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Posted: 12 years ago
Mind blowing plot
I waited a little and read a lot of chapters together... just to avoid being hitched with a cliff hanger 😆

Adorable Annie and our cute Rishbala
this FF is a treat to read 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update as usual.
The story is going vry well.
Cont soon &
Thanxx fr the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update kendra continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
update yaar and a long update
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow wow wow.superb.nw rk knws about annie.hope they will b together soon.its really a v nice story.keep it up.👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent update..thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 13-


❤️...Sparks Fly...❤️

if you out there,if you're somewhere,if you moving on
i have been waiting for you , wary since you've been gone
i just wanna back the way you was before,
i just wanna see you back at my front door.
and i say...
come back , come back,come back to me
like you could before you said that's not that easy
before the fight before i left you out.
but it take all back now
come back , come back,come back to me
like you would ,you would if you just said you're sorry
i know that we could work it out somehow.
but if this was a movie, you'd be here right now.



rk stormed out of the madhu's room and found annie standing at reception.
rk : you're still her, sweetheart??
annie : yes, badi maa didn't came.
rk : oh! by the way . i just came to return your diary.(gives her diary )
annie : (innocently) you are angry on my mumma?
rk : (bewildered) why??
annie : i know she did something wrong !!!but please don't take her job. mumma is already too stressed regarding me. she has to pay electricity bill,water bill,phone bill, my school fees. and she also promised me ken for my barbie doll. so that barbie is not alone.
rk : i promise i will never do anything like that. your mumma loves you and your papa too.
annie : do you know my papa too??
rk : i think so.
annie : please take me to him. i want to meet him and scold him . i want to ask why he never met me??
rk : not now but i promise i will . but keep this a secret.(winks)
annie (winks) : ok !!! mr. sexy.


next day on sets:
madhu is embarrassed to face rk again. she tried hard to forget everything but can't. she thinks of rk's next step . then to put a full stop to all this she goes to rk's vanity van where rk was watching tv.
at first he gets startled by her but then-
rk : welcome biwi!!! wanna enjoy mr. india??
madhu flinched at the word biwi. now she was not used to be addressed like that.
madhu : rk ,i wanted to talk about annie.
rk : annie?? why biwi ?? (switches off the tv)
madhu : i just wanted to tell you that if you take the matter to court , i will fight for her custody. i am not going to let her go with you.
rk : look annie is my daughter also and i would never like to see her at court. i don't want to ruin her innocence.
madhu : that's why i request you. please do not tell her anything.
rk : (smirks) don't worry i will not. cause you yourself will tell her the truth .
madhu : what??
rk : ya, you heard it right. i will not do anything . you yourself will come back into my life and will tell annie everything.
now please go out . i need to change and i don't change in front of anyone other than my wife.
madhu fumes in anger and leaves.


the whole week went in same way. madhu tried hard to ignore rk but each and everything reminded her of him. annie cleverly found rk's number from her mumma's phone and called rk . rk was extremely glad to hear from her. so annie and rk secretly called and chatted on phone when madhu would be busy. madhu go irritated on seeing rk talking so sweetly with someone . when she asked him , he told her that he was talking to his girlfriend which made madhu jealous.

then one day (in evening):
madhu was alone at home as annie and badi maa had gone to market. suddenly her door bell rang.she opened the door and found rk standing there.
madhu : rk??
rk didn't replied. he pushed her a little inside and closed the door behind him.
madhu : (shocked) what are you doing??
he than started to slowly pace towards her. madhu started to back off.
madhu : rk !!! what happened ??
suddenly she realized that she couldn't move because he had pinned her to the wall.
madhu : stop it rk !! anni...
rk : (smirks) annie has gone to market. i know you are all alone.
madhu : just stay away from me otherwise i will scream.
rk : your wish. if you will , you know i would easily close your mouth (he said pointing towards her lips).
madhu : you can't do this.
rk : (smiles) yes i can, cause you are my wife and i have right to do so. don't you think annie needs a little brother to play with.
madhu : (shocked) what ???
he then begins to come closer to madhu . madhu shuts her eyes. but rk stops inches from her face.
madhu slowly opens her eyes to see him standing away from her.
rk : what happened??
suddenly doorbell rings and annie and badi maa are back.
annie: rk uncle!! (she rushes and hugs him)
rk : hi sweetheart!! look what i brought (he gives s box to her)
annie : wow!!! choco walnut brownie.
badi maa : beta you here? is everything all right (she said this hinting it to madhu)
rk : yes aunty . i just came here to invite all of you especially annie to my movie's launch party.
annie : can i come??
rk : (looking at madhu) ofcourse!! this invitation is for you especially.
annie: i will surely come. will go na mumma??(looks at madhu)
madhu doesn't replies.
badi maa :what will you have beta??
rk : oh , no problem. i just have to leave.bye!!
annie : bye!!
he then looks at madhu who is still angry .
rk : bye madhubala...ahaan !!!
annie : ahaan!!! (rk similes at her but both annie and rk stop smiling after seeing the face of madhu)
rk then goes out and annie rushes to her room to choose her dress for party.


Edited by kendra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it kendra and only one thing i will say, plz update next part now lol.
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Posted: 12 years ago
U should become a writer u are sooo amazing no wonder y ppl moan not forgetting me to Update Quick n longer Update cause we r sooo intereseted in ta story to knw wat happens
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Waiting to see how RK will workout things with Madhu and how Madhu will tell Annie that RK is her dad.

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