Rishbala os- The Ruthless - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awosum os..u written beautifully.. loved this ruthless,arrgont madhu so much..Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The best prediction ever tying all the loose ends...i so hope CVs read this somehow and pick up this story. This fulfils Madhu ebcoming an actress, brooding RK, entire cast...with some more develoment whole track can run for months...
just loved it absoltely...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I have a strong feeling that in the show also something like this will happen...superb os...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey awesome OS. It was very beautifully written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: colorsluv

And And And -- the ultimate stalker award goes to -- ME -- 😈

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yohoo awesome OS & Fab concept --- 😛

I loved this Ruthless MB only fr the world --- She is Madhu only fr her Rishab --- Fr a change i loved sarcastic Madhubala -- 😈 -- & how she bajaofyed Dips -- Sikki dumbo as usual -- 😆 -- Bt i love him like that -- 😉 -- Bittuji should be announced as a punching bag only available fr Rishbala -- 😆 -- Poor fellow -- Rohan that 😡 -- Wish RK would give him some punch -- Opps actually good that he didn't do anything -- Don't wanna see him chakki pising in jail again-- -- Last bt not the list loved Rishbala's talk with Dips -- Dips felt embarrass -- 😲 -- I didn't know she has any sharam 😆

Loved this Jan -- Thanks fr the Fab OS 🤗

kiddo luv if alone my updates are the winning rope then i guess u would have bagged the first price for as many number of times as necessary to make a record break👏 n thanx for admiring my work😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: samwllms

oh maa god...tumne to future mb track itni acche se likh liya...mujhe serial me bhi aisa hi chahiye...

me too 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: revti21

Cant u join cvs to give ideas...becoz they seemed to b runnin out of it 😆

thanx dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sayanti_ashiuv

yes yes yes this is our rishbala...separated for years still their hearts beat for each other 😳☺️ terrific oneshot dear...unique plot and very beautifully written..plz join CVs and give them ideas that how to portray rishbala and their lovestory😳 and one more request, plz write more stories...you are a gifted writer..the way you have depicted madhu and rishabh i could almost visualize everything infront of my eyes😊😊

thank u so much dear 😊 n yeah i ve already written few. if u interested u can try them from my index-My Scribbles😊 that is my signature too😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

wow... i really loved this one shot... madhu should really turn ruthless for the whole world to save her rk... also loved how she had a good relation with bittuji all this while... also loved the fact that dipali n sikki are scared of her and obey her without any question... but did not like the fact that sultan escaped from india as he should have been found and jailed for life so that rk would have got his dignity back... loved how she won against sultan after fighting so hard and loved how she joined films so that when rk is free he can be launched in the films again and he can get his career back...wish the same thing happens in the show and pray that the writers really take your idea as then it will be simply fantastic

now i will stop my rant. i wanted to give a comment but ended up writing an essay
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thanx for ur complimenting essay dear😊 n i thought of nailing that sulthan but then i would end writing a ss than os so thought of skipping that thought😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ritzy09

The best prediction ever tying all the loose ends...i so hope CVs read this somehow and pick up this story. This fulfils Madhu ebcoming an actress, brooding RK, entire cast...with some more develoment whole track can run for months...

just loved it absoltely...

thank u😊

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