Plausibility, thy name is not Madhubala

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Leaving well aside the superhuman pedestrian skills of our heroine, who should have won walking gold in the Olympics, ( must be her magical cinderella shoes that become flats when walking in the rain) let us consider for a moment the pathetic health and safety conditions at Natraj Studios.

I mean, come on writers! At least make an effort. No insurer would under-write such a work-site for two pennies, let alone an RK starrer.

The plot holes in this were as big as that big hole on the bridge. And the plausibility as low as the level of vodka in Rishabs's glass ( ie absent)

The scene with RK and mom was actually very good. Just use less glycerine next time, Radhaji. It is beginning to carve permanent crevasses in your makeup.

But I don't believe for a moment RK goes to say sorry to his wife. Or at least I very much hope he wasn't. 'Madhooo' is she from now on? Hmmm. Big hmmm.

Please writers, use a little bit of imagination next time. Also, continuity girl, you get zero points for the footwear fiasco.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Also, the tripping security guard? What was that about? Weirdness, galore!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really good points😊, but such bloopers are almost negligible compared to what could be served up. 😆

And if the result is what the audience wants - the lead pair having sizzling scenes together -, then why be critical? Logic pales in comparison to feasting the eyes on the MB lead pairing together😳, in pretty much any sort of scene.

Please, could you be gentler in the titling and tone of such critical posts? You raise very good points, but people tend to be a bit wary because of some very ill-intent posts that were also openly critical. Even you were unfortunately mistaken for one of those posters at the outset.

If you could maybe balance out a critique with the stuff that was good, maybe? Bloopers, balanced with dialogues and scenes that you liked very much? The Mary Poppins line about a spoonful of sugar helping the medicine go down really does keep vibes from being misunderstood.

Your writing really is lovely. And the post about the tel-maalish episode was appreciated, because the criticism was couched in great humour.

You do raise good points, and titles like 'Plausibility, thy name is not Madhubala' would not be taken so ill if this forum had not already had to contend with very destructive critics.

Sorry for bothering you with this. Please don't take offence.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Positive Criticism !!! Loved It👏 !!!... its our duty to share ...not the liking alone ...the disliking factors are much needed as it will help the team to improve more... the show is better now .. we can really make it the best one on TV if we clearly say them what needs to be taken care of...

my heart felt appreciation for the post dear... pointing out the flaws doesn't always mean that we love the show any less 👍🏼...

this is not a negative post people... appreciate it ... its the hearts outlet... as we are expecting more ...and we want our show MEIEJ to be the BESTEST!!!

luv n 🤗
BellaPearl

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: leelaa9

Really good points😊, but such bloopers are almost negligible compared to what could be served up. 😆

And if the result is what the audience wants - the lead pair having sizzling scenes together -, then why be critical? Logic pales in comparison to feasting the eyes on the MB lead pairing together😳, in pretty much any sort of scene.

Please, could you be gentler in the titling and tone of such critical posts? You raise very good points, but people tend to be a bit wary because of some very ill-intent posts that were also openly critical. Even you were unfortunately mistaken for one of those posters at the outset.

If you could maybe balance out a critique with the stuff that was good, maybe? Bloopers, balanced with dialogues and scenes that you liked very much? The Mary Poppins line about a spoonful of sugar helping the medicine go down really does keep vibes from being misunderstood.

Your writing really is lovely. And the post about the tel-maalish episode was appreciated, because the criticism was couched in great humour.

You do raise good points, and titles like 'Plausibility, thy name is not Madhubala' would not be taken so ill if this forum had not already had to contend with very destructive critics.

Sorry for bothering you with this. Please don't take offence.


Thank you Leela! Much appreciated.
Re sizzle with the lead pair. You have them in a domestic sitch. If you can't imagine hot situations involving late night encounters in kitchens, bathrooms, bedrooms, elevators ( the list goes on) you don't deserve to be a writer. Just sayin'! ( here, by you i don't mean you you obviously, but the show's writers.)

I take the weird atmosphere of the forum, and see why I would stand out. It is my sense of humour-- it tends to be v dry, and so not to too many get it immediately on here.

Plus, this? Is hardly withering. When i do withering criticism EVERYBODY knows, ha ha. But i really do try to be gentle, even though perhaps i could try harder.

Have any of the people on here read the TWOP critiques? They would make them have apoplectic fits!

But point taken. More humour, less bite!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArabellaPearl

Positive Criticism !!! Loved It👏 !!!... its our duty to share ...not the liking alone ...the disliking factors are much needed as it will help the team to improve more... the show is better now .. we can really make it the best one on TV if we clearly say them what needs to be taken care of...

my heart felt appreciation for the post dear... pointing out the flaws doesn't always mean that we love the show any less 👍🏼...

this is not a negative post people... appreciate it ... its the hearts outlet... as we are expecting more ...and we want our show MEIEJ to be the BESTEST!!!

luv n 🤗


BellaPearl


You get a GIANT hug for this post. I mean, giant like simon cowell's ego.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I thought I was the only one who noticed the flats the heels ...funny
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Originally posted by: makeveli_hush

I thought I was the only one who noticed the flats the heels ...funny


Did you see my tag line? It's not just meant to creep people out. I mean it when i say ' always watching' he he he.

What to do? I notice these things. And am glad you do too!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rofl about the slippers...they could have remebered the continuity.,...rofl
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: leelaa9

Really good points😊, but such bloopers are almost negligible compared to what could be served up. 😆

And if the result is what the audience wants - the lead pair having sizzling scenes together -, then why be critical? Logic pales in comparison to feasting the eyes on the MB lead pairing together😳, in pretty much any sort of scene.

Please, could you be gentler in the titling and tone of such critical posts? You raise very good points, but people tend to be a bit wary because of some very ill-intent posts that were also openly critical. Even you were unfortunately mistaken for one of those posters at the outset.

If you could maybe balance out a critique with the stuff that was good, maybe? Bloopers, balanced with dialogues and scenes that you liked very much? The Mary Poppins line about a spoonful of sugar helping the medicine go down really does keep vibes from being misunderstood.

Your writing really is lovely. And the post about the tel-maalish episode was appreciated, because the criticism was couched in great humour.

You do raise good points, and titles like 'Plausibility, thy name is not Madhubala' would not be taken so ill if this forum had not already had to contend with very destructive critics.

Sorry for bothering you with this. Please don't take offence.


Also, your post is beautifully written. Forgot to say. Hugs!
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