New SS: In the Darkness, In the Light.

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tanuja.siri

@tanuja.siri

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Loved the suspence filled prolouge. I luv this gener and am happy to read this kind in your style of writings. Will wait for you next update.

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Geeta singh

@sweetdesire

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Hey dear

Wow a New FF from you

Love the starting

Looking forward to read more

So do continue soon

Thanks for the PM
Take care

Geet

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

nice prologue... it sounds mysterious... plz update ch1 soon...

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Nc mysterious prologue.. Cont soon

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Marie_789

@Marie_789

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Nice SS.

Thanx for PM
PM me when you update.

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Kanchi

@aDarkAngel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow!!! The prologue is amazingly intriguing, acutely hinting towards the surprise that could be in store for us...well I could never come in terms with myself when it comes to liking Sultan..although I convinced myself saying that every story does need a villain to strengthen the love between leads..just like in the show, I have an inkling that even here in this SS, sultan may fall flat on his face if at all he tries see and judge the things through his perspective hehe!!

Ah..I really like this Trishna who is trusting her instincts rather people around. Guess the guy or whoever is involved seems pretty influential as he/they is/have been successful in hiding Madhu for about an year now...hope to see an unaffected detective😉 at work!! Do continue soon AA.. Am always up for surprise, so however u planned to take it, might just leave me stunned by the sheer brilliance that you have always known for😳 when it comes to story telling!!!

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I love to read your work and I will read this too :) I actually like sultan but I have lost interest in the show for now itss too predictable right now for me.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: apolloartemis

Very much like film noir, no? If this was an epi, it'd be shot in black and white and Sultan would be wearing a fedora in the scene😆😆

WITH A CIGAR IN HIS MOUTH