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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shree.123

Beautiful 😳

waiting for next part 😊


Thank you! 😊 Next part is on page 2.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Disclaimer: This post in no way endorses violence or criminal activities. It is work of pure fiction about fictional characters. Wouldn't recommend such methods on REAL people no matter how evil they are.

LOL! Now that being said...I need to think of an equally fitting ending for Dipugly. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tainar

RK allows Madhu to drag him up to their room. He has loads of questions for his Biwi.


What did she mean that Sultan is just trying to rile me up and it is another of his disgusting plan? Does she believe me now that Sultan is not the good guy? He is after her?


Once they enter their room, RK slowly disentangles his arm from Madhu. He slowly turns her around to face him and with his forefinger raises her chin.


RK (slowly): Madhu'?


Madhu (tears in her eyes): You were right. Sultan is using Meeraji to get me.


RK (asks carefully): And how did you come to this conclusion?


Madhu bites her lips and ponders just how much of her conversation with Sultan she should reveal. With his volatile temper, she's afraid that if she says too much that RK will march up to Sultan and shoot him right between the eyes. Though Sultan deserves to be shot, Madhu has no wish to see her husband prosecuted if he is arrested.


Madhu (starts slowly): Umm'after we came back from the lake, I went to talk to Sultan.


RK (interrupts hotly): Dammit Biwi! Why the hell do you keep running to him?


Madhu (glares at RK): RK are you going to let me finish before you interrupt again?


RK reflexively tightens his hold on Madhu's arms. Staring intently into her beautiful face, he immediately loosens his hold at her grimace.


RK (angrily): Continue. I won't interrupt again.


Madhu (continues): I was angry and confused at his phone call, at the things he said to you. I needed to sort things out so I confronted him. I pushed and pushed till he finally burst out with the truth. (Tears in her eyes again) He is using his own mother RK'his own mother. He doesn't care about giving Meeraji her rights back as he was claiming. No it's all about HIM. He wants to take revenge against you RK because he lost me to you. (Sniffles) As if I was ever his, stupid, disgusting man! (Pauses for a bit and takes a deep breath, dreading telling RK the next part) He'he'offered me his'hand'to leave you and be with him. (Angrily) I told him that I would NEVER leave you. I ended all friendship with that Shaitaan and told him that from now on his battle is with us, not just you RK. (Angry tears rush out of her eyes) He called today to again compel me to leave you and go with him. If I leave you, he will end all the drama and stop claiming that his papa's son.


RK (wipes away Madhu's tears): Now listen to me carefully Madhu. Don't give in to any of his demands. I can handle anything except for losing you. I won't survive that. I don't want the Kundra name back if it means losing you. Sultan can keep it. The name means nothing to me anymore. It still doesn't change what my janam dene wali pita did. But Sultan will never come near you again. I'll handle him sweetheart. He won't ever threaten you again.


Madhu (frantically grabs RK's shoulders and shakes him): RK? What are you planning? What are you planning RK? Tell me now right now! Don't you dare do anything stupid! Do you hear me RK? Don't you dare!


RK (grabs Madhu's face): Biwi'Biwi'Madhu'relax. Relax'ok? I won't do anything stupid.


Madhu (grabs RK's hands): Give me your promise RK! Promise me that you won't do anything that will get you in trouble.


RK (comforting): Sshh'Relax Biwi. Have some faith in me Madhu, (teasing slightly) your Patidev. I promise to you that everything will be fine, everything will be back to normal again.


He picks up a protesting Madhu in his arms and carries her to bed. He gently puts her on bed, joins her under the cover and pulls her into his arms.


Madhu (grabs RK's collar and looks at him questioningly): RK? Everything will be fine right? You won't do anything that would cause more trouble for us, right? That's what he wants.


RK (kisses Madhu's forehead): Relax Biwi. Now be a good girl, close your eyes and go to sleep.


Madhu (protests): But it's only afternoon.


RK (nuzzles her neck): My Jungli Billi'I don't know about but I need to recharge.


Madhu (yawns): Hmm'well a nap would be nice.


She closes her eyes and snuggles closer into RK's embrace. But sleep is far from RK's mind. No he is too busy planning the demise of the man who dared to turn his life upside down. But most importantly dared to threaten his wife and tried to compel her to leave him. Sultan must pay!

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SS: Sadakchap and Dipugly.

Love this fanfic.😃👏 You write exceptionally well.⭐️
But please, could you include each chapter's title along with the chapter?😕
Otherwise, only the latest chapter's title is known.😕

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Posted: 12 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Tainar

RK gently places Madhu on her side of the bed. He caresses her face, drops a kiss on her forehead and gets off bed.

RK (looks down at Madhu and avows): Madhu everything will be fine. Sultan will never make an indecent proposal to again. I promise.

He grabs his phone and walks out of their room. RK has some arrangements to make before he meets Sultan in place of Madhu at Sitara Studio.

Sitara Studio ' 3 Hours Later

RK arrives on his new set. He has parked his car a good bit of walking distance from the studio. He doesn't want anyone at the studio to know that he is on set just yet. RK checks his gun one more time, to make sure the safety lock is on and it's properly loaded. If his first plan fails, he will get rid of Sultan one way or another, even if he has to shoot this gun. Spotting Sultan at the edge of the cliff, RK saunters over to him as he too approaches closer.

Sultan (growls): You? What are you doing here?

RK (snarls): You're right'only Grimm Reaper should visit you.

Sultan: He will visit you today RK. I won't spare you!

RK (half-smiles): Sorry not today. Grimm Reaper didn't make an appointment with me for today. Death only awaits for you.

Sultan: Say your last prayer RK. After tonight, you're done and Madhu will be forever mine.

RK's roars in anger and slams his fist into Sultan's jaw. Sultan stumbles backwards but regains his footing and slams his fist into RK's jaw. RK's head snaps to the side. Sultan tries to punch again but RK blocks it and kicks him in the face. Sultan flies through the air and lands on dirt. RK charges after him but Sultan gets on his knees. As RK launches another kick, Sultan holds out his foot and RK trips and falls on his knees. Regaining himself quickly, he throws a punch at Sultan. RK then blocks Sultan's fist and then RK launches himself at him. Both men roll on the grass, landing series of punches at each other. Exhausted and bleeding profusely from several cuts, they pull apart and get on feet.

Sultan (pulls out his gun): Any last words before you die RK?

RK (pulls out his gun and removes the safety lock and points at Sultan): I am not the one who needs to say good bye. (Smirks) Of course you don't have anyone to say it to. After all, who will actually miss you?

Sultan (snarls and his finger twitches to pull the trigger): Careful RK'lest those are your final words. No final message for Madhu? (Smirks) I promise I will pass it on to her when I claim her as mine.

RK (shouts): Madhu was NEVER yours and she will NEVER be yours!

RK almost pulled the trigger when several stones went flying through the air at Sultan. One of them knocks the gun off Sultan's hand while others hit various parts of his body, rendering him down on his knees. RK turns around to see dozens of angry men and women with all sorts of rudimentary weapons in their hands.

RK (holds out his hands wide): Welcome! (Pointing at Sultan) This man here is responsible for the deaths of your loved ones be it your sons, brothers, fathers and uncles. The police can't seem to apprehend him and when they do they can't keep him jail. But your loved ones, they deserve justice now don't they?

The angry mob chants their agreement.

He murdered my only son. I won't spare him!

This Shaitan killed my papa and brother and left me all alone in this world! He must pay!

Sultan (grunts): What nonsense is this RK?

RK (looks over his shoulders at Sultan): Your Judgment Day. (Continues addressing the angry mob) The police couldn't get justice. For this man who so cold-bloodedly MURDERED your beloved! Ladies and gentlemen, I present to you Mumbai ka Sultan. Make him pay for his crimes.

The two strongest members of the mob, hauls Sultan up on his feet.

Man 1: Because of you I had to light the funeral pyre for my younger brother.

Man 2: Today we will light yours. We won't spare you!

They drag a screaming, protesting Sultan away into the jungle followed closely by the angry mob. RK follows them at a distance. He wants to make sure the job is completed and Sultan will never be a trouble again. RK follows them till to the edge of the jungle, a safe distance from the funeral pyre. He watches with satisfaction as the two men throw the weak, protesting Sultan into the fire. RK turns his back as he hears Sultan blood-curdling scream of pain finally die out.

RK: Alvida Sultan. May your soul NEVER rest in peace.



SS: Sadakchap and Dipugly...PACKUP! Part 2

Brutal, ruthless and absolutely superb.👏
Kudos on such finely detailed nuancing and writing.⭐️

Edited by leelaa9 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb update, such an interesting climax , CVs should learn something from you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Leela9. Thank you for your kind words. I have edited and posted Chapter Number on the updates. Going forward, I'll remember to post it.

Thanks again!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prarthna.B

Superb update, such an interesting climax , CVs should learn something from you :)


Thanks! CVs can stand to learn a lot from other exceptional writers who also pen FF on Rishbala. We have brain and originality. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 3 -- Tick Tick...Dipugly!

RK's ears perk up as he hears the faint sound of police siren. He walks towards the clearing but still remains partially hidden by the looming trees. As the police roam around searching for the supposed perpetrators of a supposed crime, he smirks at their confusion.

Police Inspector (to his underlings): Chalo! There's nothing going on here, no crime is being committed. That madamji sent us on a goose chase, to waste our time.

RK waits for the incompetent police to leave before he starts his long trek back to his car. As he keeps walking, RK pulls out his phone when he notices an incoming call. RK looks at the name flashing on the phone, he smiles and answers the call.

RK Mansion

Madhu just woke up from her slumber and is frantically searching for RK. She has called him several times but tries one more time and he still does not pick up. She looks at the time and it hits her that RK went to confront Sultan at Sitara Studio.

Oh God! Oh God! Please don't let him do anything that will jeopardize us. Get him in trouble with the law. Madhu'you're so stupid. Why did you tell him the time and location? Oh God! And in his anger he is liable to do anything. I should go'yes'I will go to the studio right now and stop this nonsense!

Madhu quickly changed into a black salwar suit and dashes out of the room. As she is descending the stairs, her eyes fall on Dipali lounging on one of the arm chairs, grinning like a cat that got the cream. Immediately suspicious of her behavior, Madhu slows down and stops at the base of the stairs. She is debating whether to interrogate Dipali because knowing her and her mischief-making ways she is liable to do something to cause trouble.

Just then Dipali gets a phone call and the smile is wiped off her face.

Dipali (on the phone): What?!?

Police Inspector (snaps over the phone): Mrs. Bhattia you sent us to that site under false pretense! There was nothing going on, no crime was being committed!

Dipali (puts her palm up against her forehead): No Inspector'I heard him. I heard RK set up a meeting with Sultan behind Sitara Studio. He left with a loaded gun. Inspector when he sets out to accomplish something, he gets it done. Trust me Inspector'I wouldn't lie to the police.

Police Inspector (shouts): There was NO ONE on that site! You misunderstood the conversation Mrs. Bhattia and you may want to get your ears and eyes checked. Next time you call us, give us false information and send us on a goose chase, I will personally come and arrest you!

Dipali hangs up the phone and throws it on the sofa in a rage and thinks out loud.

What the hell?!? Did they change location last minute? Dammit! Why didn't Sultan inform me? Bloody gangster'he knows none of this would have been possible without me! I gave him the stupid picture of his crazy mother, Meera and badi papa, and he tried to buy me. Stupid, ignorant, fool'like he can actually afford Dipali. I am too expensive for his likes. He thought he had the perfect plan but it would have failed without my help. I mean'it's not like he can walk through wall like an invisible apparition and change the bullets in RK's gun with fake ones. How dare he not tell me what he's doing?!? He ruined the whole plan! I called the police to that site so they can witness RK shooting Sultan. Once RK's locked up he was supposed to negotiate with his little Chawlbala for RK's freedom in exchange for her breaking their marriage. Fool! It was an excellent plan. He would have gotten that Chawlbala and I my RK. Don't know why I bothered to get involved with a brainless, gangster. I'll just have to handle everything, my way, on my terms.

Dipali puts her palm on her forehead again. She is beyond frustrated that the perfect plan she concocted with Sultan foiled. Snatching up her phone, she storms off to her room.

Madhu is immobilized with a burning, potent rage. If she had taken a step or for that matter even breathed, she would have snatched Dipali's hair and ripped them off their roots. Madhu would have then wrapped her fingers around that witch's neck and squeezed the life out of her. She is still tempted to follow her and beat her to within an inch of her life.

How dare she? How dare she...how dare she?!? That Dipali'no'Dipugly with her cold, black heart has crossed all limits! She wanted to see RK go to jail for attempted murder? The man she claims to love? The damned witch does NOT KNOW THE MEANING OF LOVE! Madhu you should have kicked her out of the house! Dipugly you WILL pay for trying to harm my pati and destroy our lives. If RK is Right Kameena then I am his Kameeni. YOU WILL PAY for your sins! Heads up Dipugly'your Judgment Day is here.

Edited by Tainar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No interest? I suppose I won't be continuing.
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Disclaimer: This story in no way condones violence or any criminal behavior. This is a work of fiction for fictional characters. Do not try at home.
Ok...that being said...enjoy the fate in store for Dipali.😃
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Chapter 5 -- Dipali's Qyamat

RK Mansion – Few Hours Later

Revenge is a dish best served cold. Madhu has been tempted all evening to strangle the life out of Dipali. But what she has planned for her is so much more sweet and satisfying. For so long, she has been patient, even understanding of the witch. She did not retaliate the numerous times Dipali has tried to play her dirty games. But enough is enough. Tonight Madhu will show Dipugly that every action has a reaction. In her case, it's a culmination of all her actions. So the reaction must also be of equal magnitude.

Madhu (to Bittuji): Bittuji…do you have the picture I asked for earlier?

Bittuji (evil grin): Yes Bhabiji. I have it right here.

Bittuji hands over the picture to Madhu. She examines it and nods her head with approval.

Madhu (approvingly): Bittuji this is excellent work! It's nearly impossible to detect that this photo has been photoshopped. Sikky will be in deep shock when he sees this…Dipugly in Sultan's embrace. I hope our plan works. (Twinge of remorse in her voice) Bittuji…am I making a big mistake? Stooping down to her level and engineering her downfall?

Bittuji (shakes his vigorously): Bhabiji…you are only trying to protect your family, protect Chief. That Dipali has caused enough trouble in our family with her disgusting ways. She has tried to harm many times yet you still did not retaliate. Today she tried to get Chief arrested on false charges of attempted murder. She could have even gotten Chief killed! Bhabiji…you are not wrong at all. In fact Bhabiji…everyone should worship you for ridding the world of its dirtiest pollutant.

Madhu (smiles): Thank you Bittuji. Sometimes I wonder what RK and I would do without you.

Bittuji (blushing slightly): Let's get it started Bhabiji. We have a bandar to fool and a witch to burn.

They walk out of the room and head downstairs. Madhu hides the photo in her hand, under her dupatta. As she walks toward the kitchen, she calls out to Bittuji to stay for dinner.

Madhu: Bittuji…don't you dare even think about leaving before you eat dinner. Even if your Chief calls you! I'll have the table ready in a few minutes.

Bittuji: As you wish Bhabiji.

Sikky pops his head out of his room. Did he just hear correctly? Dinner is about to be served? He has been starving all day, the rats in his stomach not giving him a moment's peace. Before leaving the room, he looks at the sleeping Dipali and debates whether to wake her up. Deciding against it, he nearly runs out of the room. Sikky nearly jumps with excitement to see Madhu and Neha bring out several aromatic dishes.

Sikky (sits down in his chair and rubs his hand with excitement): Arre…waah! Madhu bhabi…(Sniffing) Ahh…the delicious smell…my mouth is watering. (Looking around at the empty table) Umm…do I have to wait on…(Laughs nervously) I mean where's mummyji? And my bhai, RK?

Madhu (smiles at Sikky): Maa is in her room and I will take food for her later. RK is still in the studio. (Sweetly) Just because everyone else not interested in eating or are busy does not mean my jethji should starve, right?

Sikky (starts serving his plate): Bhabiji…you are the best!

Madhu (winks at Bittuji): Thank you. (To Bittuji) Bittuji…are you waiting for an invitation? Sit down please and I will serve you.

Sikky (talks with mouth full of food): Bhabiji you have magical hands! It's so delicious. The rats in my stomach are saying thank you.

Madhu (smiles): Thank you…jethji. (Innocently) Where's Dipali… bhabi?

Sikky (still focused on eating): In our room, sleeping. I didn't want her to wake her up…you know…she may just end up eating me for dinner.

Bittuji (laughs): At least she would do one thing right if she did eat you. Rid the world of you.

Sikky: Oye…The world love Sikky. Next upcoming, hottest actor of Hollywood.

Madhu walks behind Sikky and slips the picture haphazardly in between a magazine.

Madhu (shows the magazine to Sikky): I believe Dipali bhabi was searching for this magazine quite frantically today. Don't know why because it is, after all, just a magazine. (Shrugs her shoulders) But she was quite adamant that she finds it. Will you please give it to her?

Sikky (holds out his hand): My wifey…she's odd but she's sweet. (Glares at Bittuji's snicker of disagreement) I'll give it to her before she turns the whole house upside down and then decides to turn me upside down to find it.

As Madhu hands the magazine to Sikky, it slips off her hands and the picture lands strategically at Sikky's feet. He looks down and his eyes widen with shock. His hands shake as he reaches down to grab the photo. Madhu grabs it first and immediately hides it behind her back.

Madhu (stutters): Jethji…finish…finish…eating your…dinner…before it gets cold. I'll pick up the magazine for you.

Sikky (angry): Show me the picture Madhu.

Madhu (nervously): Picture…what picture? Ohh the scrap that I just picked up from the floor? It's nothing! You know these magazines always have the subscriber form stuck in between. I know bhabi would not want to bother with it…(walking towards the kitchen) I will just simply discard it.

Sikky (with steel in his voice): Madhu…I know what I saw! Bring that photo to me… NOW!

Madhu nervously walks back to Sikky and hands it back to him.

Madhu (advices): It may not be what you're thinking. You should speak to bhabi…I am sure she has a good explanation for this...umm…her with Sultan. Don't do anything rash please.

Sikky pushes away from the table and storms out of the house. Madhu laughs and hi fi with Bittuji.

Bittuji (laughing): Bhabiji you are brilliant and such a convincing performance! I don't think even Chief could have done a better job!

Madhu (grins): Thank you Bittuji!


One Hour Later

Bittuji is stationed at the window, keeping a lookout for Sikky's return. Upon seeing him, he runs back to join Madhu at the couch.

Madhu (notices Sikky enter and holds the newspaper with disgust): Can you believe this Bittuji? This Don…Bhujang…is rumored to be the foremost in the black market sale for human organs. How disgusting! It says that he gets his victims either by kidnapping or by families selling their own member to him for a large sum of money!

Bittuji: I have heard of this Don…Bhujang. It's disgusting that people will sell their own for a little bit of money.

Madhu (nods her head sadly): It is reported that he pays up to 80 lakhs for a live, healthy person. As if there can ever be a price on life.

Sikky's ear perks up at the mention of 80 lakhs. He stops and listens intently to their conversation, hoping to learn more.

Bittuji: I think he even operates out of some spa…what's the name? I heard it recently…ahh…I remember now. GQ Nail Shop. It's pretty exclusive.

Madhu: Bittuji…we must share this information with the police! Stop these heinous crimes. Killing and then selling their organs for profit? Chi…!

Bittuji (shaking his head): Bhabiji…it's not confirmed. And we don't need to attract the attention of another Don. Bhujang is very very ruthless. We are already dealing with Sultan, to take on another crime lord is just, plain suicide.

Out of the corner of her eyes, Madhu is keeping a close watch on Sikky's facial expression. She bites her lips from smiling at the look of enlightenment on his face. As soon as Sikky returns to his room, Madhu and Bittuji smile at each other. Their plan is working!

Another Hour Later

Madhu and Bittuji silently followed Sikky as he has managed to convince Dipali to come to GQ Nails.

Sikky (his voice lacking the usual coochie coo love, to Dipali): Babyyy…you've been stressed all day. Let me treat my baby to a nice mani, pedi and a message.

Dipali (rolls her eyes): Whatever. I should be figuring out what happened earlier in the evening with Sultan and RK. RK hasn't returned back to the house. Sultan is missing and won't pick up his phone.

Sikky (forces his words): You can do that all later after you've been pampered babbyy. You can then call your Sultan. (Amends at Dipali's glare) I mean call Sultan again.

They enter the isolated nail shop and Madhu and Bittuji follow quietly and peep through the window. They smile with satisfaction as they watch Sikky hand over a protesting Dipali to Bhujang and his men for the sum of 80 lakhs. He gets money to put into his matchmaking business and get rid of poison from his life.

Dipali (screams as they pull her away): Sikky…! You can't do this to me! I am your wife dammit!

Sikky (talks over his shoulder as he is about to exit): You should have thought about that before you played your games to destroy other peoples' lives. Before you cheated on me with that blue eyed devil! (To Bhujang) Make it last as long as possible, make her suffer!

Madhu and Bittuji hide in the shadow and watch Sikky drive away. They peep back up again to see the men drag Dipali to the room next door. Soon they heard bloodcurdling scream as Bhujang's men began their methodical cuts to separate her body from vital organs. The scream died out in minutes.

Madhu (whispers): I promised that tonight would be your Qayamat and so it is, you reap what you sow. Good riddance!

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