RK's Revenge - An OS - Page 4

Originally posted by: PrittB

Everyone's been talking about RK's planning on getting revenge by making Madhu fall in love with him...so I decided to write my own OS on that with a little change in the end. Hope you like it! Keep in mind, I don't believe that RK will ever do this and don't think he's getting revenge still. I believe that RK has moved on from that and is now genuinely falling for Madhu as she's falling for him. Except he's more confused with his feelings.

RK's Revenge

(Many days after KC and Diwali)

Madhu was making dinner for RK when suddenly she heard a roar.

RK: BIWI!

Madhu quickly turned off the stove and suddenly ran out of the kitchen towards RK's room. When she walked inside she saw RK sitting on the couch watching TV.

Madhu: RK?! What is it?

RK didn't look back at his wife.

RK: Biwi, you work too much. I thought since you enjoyed our last Mr. India movie session that you would enjoy another. Join me. Today we're watching my all time favourite, Diwale Dulhani Le Jayenge.

Madhu: Since when do you lik...

RK: Since now.

Madhu smiled. She went and sat next to RK will thinking to herself, "A love story which he only came to like recently? Hmm..." She smiled to herself again but RK noticed.

RK: Why are you smiling? This scene isn't funny.

Madhu looked at RK.

Madhu: No, nothing...Just remembered something.

RK: What?

Madhu: RK, are you hungry?

RK: Biwi, I asked you something.

Madhu: I know, but I don't have to answer patidev. Like you had once said, 'delicate, handle with care'.

RK smirked. "Biwi's turning into me..." the thought of that made RK grimace. RK looked at his wife who was smiling as she watched the movie. He nonchalantly placed his arm around her on the couch. Madhu noticed RK was close; she smiled and scooted a bit closer to RK. RK noticed this and then he straightened himself up.

Madhu: Hungry?

RK: No.

They continued to watch the movie. Soon enough a romantic scene between Raj and Simran came on. RK and Madhu suddenly both felt uncomfortable. RK removed his arm and scooted to the edge of the sofa. Madhu looked at him.

Madhu: I don't bite.

RK: I never know with you.

Madhu looked at him confused. He pretended to act as if he didn't notice, though he did.

RK suddenly turned off the TV.

Madhu: What are you doing RK? The best part was coming!

RK: You weren't even watching the movie. I saw your eyes on me biwi. Stop looking at me like that...

Madhu got closer towards RK. RK was on the edge of the couch and so he couldn't move away. Madhu went and sat so close to RK that their knees were touching.

Madhu: I can't help it RK...

RK swallowed and looked at Madhu seriously.

RK: Madhu, don't...

Madhu: No. Don't stop me RK. Let me speak my mind, my heart out today.

RK got up and turned to leave. Madhu got up as well.

Madhu: RK.

RK stopped in his tracks. He felt Madhu's hand taking a hold of his. He pulled away. He turned to face Madhu with a look of frustration on his face.

RK: Madhu. I said no.

Madhu: Nothing, not even you, can stop me today. You always tell me what to do and I listen. But not today RK. Today's my day to talk and your day to listen.

RK: Are you even listening to what you're saying? You're going to tell ME what to do? Biwi you've gone crazy.

Madhu: Yes, I have. Crazy in love RK.

RK was silent. He turned around to leave again.

RK: Stupid dialogue.

Madhu: When you're not around, I feel uncomfortable.

RK stopped in his tracks again and listened to what his biwi had to say.

Madhu: I like your presence now. You're my support. You're my everything. I never thought this would happen. I never planned for it happen. But I can't help it right? If it's destined to happen, it does. You may have treated me like garbage when we first met. But you changed. I saw the change. You opened up to me. I became to feel attached to you. RK'I love you. I love you so much RK.

Madhu ran and hugged RK from behind. RK closed his eyes. He turned to face Madhu while in her embrace. She looked up at him and smiled. RK kept a straight face.

Suddenly he pushed Madhu away. The smile on Madhu's face vanished. She looked at RK in shock.

Madhu: R...

RK: SH.

RK closed his eyes and put a finger to his lips. He opened his eyes when he noticed that Madhu had silenced.

RK: Are you done talking now? Can I talk now?

Madhu nodded her head as RK walked up to her slowly with an evil smirk on his face. Madhu felt nervous suddenly. RK grabbed Madhu's shoulders tightly.

RK: You love me?

RK laughed sarcastically.

RK: Finally. Exactly what I wanted, what I planned.

Madhu: RK?

RK: Shut up. I said it's my turn to talk now. Remember how I had told you that for the four slaps you gave me, I'd make you cry for four lifetimes? Well, those four lifetimes start now.

Madhu began to tear up. She didn't understand what RK was saying but she didn't speak up. A tear fell from her eye. RK put a finger to her face and caught the tear. Madhu followed his finger as he brought the tear in front of her to show her.

RK: Ah, perfect. This is exactly what I wanted all along. True tears of pain. I tried so much to hurt you but nothing broke you. So I tried my best to get to know you, and that was when I realized that the only way to break you is to first make you. Don't understand? I MADE you fall in love with me. Just so I could break you emotionally. Destroy you. Make you cry for four lifetimes. It worked biwi...oh sorry, I mean naukar number nine. Get out of my house now. I don't want to see your face again.

RK let go of Madhu's shoulders and went to pack her luggage. Madhu was still as a statue. She was shocked. Tears fell from her eyes as her heart broke. She fell to her knees.

Within minutes RK was back beside her. He grabbed her arm and made her stand. He walked with her towards the door with her luggage. It all seemed so similar to the day RK had forcefully married her. He had dragged her motionless body around for four pheres just as he was dragging Madhu's motionless body to the door to kick her out.

They reached the door and RK threw Madhu's bag out the door. He pushed Madhu out and she fell down to her hands and knees outside the door. She didn't move. She stayed on the ground as tears fell from her shocked and hurt face.

RK: I may be kicking you out now but that doesn't mean I'll forget the 40 lakh. Be sure to pay me that back as soon as you make that amount. I'll be waiting.

RK slammed the door shut. He walked up to his room with no emotion showing on his face.

RK closed his room door behind himself. He slowly walked into the middle of his room. And then stood still.

Within seconds he was on his knees crying.

RK: I'm so sorry biwi...I had too...I didn't want you to fall in love with a guy like me. I didn't want this to happen...I had to push you away, I had no choice...you fell in love with a monster Madhu...a monster. Loving me is like loving a monster...I couldn't let that happen. I wish it never got to this point...I'm sorry...I'm...

RK continued to cry. He was out of control. He got up, walked towards his mirror and slammed his fist into the mirror in front of him. The glass shattered and his hand bled. He looked down at the blood in his hands. A tear fell from his eyes onto his wound and it stung.

RK: This pain is nothing compared to what I caused you...

RK walked to grab a bottle of alcohol.

RK: I will cry for the next four lifetimes you cry. I will hurt for the next four lifetimes you hurt...You're not the only one who fell in love...Madhu...I'm sorry.

RK opened the bottle of alcohol and began to take it all in.

Amazing OS Pritt

I really hope that RK will not push off Madhu away from him like this in serial.

I don't want either Madhu or RK get hurt now.

Don't know what the CV's plan for them.

Originally posted by: PrittB

Everyone's been talking about RK's planning on getting revenge by making Madhu fall in love with him...so I decided to write my own OS on that with a little change in the end. Hope you like it! Keep in mind, I don't believe that RK will ever do this and don't think he's getting revenge still. I believe that RK has moved on from that and is now genuinely falling for Madhu as she's falling for him. Except he's more confused with his feelings.

RK's Revenge

(Many days after KC and Diwali)

Madhu was making dinner for RK when suddenly she heard a roar.

RK: BIWI!

Madhu quickly turned off the stove and suddenly ran out of the kitchen towards RK's room. When she walked inside she saw RK sitting on the couch watching TV.

Madhu: RK?! What is it?

RK didn't look back at his wife.

RK: Biwi, you work too much. I thought since you enjoyed our last Mr. India movie session that you would enjoy another. Join me. Today we're watching my all time favourite, Diwale Dulhani Le Jayenge.

Madhu: Since when do you lik...

RK: Since now.

Madhu smiled. She went and sat next to RK will thinking to herself, "A love story which he only came to like recently? Hmm..." She smiled to herself again but RK noticed.

RK: Why are you smiling? This scene isn't funny.

Madhu looked at RK.

Madhu: No, nothing...Just remembered something.

RK: What?

Madhu: RK, are you hungry?

RK: Biwi, I asked you something.

Madhu: I know, but I don't have to answer patidev. Like you had once said, 'delicate, handle with care'.

RK smirked. "Biwi's turning into me..." the thought of that made RK grimace. RK looked at his wife who was smiling as she watched the movie. He nonchalantly placed his arm around her on the couch. Madhu noticed RK was close; she smiled and scooted a bit closer to RK. RK noticed this and then he straightened himself up.

Madhu: Hungry?

RK: No.

They continued to watch the movie. Soon enough a romantic scene between Raj and Simran came on. RK and Madhu suddenly both felt uncomfortable. RK removed his arm and scooted to the edge of the sofa. Madhu looked at him.

Madhu: I don't bite.

RK: I never know with you.

Madhu looked at him confused. He pretended to act as if he didn't notice, though he did.

RK suddenly turned off the TV.

Madhu: What are you doing RK? The best part was coming!

RK: You weren't even watching the movie. I saw your eyes on me biwi. Stop looking at me like that...

Madhu got closer towards RK. RK was on the edge of the couch and so he couldn't move away. Madhu went and sat so close to RK that their knees were touching.

Madhu: I can't help it RK...

RK swallowed and looked at Madhu seriously.

RK: Madhu, don't...

Madhu: No. Don't stop me RK. Let me speak my mind, my heart out today.

RK got up and turned to leave. Madhu got up as well.

Madhu: RK.

RK stopped in his tracks. He felt Madhu's hand taking a hold of his. He pulled away. He turned to face Madhu with a look of frustration on his face.

RK: Madhu. I said no.

Madhu: Nothing, not even you, can stop me today. You always tell me what to do and I listen. But not today RK. Today's my day to talk and your day to listen.

RK: Are you even listening to what you're saying? You're going to tell ME what to do? Biwi you've gone crazy.

Madhu: Yes, I have. Crazy in love RK.

RK was silent. He turned around to leave again.

RK: Stupid dialogue.

Madhu: When you're not around, I feel uncomfortable.

RK stopped in his tracks again and listened to what his biwi had to say.

Madhu: I like your presence now. You're my support. You're my everything. I never thought this would happen. I never planned for it happen. But I can't help it right? If it's destined to happen, it does. You may have treated me like garbage when we first met. But you changed. I saw the change. You opened up to me. I became to feel attached to you. RK'I love you. I love you so much RK.

Madhu ran and hugged RK from behind. RK closed his eyes. He turned to face Madhu while in her embrace. She looked up at him and smiled. RK kept a straight face.

Suddenly he pushed Madhu away. The smile on Madhu's face vanished. She looked at RK in shock.

Madhu: R...

RK: SH.

RK closed his eyes and put a finger to his lips. He opened his eyes when he noticed that Madhu had silenced.

RK: Are you done talking now? Can I talk now?

Madhu nodded her head as RK walked up to her slowly with an evil smirk on his face. Madhu felt nervous suddenly. RK grabbed Madhu's shoulders tightly.

RK: You love me?

RK laughed sarcastically.

RK: Finally. Exactly what I wanted, what I planned.

Madhu: RK?

RK: Shut up. I said it's my turn to talk now. Remember how I had told you that for the four slaps you gave me, I'd make you cry for four lifetimes? Well, those four lifetimes start now.

Madhu began to tear up. She didn't understand what RK was saying but she didn't speak up. A tear fell from her eye. RK put a finger to her face and caught the tear. Madhu followed his finger as he brought the tear in front of her to show her.

RK: Ah, perfect. This is exactly what I wanted all along. True tears of pain. I tried so much to hurt you but nothing broke you. So I tried my best to get to know you, and that was when I realized that the only way to break you is to first make you. Don't understand? I MADE you fall in love with me. Just so I could break you emotionally. Destroy you. Make you cry for four lifetimes. It worked biwi...oh sorry, I mean naukar number nine. Get out of my house now. I don't want to see your face again.

RK let go of Madhu's shoulders and went to pack her luggage. Madhu was still as a statue. She was shocked. Tears fell from her eyes as her heart broke. She fell to her knees.

Within minutes RK was back beside her. He grabbed her arm and made her stand. He walked with her towards the door with her luggage. It all seemed so similar to the day RK had forcefully married her. He had dragged her motionless body around for four pheres just as he was dragging Madhu's motionless body to the door to kick her out.

They reached the door and RK threw Madhu's bag out the door. He pushed Madhu out and she fell down to her hands and knees outside the door. She didn't move. She stayed on the ground as tears fell from her shocked and hurt face.

RK: I may be kicking you out now but that doesn't mean I'll forget the 40 lakh. Be sure to pay me that back as soon as you make that amount. I'll be waiting.

RK slammed the door shut. He walked up to his room with no emotion showing on his face.

RK closed his room door behind himself. He slowly walked into the middle of his room. And then stood still.

Within seconds he was on his knees crying.

RK: I'm so sorry biwi...I had too...I didn't want you to fall in love with a guy like me. I didn't want this to happen...I had to push you away, I had no choice...you fell in love with a monster Madhu...a monster. Loving me is like loving a monster...I couldn't let that happen. I wish it never got to this point...I'm sorry...I'm...

RK continued to cry. He was out of control. He got up, walked towards his mirror and slammed his fist into the mirror in front of him. The glass shattered and his hand bled. He looked down at the blood in his hands. A tear fell from his eyes onto his wound and it stung.

RK: This pain is nothing compared to what I caused you...

RK walked to grab a bottle of alcohol.

RK: I will cry for the next four lifetimes you cry. I will hurt for the next four lifetimes you hurt...You're not the only one who fell in love...Madhu...I'm sorry.

RK opened the bottle of alcohol and began to take it all in.

Originally posted by: sp110

this story should not work as you wished it to be as it will loose the interest in coming days. These are very dangerous kind of ideas for the future episodes to come if it would happen.

Why don't you stop and let the good bonding continue and write something on that

It is terrifying...

Originally posted by: .Priya2000.

🥺

Well written ⭐️

it will be very painful for us to watch this , while reading my heart cried 😭

Originally posted by: --Udhay--

Ha Ha! Well said.. If i post mine, it'll be a repetition yar.. Anyways, ur OS is wonderful.. :)

Originally posted by: DevilClan

It was vry sad bt fab. The dialouge that i lykd is -The only way to break you is to first make you.

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

love your take on things!