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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART II


They both reached the room hand in hand. Finally rk casually left the hand before he could feel conscious.
Madhu was still staring at rk. Anger started creeping in.
She remembered the scene downstairs. Rk coughing with his life in his hand! She could again feel the fear in her veins remembering the gun shot, knife and now this.
Her blood started boiling! The admiration in her eyes changed to a frown!
Rk casually turned towards her after walking in the room and saw her still standing at the same place and change of emotions on her face.
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He was taken aback for a moment!
What is she thinking? He could hardly figure out anything when a ringing noise banged his head.
Madhu- Kya zarurat thi wo Sab Karne ki tym Jante bhi ho mein jitna dar gayi thi? Tumhe to Kya ? Bas acting Kari or phir lecture de diya but tumhe ab kon samjhaye mr. Rishab Kundra ye tumhara set nahi Ghar hai! Or mein audience nahi Tumhari biwi hu!!
She kept on blabbering and scolding him. Rk tried interrupting with calming words like relax etc but no effect.

Rks face had several emotions shock, smile, concern, smirk, arrogance, attitude...
Rk- madhu meine jo bhi kiya Ghar walo ko batane ke liye kiya ki Tum kabhi meri jaan nahi le sakti!
Madhu- par mein bahut dar...
She couldn't finish...

Rk- janta hu!! Tum dar gayi thi pareshaan thi par wo jo meine kiya wo zaroori tha!
Madhu started forming tears in her eyes! She was again emotional thinking that he was the same man his father tried to kill , his husband and here he was protecting her from his own family !! He is the same man who saved him from going to jail!
Yes save him ? But why ? This question rung her again but she knew he would not answer.

She was feeling very guilty
And by now started crying! Rk was really very perplexed by her sudden breakdown he tried calling her back out of her thoughts but she was still the same!

Rk- aaj tak meine itni tareef to Apni acting ki bhi nahi ki kitne aaj Tumhari ki!!!!
After trying a lot and not really knowing by the end what to do he pulled get in a hug!
Yes hug! She cried on!! Once again wetting his shirt!
Rk- madhu relax!

When all this didn't work
Rk said a little louder BIWI

Madhu looked up. Rk cupped her face
Rk- it's ok! Relax sasurji ne jo kiya woh ek baap ki nazar se galat nahi tha unhone Sahi kiya Apni beti ko bachana chaha or Haan meine bhi unki ek damad bankar madad ki!!
Papa ne jaha tha ki ek Baap ke liye uske aulad he sabkuch hoti hai or Uska dukh uski maut!!
Or Haan jaha tak ye bhatias ka sawal hai to inke pass kam demaag or 2gm ki zuban ke saath itna bada muh hai to kuch to bolenge he!!!
Mana shopkeeper ne shirt ko aasuo se dhone ke liye kaha tha Jise shine bani rahe Lakin hafte mein ek bar na ki har din!
Madhu admires HER husband and smiles. Rk too smiles !!
Both have an eye lock!!! Soon They get conscious and back off!!!

Rk- tumhe rona bahut pasand hai! Agar aisa hai to mein ek balti ka intzaam kara deta Hun!
Ek ek Asso ki kimat jan jao biwi!
Chalo ab meri dialogues yaad Karne mein madad karo!! Kal shooting pe bhi jaana hai!!

Precap- rk telling abt his acting career! Madhubala happy to know her imp. - proud. Someone arrives!

Sorry It's little short because on the same date!! Update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Hey snighdaa u r going on a beautiful pace with a beautiful story yaaar...i wish aisaa hee kuch ho kal show par...I just wish that RK is acting warna dhak dhak madhu kiii haal tohhh ufff...dont even want to thinkkk...
Goood going...continue soooner,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Awesome dear...👏...plzzz continue...Dialogues too r dhansu...RK type...👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Loved da way and pace with which the story is progressing.keep it up.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
lovely update 😳❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
You didn't pm me. plz pm next tym. great update and plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Luvd both d parts. It was cute to c Rishbala moments.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
A Very Nice Update. RK comforting Madhu is soo soothing.
Hope this happens in the serial.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
ohh.. u actually added my idea.. madhu got engry on rk... so sweet thnx...
again good job..
waitin for the next1

btw raat abhi baaki he.. cnt they hv little cute fight over rks medicines..lol..😉
n cn madhu stop rk for not going on shoots coz she still thinks that he is not fit yet..hmmm???😆

well hop to hv a gr8 updat sooonnn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Nice OS..Liked both updates.Do continue soon😛

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