Rishbala FF- Pyaar ki Junoon..Part 1 updated23/6

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Rishbala FF- Pyaar Ki Junoon

Hi Friends...
I am silent here,
but some of u know me...
This is my first Rishbala FF...
Hope u all like it..



Prologue

He was a person who takes himself very special...
She was a person who feels herself different..
He feels him self to be unlucky
Se thinks of her self to be unlucky... but still feels happy as she gives others luck
He love people, but can't maintain relations
She believes in longterm relations
He likes to be alone
She was always alone.
He hates himself and people like him
She loves her self and people like her...
Both are people with similar intrests and thoughts yet different..
Both have love failures...
When two such people meet...
Definitely Pyaar ka junoon hi hoga.
When every thing changes in one minute and
when she start loving him...
What will be the result??
Will he ever accept a person who was like him..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Character sketch

Madhubala mallik

Daughter of Padmini and shamsher mallik...
Father left her in chilhood only, and padmini ,shamsher divorced...
Padmini died at age of 13 years for madhubala
Madhu was sweet chirpy girl
lives with her dadima





Rishab Kundra

The hotty Rishabh Kundra
Dark and passionate peson,
who was good at heart
and was a mystery to the people who don't know him..



Mukund dixit


The person whom madhu loves,
but he doesn't love madhu
Manish Naggdev

Deepali Sharma


The one whom Rk loves..
and later leaves
Seema Mishra

Radha Kundra..

Mother of Rishab


Mohan Kundra
Father of Rishab, rishab loves him a lot...



Dadima
Madhu's dadima...
with whom Madhu leaves
she loves madhu a lot, and cares for her a lot


Padmini Mallik
Madhu's mother...
died when Madhu is 13...
Madhu is very much attatched to her mom

Shamsher mallik
Madhu's father...
he left Madhu and padmini when Madhu was born, and Madhu hates him

Trishna Khurana

A normal to earth girl, who joines the same college as Madhu

Arti Puri

Edited by harianjana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sounds really interesting...
hope u continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Looks promising..cont soon n pm me😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting n NYC CS
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Thanks going to update it now...
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Part 1 : Broken Hearts

"When Life gives hundred things to live...
There is no reason to live.."

Every one around clapped listening to the awesome lines said by their schools famous girl "Madhu bala"
But she looked at that one person who doesn't have any expression on his face . She felt her heart breaking into pieces.. But she can't let herself drown like this, feeling that she left home.
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Sumitra was looking through the door for every five minutes... For first time , she went out, Sumitra never let her grand daughter go out alone with her friends, in case she was worried for her, and Madhu her self never ask to go out too... but today is completion of her 12th, she just wished that she wanna go out with her friends, and Sumithra accepted readily.. But she know the bore she feel after Madhu left but she thought to her self that she should let Madhu freak out..

While she was in her thoughts she felt to cold hands around her neck, she knew who it was "So finally how did u enjoy"

Madhu:I enjoyed a lot, but i felt it a bit boring too...

Madhu: So where did u go...

Madhu; Just its sunny's birthday today, she took all of us to a fair.

Sumnithra: U love fairs na..

Madhu:Inded I love them, but what bored me is their stupid convos...

Sumithra: So my dear grandie what is that boring talk...

Madhu: Well i have no energy to narrate u every thing that happened there... but just much of it about the gobar gas..

Sumithra laughed out loud ' Gobar gas was name which Madhu kept for their schools hottie... Mukund.. and when ever Madhu explain the thing which made her keep that name to him, it was very funny..


Madhu: So why are u laughing now... they played truth and dare for a while and when it came to me, they asked me some weirdo question

Sumithra; Whats that

Madhu making a ugly face ' They wish to know which type of guy will I marry"

Sumithra: what did u say...

Madhu:I said them I will never marry.

Sumithra shooked off her head and said "Go, fresh and come, I made ur favourite paratha"

Madhu:DadiMaa... please, mujhe khane ka man nahi hain...

saying this she rushed up to her room and then she started to cry keeping her head in pillow... She was remembering how she loved Mukund and held him as life.. but how he rejected her love... She took her dairy and started to write"Mummy... I know u are angry on me , u would never think that I would love some one , but I loved him mummy... But he never loved me, and found me weird girl, who was more of a boy than a girl... what should I do mummy... i was brought up like that, i feel it weird to feel shy always and do those girlish... talks, whats wrong in that mummy..."
Rubbing her tears she continued further "Mummy, u know what today sunny asked me which type of guy would I like to have as my husband , but she never knows that I don't believe in marriage. How can i believe in it, after I saw what happened to u mummy... how can I/. U know what mummy... if ever I feel like marrying, I will, but for me the person whom I love and marry would be 'My best friend, my mentor , my teacher, my philosopher, and most of all he should become my mother mumma... And also he should use me, play with me, angry on me, love me. make me his every thing and let me use him, play with him, love him, angry on him and make him my every thing. Such psychos are very rare to find mumma... very rare..I hope i get one such psycho"

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"Every thing in the world seems to be small infront of her,
but she herself seems to be small infront of me
She wants me to be with her life long.
But she never knows that RK will be with no one"

Dipali looked astonished as she heard RK saying this.. "RK ye kya bakwaas hain:

RK: Bakwaas nahi, RK ka kameena pan

Dipali: What haoppened to u today

RK: Kuch nahi, realisation. Realisation that Dipali was not the one whom RK dreamt off.

Dipali: RK ye tu kya bol rahe ho

RK:Sach.. RK ka sach ka saamna

Dipali: RK I love u

RK: I Love u, but can't live with u

Dipali: RK...

RK: RK can't build his life with u . So please get our from my life

Dipali had tears in her eyes... she asked RK " Can I know whats the problem RK:

RK:I have some requirements, Miss>Dipali.. and they are no where fulfilled by u

Dipali: Atleast tell me the list

RK smirked and said if u are interested that much, I have no objection in telling u

' if ever a girl becomes my wife I will use her, will play with her, will cheat her, will be angry on her, will love her and will make her my ever thing. Its my obsession'

Dipali laughed after listening this and said " RK, people won't say it love, they call it obsession:"

RK:Yes I am obsessed with my wife. Did u get it my dear EX. Now get lost

Dipali looked at a fierce RK and said " I wish to bet u a thing today RK, I will never let a girl Marry u"

RK:okay lets see...
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Madhu opened her Face book account to find a new friend request... Frowning she looked at the profile to find a name "RK"

Madhu felt the name similar, but when she try to recollect any person she knew by the name, she can't recollect any thing.. Frowning she opened the profile to find that he's a medical student, Madhu always have a profound interest and respect for medicos, which came out of her childhood memories with her grandfather who was a doctor.. She always respects doctors a lot, and out of that interest she added him immediately... Then she checked his profile to find a status on the wall
" I am left alone in the ocean of love... It pains a lot..."
Madhu smiled to her self and thought " How cruel this love is, whom we love we never get them and we won't be available to the one who love us..."
She then immediately changed and opened the profile of Mukund and looked at his profile picture... seeing his profile picture she smiled and continued to stare it like that till she fall a sleep..
Edited by harianjana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start, a diff story outline..

Am waiting for ur next update,i've given u buddy request, PM me next time when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice story...
plz add me to ur pmlist and pm me wen u update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsum story yaar
luved it...
pls update soon :)

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