SS: The Devil's Game (RiMa) UPDATED PG 11 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Really nice dear 👏. Pls continue soon. can you pls give an index for the chapters so that it will be easy to find the updates 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Very nice update. Plz do me pm whenever u update next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Very nice update...Amazing..
Plz do me pm whenever u update next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys! I actually haven't updated for a long time. Sorry!

I don't even know if people will read or not but here goes nothing.

By the way WARNING : THERE IS VIOLENCE AND A BIT (really small bit) OF CURSING.

Just thought to put it out there.

ENJOY!


Chapter Three:

His hand slashed out to grab the man's throat. His fingers dug into his skin. The kidnapper was caught off guard and his gun dropped onto the seat. The hand was tight around his throat and he couldn't breath. He was gagging and the dangerous part was that he saw death in RK's eyes.

He tried to claw at his hands to set himself free but it was no use. It only tightened further and he saw black spots in front of his eyes. He was fainting, blacking in and out.

RK could care less if the man in front of him died or not. But he wasn't stupid enough to miss this chance to grab the gun. His other hand took the gun and held it firmly.

"Let him go! Let him go!"

RK almost snorted.

Let him go? He'll kill both of them in the car right now and leave.

Will he regret it? No, not one bit. They didn't deserve to live especially after what they said.

The driver yelled again and RK didn't pay attention. Instead he said, "Stop the car." The car slowed down but didn't stop, not yet. The lanky kidnapper had fainted now and his body sagged on the seat. He slowly took away his fingers away from the mans neck, one by one, and said; "Now you listen to me. You're going to stop this car. And I'll let you go to your boss without hurting you."

RK moved and had the barrel of the gun pressed against the driver's temple. The driver slammed the breaks in fright and stilled.

A smirk played RK's lips, "I see you get what I mean. It's really sad, really, how your boss didn't better equip you. Maybe he send you here to die by my hands." RK tightened his finger on the trigger and the driver's eyes flew to that small movement noticing it on the rear mirror.

He trembled and sweat gathered on his forehead. He opened his mouth to speak but nothing came out. RK laughed but it was a taunting chilling noise, a sound of dark amusement. And just as it came it was gone and what was left was a face filled with anger. So much anger and rage. The man noticed that RK's control was slipping or it had already slipped. A dangerous thought.

The butt of the gun was now digging into his temple and in a rough voice RK said, "Tell your f**king boss that if he ever touches what's mine I'll kill him in a slow death. He'll beg for mercy and he'll never get it. I f**kin' guarantee it."

And then with a slam of the car door he was gone. All that was there was the driver shaking with fear. He'll never forget RK's face or how close he was coming to his death, as long as he lived.

Edited by Seresa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
Jus now i found your SS and read the chapters in one go.. Its amazing.. I likes rishab character and the your narration 👏
Please PM me whenever you update your work, 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
the title had me very curious. And now I am curious as to when you will be updating again??? 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
m so glad u updated it! i cudnt find it...i was actually searching for it since long

its a brilliant SS...pls continue soon n give longer updates plss pls pls 😳

thank u for PM 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
I can't be believe he actually got himself free !! RK awesome in this one !! But where is Madhu ?? Hope they meet soon...do continue soon this time please 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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RK IS OBSESSED WITH HIS WIFE
AND ANYBODY SEEING HER WITH BAD INTENTIONS HAS JUST SIGNED HIS DEATH WARRANT
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
liked your ss read all the chapters. pls send me pm of your next update

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