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trolldemortx

@trolldemortx

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Loved it.. :D Keep on writing D.. You have a gift.. :)

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Moumita

@-SmexyGhost-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Dill it was perfect .
I so loved it.
One of the best OS i have ever read.
Keep ip the Good work Yara..!!

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-Dil-

@-Dil-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: kendra
too good😃 👏
but what about rishbala baby!!!
oh pls do tell something more about madhu's pregnancy and whether it is a boy or girl???😳
please please please please do have an epilouge

Thanks...😃

Hadn't planned on it...but let's see if I can add it in this or in a new story...😳

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KittuPratzz

@KittuPratzz

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

But as he thought about his innocent wife, whose only lover had been him,he felt a strange sensation in his chest, almost like possessiveness, making him feel like the biggest hypocrite to walk on earth ever.He couldn't think of HIS Madhu with anyone else.Ever.

huh..dis is wer..my dil goes ummm...😳😳

Dil ...i ws thumped!!! 😉 too godd narration. btw dint compelte yet..dis line made me comment first

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Soujanya

@Vsoujanya

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

👏this is an adorable story, RK's different shades, the self centered Trishna, the giving Madhu. Perfect in sync in their character. Superbly written. Hope to read more from you! 👏