loved critical comments & as well as PM tornadoes😆 cuz I know, if we write a sad story, specially when the hero is dead, we have to face them.😉 & yeah you know nah, how much I ''looou'' da golden hearted bhai 🤢 that's why I give him the real treatment in my every story 😉😆 & Yeah Muskaan & RK are similar in lot of ways😉 & yeah she is strong & a little Right Kameeni😆 & Thanks a lot for your lovely looong review my sistah 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: VinuRox

Aww Aku.. glad u liked it 😳 & I know it's too emotional & it's hard to accept as RK is no more & yeah most of them were crying so much & I got some personal attacks too 😆 that means I have written the story better, 😳I loved critical comments & as well as PM tornadoes😆 cuz I know, if we write a sad story, specially when the hero is dead, we have to face them.😉 & yeah you know nah, how much I ''looou'' da golden hearted bhai 🤢 that's why I give him the real treatment in my every story 😉😆 & Yeah Muskaan & RK are similar in lot of ways😉 & yeah she is strong & a little Right Kameeni😆 & Thanks a lot for your lovely looong review my sistah 🤗


Personal attacks 😲
and pm tornadoes 🤣
Well criticism is necessary so that one can improve...but i cudn't find any place for that 😆
bcoz my focus was more on Muskaan's will power than RK, the hero being dead 😆

For me it was not Rk's story...but madhu and the little right kameena's story 😉
And that's why i loved it 😃
Interestingly...even after rk being dead...he was there in the story for long 😆
so i din't even miss him 😆

i have a really bad habit of writing long 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Payal2012

Hey 😉


U r truly great --its proven now u can leave IF.

Though the story has sad ending--wouldnt wish RK to be dead like this-no person -finctional or non-fictional-shld go thru without a Parent.

It makes you cry when you read this.

😭

Aww glad u liked it Payal 😳 & this is too emotional I know how you feel losing a parent & this is just a fictional story 😳 & we can't accept that RK is no more. Anyway thanks a lot for your feedback😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Aphsana

Hey,


This a great piece of imagination-though am sure many will not agree but how does it matter-u r a gd writer-always told you that--so please continue- u can pick up the threads from anywhere you want. Keep it up baby--now I hve to say this-Vinu Rocks😉

aww glad u loved it 😳 yeah I will continue my work here 😆 no worries. Thanks a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Vaishnavi7

Awesomeee👏

Very emotional and sad though!!!!my request!plsss write an OS in which sultan is killed in the most terrible and brutal way with lot of torture!,😉

Aww glad u loved it Vaishu 😳 & yeah gimme some time I'll fulfill u r request soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
U know what i have always wanted RK to die at d end of dis show..i want der lovestory to be tragic n epic so obviously i loved loved n loved ur os.!

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