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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys this is Sana and other than this i have another ff on this forum called Meri jaan. I dont know how i should write the prologue but ill write the character sketch.



Rishabh Kundra- loves his wife very much. He is all kind helpful and careful for his fans producers and directors. He fell in love with madhu the first time he saw her. He is the father of Ishita. He is a very romantic husband. He used to be mean but is a changed man. He is hated by Madhu's father Balraj Singh Chaudhary.

Madhubala Kundra- loves Rishabh and Ishita very much. Her entire world revolves around her family; Rishabh, Ishita, and Balraj. But everytime RiMa fight, Rishabh is the one that (most of time) that has to say sorry. The servants obey her more than Rishabh.

Balraj Singh Chaudhary- loves his daughter Madhu to no limits. But hates Rishabh because he is a actor. He thinks that Rishabh likes his daughter because of her wealthy background. Ishita is the only thing that made him happy about RiMa marriage.

Ishita Kundra- is the daughter of Rishabh and Madhu. She is a really lovely kid. She gets all the attention from everyone in the family including Balraj. The servants of the Kundra place call her baby ji, Rishabh calls her princess, Balraj calls her raj kumari, RiMa call her Ishu. She is brought up like a princess too. It is always Rishabh that showers her with toys and whatever she asks for. Though Madhu loves her more than anyone.


Side Characters...
Padmani- she died while giving birth too Madhu.
Roma- she brought up Madhu while Balraj was busy with work.
Trishna- Madhu's best friend.
Bittu ji- Ishita calls him chachu. He is RK's manager. He was the one that stayed with Madhu when she was pregnant. Madhu thinks of him like her older brother.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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CS- pg1

Guys how ever wants a pm for this ff just hit like only. If u dont then im sorry but i wont be going through pages to find the people who want pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice to see Balraj loving his daughter finally.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice CS.

loved it.

concept seems to be really interesting.

plz do cont soon and add me in ur pMlist.

esha
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: backy

nice CS.


loved it.

concept seems to be reallyinteresting.

plz do cont soon and add me in ur pMlist.

esha



Ok ur the first n last one that im gonna send pm. U have to hit like for pm on the first post after the cs
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Producer calls Rk- Rk humne ek hotel dekha hai shooting ke liye Padmini Pearls hotel its one of the best in the country. Meine owner Balraj Chaudhary se baat ki lekin shooting ke liye maana kar diya hai. Agar tum mere saath ake baat karo toh shayad apna kam ho sakta hai.
Rk- aur agar nahi maana toh
Producer- toh kya hume usse hotel mein shooting karni hai and its final. Meine owner ke baare mein sab kuch patta kar liya hai. Uski ek maa hai umar layak hai agar unki good side pe tum ajao toh kam hoga. Aur han uski ek loti betti bhi hai Madhubala Chaudhary. Ek carodpatti baap ki ek loti betti. Usse dosti karke shooting ke liye maana sakte ho tum.
Rk- owner se pehle baat karte hain. Tomorrow at 12 sharp.
Producer- done

12 PM TOM...

Rk and the producer are waiting for a meeting with Balraj Chaudhary. Just then a silver expensive car comes and parks randomly. A girl in a red summer dress upto her knees comes out. She a straight hair. Golden eyeshadow and black eyeliner was on her eyes. A cute pink shade of lipstick was on her lips. She was wearing black flats and started walking towards the hotel. The girl was Madhubala. She went to the receptionist and said- humare pappa kaha hai
Rec- m'aam apko wait karna hoga baas doh minute woh abhi meeting mein hai.
Madhu- ok lekin please tum humare kuch bhi simple kahane ke liye maangao hume bhahut bhook lagi hai.
Rec- sure ma'am please take a seat
Madhu went sat next to Rk. Rk was listening to what the producer was saying. He then looked to his right to see Madhu and there. He fell for her at the first sight. Rk- hi
Madhu turned her head to him and a really big twinkle in her eyes grew- hi tum superstar RK ho na
Rk nodds- aur tum
Madhu- hum Madhubala. Madhubala Chaudhary
Rk recalls the name- Madhubala Chaudhary iss hotel ki malkin ho na
Madhu- shhh. Malkin baat bolo royalty jeysa sound karta hai
Then they both started laughing. Madhu- weyse tum yaha keyse
Rk- meri agali film ki shooting hume yaha karni hai lekin tumhare pappa ne maana kar diya. Bas unse firse request karne aya hon.
Madhu- dont worry hum tumhara kam kar dengay.
Then Balraj came out. Madhu saw him and got up- pappa
Balraj happily smiled- madhu tum kab ae
Madhu- hum toh baas abhi abhi ae airport se.
Balraj- arrey tumhari dost kaha hai Trishna US toh ek saath hi gae the na kahi airport pe uss chodke toh nahi ae na tum
Madhu- pappa. Humari pyaari dost humare jeysi bilkul nahi hai. Usse college jaana tha aur hume college bilkul nahi pasand.
Balraj- hmm toh betti apne pappa se kuch maangne ae hai.
Madhu- han
She reached into her super cute purse and found a paper. Balraj- kya hai yeh
Madhu- pappa woh na humare college se parso ek field trip hai. Madhurah ke liye lekin waha camping karna hai woh bhi teen din ke liye... hume waha jaana hai.
Balraj- tin din ke liye bilkul nahi
Madhu- please pappa... hume aur uss jagah mein kitna farak hai
Balraj- kya
Madhu- han Madhurah mein Madhu hai aur Madhubala mein bhi Madhu hai
Balraj- wah betta wah... hume tumpe bhaut naaz hai lekin tum Madhurah nahi jaogi.
Madhu- pappa Trishna bhi ja rahi hai
Balraj- Roma ne kya kaha
Madhu- humne phone kiya tha lekin maanah kar diya
Balraj- toh betta bilkul nahi
Madhu- thik hai humse uss ghaar mein koi pyaar nahi karta. Daddi ka baas chale na toh woh abhi issi waqt kisi se bhi humari shaadi karde. Roma mossi bilkul strict hai hume kahi akele nahi jaen deti. Trishna ko humari band baajane mein hi massa atta hai. Aur ap bhi thik hai karo doh humari shaadi nikal doh hume ghaar se. Apko kaha matlab humse.
Rk whispered- wah kya drama karti hai
Balraj- oye tujhe dekey na teri maa ki yaad atti hai kitni zidhi hai thik hai la sign kardete hai hum
Madhu smiled and hugged him- thank u pappa
Balraj- ur welcome betta
Madhu- aur pappa hum apse kuch aur maangay
Balraj- kya
Madhu- yeh Mr. Rishabh Kundra hai inki nae film ane wali hai aur unhe iss hotel mein shoot karna hai toh ap permission dey dijieh.
Balraj- thik hai permission granted
Madhu- thank u bye ab hume college jaana hoga warna hum aaj maar jaengay
Balraj- thik hai bye
Madhu was leaving when the staff gathered around her with expensive type of food. Madhu just took a box of Italian pasta and waved bye to everyone. But before she left she turned and said- Hi superstar
Rk turned to her- thank you Miss. Chaudhary tumne meri saari muskil asan kardi
Madhu- not so fast you owe me big time
Rk- toh kya kar sakta hon mein apke liye ap hokum dijieh baanda apki service pe
Madhu- hume abhi nahi patta lekin hum soch ke baataengay kaal tak. Bye
Rk- bye
Madhu left and Rk had fallen in love with her already.

Their next meeting was exactly a week later. One of the staff members put the wet floor ahead sign. Madhu was skating through the lobby. Rk was done shooting he was leaving but was talking on the phone. Madhu wasn't looking and then she accidently bumped into RK really hard. They both fell on the floor. Rk- ouch mere pair
Madhu tried getting up but because of her skates she couldnt. Rk smiled seeing her cute attemps. Rk- ek minute
He rolled Madhu over. He got up with one foot and helped her get up. Madhu- im so sorry. Humne tumhe choot di
Rk- chot mera pair toud diya
Madhu- im so sorry
Rk- ek minute tumhara mujpe ek inshaan tha issi liye meine tumhe maaf kiya. Lekin tumhe kaal mere saath ek date pe anna hoga
Madhu- are asking me out
Rk- ya
Madhu- hmm thik hai
Rk- 4 o'clock Cafe Brista
Madhu- done
Rk- see you then
Madhu- bye
Rk- bye



Rima date...
Rk got a fake walking stick. Madhu came dress in light blue salwar kamez. They started chatting with each other. Then Rk asked her for a bike ride. Madhu agreed. Rk left his fake walking stick there and then started the bike. Madhu held on to him. Rk smirked. Then they started walking by the beach when Madhu noticed him walking perfectly fine. Madhu- you
Rk- kya
Madhu- Rishabh tumne humse jhoot bola tumhara pair toh bilkul thik hai.
Rk- o miracle
Madhu- accha toh hum iss baar sach mein toudey
Rk- no
Rk ran and Madhu ran after him.

Rima's proposal rejected...
Bittuji went to Balraj with Rk's proposal for Madhu but Balraj rejected it. He said woh ek superstar hai usse sirf peyse aur apni image se matlab hai. Madhubala uske liye sirf ek doh din ka khilon hogi lekin humne ek bin maa ki bachi ko palah hai. Uspe ae har musibat ko talah hai. Uska saya bhi mein Madhubala pe nahi ane donga. Keh do uss Rk se ek humari betti carodo mein ek hai.

Rk and Madhu were both shocked and upset. Balraj forcefully took Madhu to his farmhouse. She was getting wedded to another billionaire.

Night...
Madhu was wearing sweats and a tanktop with a black athletic jacket. She silently packed a few clothes for herself and decided to escape the wedding. She opened the back door of the house and saw Rk. She had accidently hit Rk in the nose with the door. Madhu- rishabh
Rk smiled still in pain and wrapped one arm around her waist- meri jaan ki shaadi kisi aur se keyse hone deyta. Chalo bhi
Madhu- arrey lekin tum hume phone nahi kar sakte the.
Madhu started arguing with him. Rk just lifted her on his shoulder and started leaving.Madhu- rishabh hume niche oatro.
Rk placed her down.

Rk was riding his bike on a dark silent lonely highway. Madhu bit his ear from the back. Rk- madhu
She smiled- kya hua o hum toh bhol hi gae ke tum kafi nasukh ho
Rk- nasukh yaha ao.
Rk reached out and made come forward. Madhu- Rishabh kya kar rahe ho bike roko hume wapas peche jaana hai.
Rk- accha kyun take tum mujhe firse saata sako.
Madhu wrapped her arms around his neck- han hum tumhe poori zindagi saataengay.
Rk- o really
Madhu nodded her head. Rk couldn't take it anymore. He crashed his lips on hers. He didnt expect her to respond back but she responded with the equal amount of love. His eyes were closed, Madhu's legs were around his waist. One of his hands were on her waist. Just then the bike started getting imbalanced. Madhu pulled back her lips- Rishabh bike chalo
Rk- lekin kiss ka kya
Madhu- agar hum tumhe kiss karte rahe toh.
Rk- it'd be perfect.
He rode the bike properly while Madhu kissed him.


Guys i'll write more some other day.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 enjoyed reading it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue! N thanxx 4 d pm! ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh woww...shoo lovely n nice update...loved their meeting n their excaping scene was fab...thnx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was really nice update...


PM me when you update next.

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