Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
Look who's here...that's so cool 😆 ( i use to say that back in the day...just came to my head again)
Firstly'I must comment on how much I laugh during these chapters? Madhu's dialogues are like a remedy to soothe away a hard day'the idea of broken English was like of speck of geniusness (that is not a word :P but u know what I mean) 'there were so many funny moments in the last 4 chapters despite the seriousness of Madhu's ( I actually wrote Geet here before, I guess Maaneet are on my mind) condition that you touched on'I still smiled and laughed throughout'
PTSD ( post traumatic stress disorder) is what looks like Madhu is suffering from, where a trauma affects a person time and again'the reliving of the trauma moments, the flashs'it takes years to recover..but you presented it well'showed a short leap to show the recovery..made it realistic. RK's care and affection'I awwwed
You know when some people fall in love, they fall hard and fast'that is the case with both Rk and madhu. RK may be denial but the boy is in love already with his wifey'at least Madhu is rather direct with her feelings telling him he likes him'
Story is moving really well hun'really waiting for the next update'let's see what you have in story
Reya <3