A night to remember or forget?...RishBala OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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lol..my first attempt at writing an OS
Here goes nothing...😆






Madhu sat dumbstruck in her room...thinking of whatever that happened at the hospital...
Every scene perfectly imprinted in her mind...Malik's eyes questioning her...Wanting to know the truth from her mouth...wanting Madhu to say otherwise...With tears rolling down her eyes...she looked at herself...

She had just walked into the house all drenched in the rain...she didn't even feel like getting up..and changing...she has failed herself...she has failed her family..her Malik...she closed her eyes...trying to forget everything that happened in the last few hours...No..she can't..she will never be able to forget this day..ever...

With a sinking heart..she got up to change her dress...Only to come out all determined...
she made up her mind...this is it...she is never gonna take anymore of RK's attitude...she is gonna stand up to him...she is no more Madhubala Shamsher Malik...She is Madhubala Rishab Kundra...and she is gonna make sure RK understand that..

With that raging confidence...she walked upto RK's room...She glared at the Man standing before her...and said Mr Rishab Kundra...

Rk turned around, a bit surprised..

RK: Biwi..you here??what pleasure do i owe to have your presence in my room...?(with a smirk ofcoz)

Madhu: I am not gonna be your Spot anymore.

Rk was a bit taken aback, but he didn't let it show. She took a glass and poured his whiskey..and walked up to Madhu...

RK: Biwi, why is that??
Madhu: it's just the way it is RK. I don't need to justify anything to you Mr RK...
I am your wife and its high time i act like a wife.
She glares at him one more time..and walks out of the room.

RK just looks at the glass in his hand, a evil grin spreads on his face.
RK says to himself...
You wanna be my wife huh...I am gonna make you my wife then..
Careful what you wish for...biwi...


RK had send a saree for her to wear...its a beautiful black saree...she looked herself in the mirror and did the final touch ups...she starts to Wonder...what cooking in his mind now..

He has organized a party at his house..for all his friends...
But..she was ready...Ready to face anything thrown at her...
with that confidence..she walked out of her room and into the party...

She stood there a moment..in awe of the surroundings...all the lights...the decor...it was nothing like she has ever seen before...she was amused..and walked down the stairs..slowly...taking in the surroundings...

Only once she got down the last step that she realized..the people around her..all their eyes on her..murmuring...Mrs Madhubala RK...She felt a bit embarrassed...But..before she could react...a hand came from some where around her waist...

Good evening ladies and Gentleman...(RK's voice boomed)
Today i have organised this party to introduce to one and all...My lovely wife..Madhubala...RK looked at her with smirk...Madhu could only stare at him...
she looked at everyone around her...she felt like an exhibit...RK's exhibit..she felt disgusted...she tried to free RK's hand from her waist...but he wouldn't let go...

RK: you wanted to be my wife huh...biwi...
A husband have every right on his wife...EVERY...his wicked smile spreading across his face...he announced...ok people...you have all met my lovely wife...now lets have some music...and enjoy...

Madhu manages to free herself...But RK catch hold of her hand..and swirls her around...and hold her so close..that Madhu could feel his heartbeat...he moved his hand around her back...catching her so tight that it hurts...Madhu pleads with her eyes to let her go...But he wouldn't...he swirls her around in a passionate dance...

"Yeh.. raat ruk jaye..Baat tham jaye...Teri bahoon mein...Khwaishein jagi hain
Pyase pyase labon pe Sii..Khud ko jala doon..Teri aahon mein
Aagosh mein.. Mere aaj samah jaa..Jaane kya hona hai kal
Aa zara..Kareeb se jo pal mile..Naseeb se..Aa ja zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile..Naseeb se jile'"


Madhu could not understand what was happening to her...she was staring at his eyes...
and for some reason, she could see an unknown pain in his eyes...for some reason,,in that very second..she felt like she belonged in his arms...it felt so right...
so she went along with it...along with the music...she danced with him...like no tomorrow...totally giving in to the man she hates...forgetting everything around her..

RK moves up his hand from her waist..and cups Madhu's face...(well..ok..i let you people decide what happens next..let your imagination run wild...😆)

Suddenly..the music stops, and Madhu comes back to reality..and realize what she was doing...With sudden jerk..she pushes RK away...and looks at him in all shock and amazement...Cups her mouth with her hand...she looks all around her...people are staring at her in disbelief...at them...tears comes rolling down her cheeks...she stood there for a moment...not knowing what to do...

What have i done...?how did this happen...?

She rushes up the stairs..into her room...
She starts to remove her bangles and earrings in complete disgust of what just happened...

and breaks down under the shower...
still questioning what happened few minutes ago...
She drowned her tears with the flowing water...
Hoping to forget the night ever happened...



Ok..so now...dont throw chappals at me...
Its my first try...😆



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice first try :D I liked it- but yaar if MB goes i dnt want to be your spot-(he would probz smirk and be like we shall see *tick tock tick tock*😆😆😆Waise atleast this helps to keep my mind from thinking tooo much in relation to the kiss and dance😆😆 but you gave us an option of allowing our imagination to run wild😆😆 (ok i make no sense, thats how excited i am haha)
I love how both were lost in one another <3 but i want RK to be lost, leading the way and eventually kissing her, having been amazed at how wonderfully her lips were shaped! The lipstick making it glow, he was trying so hard to resist those wonderful lips, but alas he could no longer control himself!! (chalooo🤣 i will stop!!😆😆😆
Edited by _innocent_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _innocent_

Nice first try :D I liked it- but yaar if MB goes i dnt want to be your spot-(he would probz smirk and be like we shall see *tick tock tick tock*😆😆😆Waise atleast this helps to keep my mind from thinking tooo much in relation to the kiss and dance😆😆 but you gave us an option of allowing our imagination to run wild😆😆 (ok i make no sense, thats how excited i am haha)

I love how both were lost in one another <3 but i want RK to be lost, leading the way and eventually kissing her, having been amazed at how wonderfully her lips were shaped! The lipstick making it glow, he was trying so hard to resist those wonderful lips, but alas he could no longer control himself!! (chalooo🤣 i will stop!!😆😆😆



Thanks Jules..

I didn't wanna show my wild side..and my gutter mind..which mind you..is very nasty..😆
That's why i let the readers imagine the rest..😆

This is my first and last attempt..
Don't know what made me write this..😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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The kissing buzzz is making you go wild, hence you are penning it down😆 Waise on a serious note, you should try another one, and see how it goes-😳 maybe after the kissing scene- RK decides to take it to another level (shut up Julie😆😆)Hahaha we must keep our gutter minds in control warna direct ban😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _innocent_

The kissing buzzz is making you go wild, hence you are penning it down😆 Waise on a serious note, you should try another one, and see how it goes-😳 maybe after the kissing scene- RK decides to take it to another level (shut up Julie😆😆)Hahaha we must keep our gutter minds in control warna direct ban😆



Oh julie julie...😆

You are seriously the entire sewage system..😆

Edited by devikamd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Julie ...branded or unbranded shoes ...which I do u prefer ?? 😆comtrol urself before I throw at you ...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: _innocent_

Nice first try :D I liked it- but yaar if MB goes i dnt want to be your spot-(he would probz smirk and be like we shall see *tick tock tick tock*😆😆😆Waise atleast this helps to keep my mind from thinking tooo much in relation to the kiss and dance😆😆 but you gave us an option of allowing our imagination to run wild😆😆 (ok i make no sense, thats how excited i am haha)

I love how both were lost in one another <3 but i want RK to be lost, leading the way and eventually kissing her, having been amazed at how wonderfully her lips were shaped! The lipstick making it glow, he was trying so hard to resist those wonderful lips, but alas he could no longer control himself!! (chalooo🤣 i will stop!!😆😆😆


well said dear..agree😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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in bw, Devu ...its really nice and very much believable too ...I mean I hope they both get so involved in the sequence for few minutes forgetting what has happened bw them so far ...😳 and then we can have ...Ahem Ahem ...with full consent instead of forced or shocking one ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Manonids

Julie ...branded or unbranded shoes ...which I do u prefer ?? 😆comtrol urself before I throw at you ...😆

Branded pleasee😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wohaa...Fantastic...👍🏼

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