Writing Twist for What?

Please Note: I am not comparing anyone here. Just presenting my views and if anyone doesn't understand, please ask to explain before bashing. You are free to attack my post but spare me.

I am not sure how many here have read Vladimir Nabokov's Lolita. Morally speaking, it's one disgusting book but for a reader of good literature, it's a master piece. The abstract: "Poet and pervert, Humbert Humbert becomes obsessed by twelve-year-old Lolita and seeks to possess her, first carnally and then artistically, out of love, to fix once for all the perilous magic of nymphets."

We all have our own set of wrong and rights and a different set of wrongs and rights for characters (seeing from the reaction here in the forum as we would not even in our dream like to experience the event of yesterday -- or expected to play out on Monday -- in real life). I, personally, don't have any set of wrong and rights when it comes to tales of fiction and the characters breathing in them. I am more interested in how the story is narrated and the words that the writer has weaved.

Coming back to Lolita, the character is a pervert and he remains a pervert throughout the 317 pages despite He being the narrator. He could very well have made the readers sympathize with him. He tries but never succeeds in evoking sympathy or empathy for himself.

That is where my problem lies with the writing of this daily show. Yes, my fault, I still hope to see a well written daily shows that don't start looking like a different show after a few months. If Monday was what was planned a month back, they should have given a hint via the character and prepared the viewer in advance. There should have been no lines written seeking forgiveness from Madhubala for what he did in the beginning.

I want to defend or explain the character of R.K but the writers have started making me feel, I was sitting at a poker table to watch this show. Madhubala and R.K are characters for me (and nowhere I see them as living beings) and I love watching them because the writers gave me plenty of reasons to love them together. Now, they show us public humiliation and not only add a much darker shade to R.K but also ask us to go back and paint the earlier scenes black. I don't mind the twisted twist or the completely evil R.K but why paint the beautiful image of their togetherness. They may give a valid reason but then the story has been blemished and a doubt will always linger from hereon.

Strange writing twist for the sake of what! Anyway, I hope we are on the way to see the actress track now.

P.S: Lolita is one of my favourite reads because of the beauty of its language. Lolita's writer has written a master piece but nowhere he makes you feel, you are sitting at the poker table.

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I think the almost sudden repentence of RK and change of his attitude from dexter to loverboy was the biggest hint makers gave, but like MB viewers were also fooled!!

Originally posted by: Rolzz

I think the almost sudden repentence of RK and change of his attitude from dexter to loverboy was the biggest hint makers gave, but like MB viewers were also fooled!!

I dont see anyting out of character with this twist... if anything it just underlines the fact that RK can be a dangerous serial killer...

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Neverthless some of the events clearly defies logic like getting shot, getting beaten for 4 slaps!! Really??

Originally posted by: an12345678

Bold: Now, that makes sense 😆😆😆

One still remembers the four slaps but forgets the blood that saved his life. I suddenly had this vision of him being the serial killer. Scary 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Rolzz

The mothodical way with which he took the revenge, the pain and extend he went and the pleasure he took from the final kill defenetily makes him the ideal candidate for World's Next Top Serial Killer!!

Whatever it is the twist made me come back to the show and forum...Now give me a killer Madhu and heroine track!!

That's what separates the chaff from the grain, I guess.

I never have high expectations from Indian soap writers or for that matter, movie script -writers.

And, since, I've not involved myself too much in this drama, it's very easy for me to be objective and take whatever that throw at me without flinching.

I was never convinced by the sudden "I love you" turn the story took a while ago. It looked fishy...I remember saying in one of your posts that a few seeming hints were dropped that it wasn't for real though I didn't expect the revelation to be this dramatic...silly me!

However, I wasn't exactly seated at the poker table but did wonder about a few cards that the cvs held.

I want it to be a straight forward revenge theory only because I don't have much faith in the writers to come up with anything credible...if they were so good, I should think they'd be somewhere else writing up a storm.

Originally posted by: pippa

That's what separates the chaff from the grain, I guess.

I never have high expectations from Indian soap writers or for that matter, movie script -writers.

And, since, I've not involved myself too much in this drama, it's very easy for me to be objective and take whatever that throw at me without flinching.

I was never convinced by the sudden "I love you" turn the story took a while ago. It looked fishy..

Same sentiments here 😊

Originally posted by: pippa

That's what separates the chaff from the grain, I guess.

I never have high expectations from Indian soap writers or for that matter, movie script -writers.

I always have expectation from the writers when I watch a show (I don't watch many and often ditch them after a week max) and I am always disappointed. As I said in my write-up, completely my fault.

And, since, I've not involved myself too much in this drama, it's very easy for me to be objective and take whatever that throw at me without flinching.

I am being completely objective and seeking an objective answer and since I am watching only this daily show for the last 4-5 months, this sudden twist intrigues me.

I was never convinced by the sudden "I love you" turn the story took a while ago. It looked fishy...I remember saying in one of your posts that a few seeming hints were dropped that it wasn't for real though I didn't expect the revelation to be this dramatic...silly me!

I can explain (find reason ) that sudden "I Love You" and I could have found reason to explain that R.K never reformed and was always a dark soul if they had given me one scene -- only one scene was enough.

However, I wasn't exactly seated at the poker table but did wonder about a few cards that the cvs held.

I feel like that now that I was sitting at the poker table. I usually don't wonder and let the writer take me where they wish to as it's his/her story.

I want it to be a straight forward revenge theory only because I don't have much faith in the writers to come up with anything credible...if they were so good, I should think they'd be somewhere else writing up a storm.

Same here now.

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

I think so most probably RK is faking his revenge, there must b some due 2 which he dumped MB.