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Posted: 13 years ago
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she was in car moving back to her home from film set and thinking about her past 2 years which she spend with his husband who's harsh attitude force her heart for fall for her...
on the other side he was thinking about her beautifull wife and with every moment he taking a drink and thinking which he done with her in last 2 years ,torture her,humiliated her in society etc
suddenly he heard the sound of her payal which make him crazy(this is my 1 atemp if you like it so plz hit like buton so i cont):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanx...and i wiil update soon ...and if you all have any opinion for this OS feel free mujhe bura nhi lage ga agar bura opinion ho ga infact i will try to improve it...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#3
CONTINUE
he turn and saw her she was in lovely beautiful red saree both of them move towards each other and come closer
RK(with innocent face)...madhu mene aj tak tumahre saath jo kuch bhi kya sirf tum se badla lene ke liye kiya taake tumhe chot aur dukh de sakoo...lekin pata nhi tumhe chot pauhchate pauhchate me kab tum se pya kar betha...

madhu was shocked and happy to heard these word from rk mouth but she was sad because tomorrow the will seperate from each other because the getting a divorce😔
madhu(with tearfull eyes)...ab in sabhi bato ka koi faida nhi kyun ke me tumhari zindagi se kal hamesha hamesha ke door ho jao gi..

rk come more closer to maddy and said "do you luv me"

madhu look down and said"i dont know"

rkk softly move up the head of madhu through her chin and saw madhu eyes and said "tum chahe jitna bhi jhoot kyun na bolo lekin tumhari aankhain saaf saaf bata rahi hai ke tum mujh se kitna pyar karti ho"

both of them hug each other tightly and make love

that night was the most beautiful night of madhu and rk life but there happiness was only till morninh 8 am after 8 am they get divorce

NEXT UPDATE WILL BE POSTED SOON
THANK YOU
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vardad

CONTINUE
he turn and saw her she was in lovely beautiful red saree both of them move towards each other and come closer
RK(with innocent face)...madhu mene aj tak tumahre saath jo kuch bhi kya sirf tum se badla lene ke liye kiya taake tumhe chot aur dukh de sakoo...lekin pata nhi tumhe chot pauhchate pauhchate me kab tum se pya kar betha...

madhu was shocked and happy to heard these word from rk mouth but she was sad because tomorrow the will seperate from each other because the getting a divorce😔
madhu(with tearfull eyes)...ab in sabhi bato ka koi faida nhi kyun ke me tumhari zindagi se kal hamesha hamesha ke door ho jao gi..

rk come more closer to maddy and said "do you luv me"

madhu look down and said"i dont know"

rkk softly move up the head of madhu through her chin and saw madhu eyes and said "tum chahe jitna bhi jhoot kyun na bolo lekin tumhari aankhain saaf saaf bata rahi hai ke tum mujh se kitna pyar karti ho"

both of them hug each other tightly and make love

that night was the most beautiful night of madhu and rk life but there happiness was only till morninh 8 am after 8 am they get divorce

NEXT UPDATE WILL BE POSTED SOON
THANK YOU



Wow really nice update . PM me when you update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
both of them going to sign divorce paper but he stoodup and said"me yeh papers sign nhi karun ga kyun ke i luv u madhu najabe kab mera khatarnak junnon jis ko mene apni zindagi ka maqsad bana liya tha woh kab ishq me badal gaya mujhe pata hi nhi chala me apne junnon ko bhula sakta hun lekin tumhe nhi bhula sakta"
madhu stood up with tears she had no words and both of them hug each other and married in proper manner
THREE YEARS LATER
rk madhu had baby name tina and they living happily ever after :)THE END
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vardad

both of them going to sign divorce paper but he stoodup and said"me yeh papers sign nhi karun ga kyun ke i luv u madhu najabe kab mera khatarnak junnon jis ko mene apni zindagi ka maqsad bana liya tha woh kab ishq me badal gaya mujhe pata hi nhi chala me apne junnon ko bhula sakta hun lekin tumhe nhi bhula sakta"
madhu stood up with tears she had no words and both of them hug each other and married in proper manner
THREE YEARS LATER
rk madhu had baby name tina and they living happily ever after :)THE END



OMG you ended it today itself. I really liked it 😭

Really good wordings by RK.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vardad

both of them going to sign divorce paper but he stoodup and said"me yeh papers sign nhi karun ga kyun ke i luv u madhu najabe kab mera khatarnak junnon jis ko mene apni zindagi ka maqsad bana liya tha woh kab ishq me badal gaya mujhe pata hi nhi chala me apne junnon ko bhula sakta hun lekin tumhe nhi bhula sakta"
madhu stood up with tears she had no words and both of them hug each other and married in proper manner
THREE YEARS LATER
rk madhu had baby name tina and they living happily ever after :)THE END

wow...nice update..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
i try to write another long OS for you all guys tab tak isi se kaam chalal lo :)

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