'Sweet' Dreams~ AN INCURABLE INSANITY- 10: Truce- 150!

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Hi again!
This is Simi here and as promised here I am with my FF. It is recycled- old wine in a new bottle. But I guess most of you haven't read it.
The story has nothing to do with the story of Madhubala.
It's a completely different concept.
Madhu and Rishabh are the main protagonists.
Hope you will enjoy reading it.
I am posting the prologue here. Will continue if you say so.


'Sweet' Dreams

Love: A temporary insanity curable by marriage.

Ambrose Bierce

This tale is an attempt to prove the reverse or at least give it a chance.

PROLOGUE


Her heart fluttered when she heard the sound of the key turn in the lock. She quickly adjusted her maroon silk sari with the yellow border, the one that had caught his eye and waited eagerly for his footsteps.

1-2-3-4-5-6-7...yes exactly seven steps before he stopped, hesitated for a few moments then removed his shoes one by one and arranged them neatly side by side on the shoe rack.

She smiled, he had been mindful of taking his shoes off everyday now, "I am not used to it but I will if you want me to. It's probably a good thing to do anyway."

He walked into the hall towards his favorite chair. He never sat on the settee beside her.

As he settled down, he would pick up the TV remote and without looking at her would say in his smooth baritone;"So how did you spend your day, anything interesting?"

She would shake her head, still looking down. Though out of the corner of her eyes she liked to steal glances at his feet. They were nice to look at, clean with well manicured nails. Then realizing that he was not looking at her she would vocalize in the negative.

Her soft "no" would drown easily in the raucous loud blast from the TV game.


He probably didn't hear her. He probably didn't care.

~

Thoughts welcome😊

And please care to press the 'Like' button. 😊
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INDEX
Prologue -148
Chap 1- 148
Chap 2- 148
Chap 3- 149
4: Frontiers- 149
5: 29 days Beginnings- 149
6: Hope -149
7: Trial -150
8: Error- 150
9: Reflections-150
10: Truce-150

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Posted: 12 years ago
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do pm me when u continue
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Originally posted by: didlr

nyc

do pm me when u continue

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Love: A temporary insanity curable by marriage.
🤣 looking forward to reading the rest
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sounds v nice and interesting.do continue.plz add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u update.
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Originally posted by: iiDona

unres

Love: A temporary insanity curable by marriage.
🤣 looking forward to reading the rest

😉 You may be in for a surprise.
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Originally posted by: richa13

intersting !!
do continue soon

Thank you. 😊
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sounds v nice and interesting.do continue.plz add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u update.

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hmm ur writing looks magical. well i'm one of the best ff readers of this forum lol, looking forward to ur work. pm me plz
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Originally posted by: deepak148

hmm ur writing looks magical. well i'm one of the best ff readers of this forum lol, looking forward to ur work. pm me plz

Wow! Thank you! I hope that you won't be disappointed. please accept my buddy req. 😊

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