Rishbala OS:||Will you marry me?||*cr*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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||decicated to the awesome Pritt B for writing really nice ffs||
My very first os on rishabala inspired by a song good to you~Marianas trench do listen to the song I love it <3 Ravneet

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||Will You Marry Me?||

"Everyone's around, no words are coming out.
And I can't find my breath, can we just say the rest with no sound."
Xxx
He looked at her she seemed so lost so pale he didn't know what to do, madhubala his childhood best friend was heartbroken...due to her engagement being cancelled. He thought that mukund would keep her happy but no he was wrong. Her parents and her sister they had so many dreams about madhu being happy with mukund.
~~~~~
"And I know this isn't enough, I still don't measure up.
And I'm not prepared, sorry is never there when you need it."
XxX
Rk was poor he had no money but mukund did hence rk thought that he would keep madhu happy. Despite the fact that he still loves madhu and couldn't bear to see someone with her, but she deserved someone way better than him. With a heavy heart he showed everyone he was happy.
~~~~~
"And I do want you know I hold you up above everyone.
And I do want you know I think you'd be good to me
And I'd be so good to you.
I would."
Xxx
'Rk' she clutched his shirt' am I that bad or am I ugly. Why did he decline me?' she had tears streaming down her cheeks his heart ached seeing her like this it really hurts him. It reminded him when they both were younger how madhu was picking roses and a thorn pricked her finger but rk was the one who was hurt at that time.
~~~~~
I thought I saw a sign, somewhere between the lines.
Maybe it's me, maybe I only see, what I want.
Xxx
Some months ago 'Rk I want to tell you something' madhu said shyly
'Actually madhu I do want to tell
You something' he hid a rose behind his back.. 'You first madhu' he smiled
'I...I have a proposal from mukund's house'she smiled. 'Oh..um...unable to say anything he just murmured a 'congrats' and left a confused madhu behind
~~~~~~
"But I still have your letter, just got caught between
Someone I just invented, and who I really am and who I've become."
Xxx
Back to the present..'Rk I think that day I should have just said no to this propsal and this wouldn't be happening. Rk you know I never really loved mukund. I always thought of him as a friend. But I said yes only for my family sake. Rk just smiled but I do love someone, his heart sank someone special, someone who's always with me in my good bad times. We shared some good secrets and today I'll tell you the biggest secret of my life. She cupped his cheeks and looked deep into his eyes I..I love you rishab kundra you were my first and only love I love you no matter what other or the society think I love you as you are and I accept you. that was enough for him he was on cloud nine and hugged madhu as tightly as possible.
~~~~~
"And I do want you know I hold you up above everyone.
And I do want you know I think you'd be good to me And I'd be so good to you."
Xxx
She picked the ring from the red small box and bent on her knees infront of rk.
'Will you mr. Rishabh kundra marry this stupid idotic crazy girl that loves you more than anything?'
He giggled and answered a yes
And then bent on her knees to seal his lip with hers in a passionate kiss
~~~~~
Woahh
You bring me higher.
Yeah.
I would.
XxX
The wedding day madhu descended down the stairs only to find rk's eyes staring at her deeply he looked irresistibly handsome. He gave her the sweetest smile ever and she sat in the madap holding his hand as the pandit chanted the mantras
~~~~~
"And I do want you know I hold you. up above everyone.
And I do want you know I think you'd be good to me
And I'd be so good to you.
I'd be good to you,
I'd be good to you,
I'd be so good to you..."
Xxx
As she said goodbye to her family and sat in the car 'I promise madhu after this very minute you will not cry' he wiped her tears and the car reached their house as they were about to enter rk's mom suggested madhu to do the rasams when she was ready to step rk told her to stop. Madhu looked at him shocked 'what happened?'
And then he picked her up bridal style 'there...now its better welcome home Mrs. Madhubala Rishab kundra and he winked'
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How wuz it?
Typed from my blackberry
Sorry if it was boring
Just a random thought
I don't know why I picked mukund
<3 Ravneet ;)
PS do listen to the song "good to you"

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pms will be sent out later :)
<3 Ravneet ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its really good..reading it none would be able to understand that its ur first one..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitakundra

its really good..reading it none would be able to understand that its ur first one..

Thanks and yes it my first one :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: samwllms

awwsum os...keep writing more

yes I'll write more in the future :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's one lovely OS...u deserve👏..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks a lot😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetdear

It's one lovely OS...u deserve👏..😉

thanks so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: zina.92

Amazing os
keep writing

yes i will write more soon😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ty so much😊

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