OS: Today, I feel like a Father

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

MINDBLOWING DEAR...I LOVED THE WAY U WROTE IT👏

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zoya_naziya

@zoya_naziya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Simply superb!!!!! You write beutifully..

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Ritika Bansal

@rbmystery93

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

superb and awesome story ...loved it❤️

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Appu

@expectappu

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Really well written...loved each and every scene...if madhu and Rk have a daugther , she will definitely be like Rima...mature yet mischievous...:)...Loved it...Keep writing many more...😊

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Monami Tasnim

@Monami_50

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

OMG...this OS is so beautiful.Thanx so much for bringing bits of PKYEK into it...the epic song Dil ibadat...our favourite hot Vampire Abhay...the blend was perfect.Rishbala's daughter...aww so cute.She captione her papa as 'The Tharkey Hero'...so true...LOL. The ending was so beautiful...the wait was over for the two eternal lovers...its magical.Luvd this OS...every bit of it

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-Desire-

@-Desire-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Beautifully written..loved it..!😊 The reunion of father and daughter brought tears in my eyes..afterall its worlds best relation after mom and child in m POV😊