SS# Main tera hero on pg#8, 3/9

Hello guys i am "KHWAHISH".
I want to write something so going to start a SS is -----.
Just want to tell you guys that i am not good at writing.
Feel free to tell me ur views.

INDEX:

Chapter 1, page-8

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64318982

Prologue:

"Main mar jaongi lekin ye baat kabhi nahi maanu gi k tum superstar ho, samjhe?"
"How dare you? Main superstar hon or ye baat tum bohat jald maano gi."
"kabhi nahi, agar tumhen lagta hai k mujh se engagment kar k tum mujh se zabardasti apne superstar hone ka certificate le sakte ho tou mujhe tumse ye engagement nahi karni."
"Tumhara down market certificate tum apne paas hi rakho, or engagement? Wo tou main tum se hi karun ga."
"Han zaahir hai, tum jaise tharki ko jhelnay k liye iss puri duniya main sirf ek main hi tou hon."
"What? main tharki lagta hun tumhen?"
"Lagte nahi ho, puray tharki ho."
"Tum hamari dosti ka najaiz faida mat uthao, jab dekho dosti ki aar main kosti rehti ho."
"O hello, dosti ka najaiz faida tum utha tay aye ho ab tak. Pata nahi duniya ko tum jaise dheelay character main konsa superstar dikhta hai."
"Tumne mujhe dheela character kaha. Ek tou main tumse engagment kar raha hun or tum..."
"Ehsaan nahi kar rahe, u know it really better, k mere elawa koi bhi larki tumharay china wall ki tarah lambay, sitaron k jitne dher saray, or effile tower jaise lambay nakhray koi bardasht nahi kare ga. So plz don't u dare say it again."
"Hmm! Mere agay larkiyon ki lambi line lagi hai, ek ishara dene ki dair hai."
"Arey tou de kyun nahi dete, de do ishara, jaan chhootay gi. Baray aye kahin k "superstar."
"Very funny, ek din tum mano gi k main superstar hon."
"Afsos wo din kabhi nahi ayega. O.k main chali bye."
She leaves. He control himself and relax himself.
"Be cool yaar, u know naa, "MADDY mad hai", so be relax."
He sigh.

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So there is my new ss prologue. Hope its not bad. If u like then please told me that should i continue this or not.

Thank you.

oye chal continue kar😳

Originally posted by: rashi.rose

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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

prologue sounds interesting
couldnt make whether its serious or comedy but just liked it

Originally posted by: Remona

Maddy...haaahhahha...loved continue soon...pm me...