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Part-9

Shabd, Mahi and Adi come to the Kapoor house. Mahi was about to step in the house when

Rajveer

(very rude tone) : Jahaan khadi ho wahi raho. Tumhare liye is ghar me koi jagah nahin hai. Aaj se main tuhare saath apne sare ristey todta hoon.

Mahi

(tears in her eyes): Papa, Ristey tutne ke liye nahin bante. Yeh aap bhi jante hai aur main bhi hum chahkar bhi yeh rista bhula nahin sakte ki aap mere papa hai aur main aapki beti.

Rajveer

(in anger): Shalini, ise kehdo ko yahaan se chali jaye. muje isse kuch baat nahin karni.

Mahi

(comes close to rajveer): Papa main aapki nafrat sehen kar sakti hoon lekin aapki narazgi nahin. aap muje datiye kosiye lekin mujse baat kijiye. Chali jaungi aapki zindagi se itni dur ki mera saaya bhi is ghar pe na pade. Lekin papa jate jate apni beti ko aashirwad to dijiye.( Mahi bends down)

Rajveer walks off and tells Rewa to pack Mahi's luggege. Rewa goes upstaries.

Shalini: Utho Mahi. Main tumhe maaf to nahin kar sakti kyunki main tumhari maa hone ke saath saath ek patni bhi hoon aur main apne pati ke khilaf nahin ja sakti. Lekin ek maa hone ke naate tumhe tumhari nayi zindagi ke liye prarthna kar sakti hoon. ja meri bachchi jahaan rahe sukhi rahe.

Mahi: Mamma, Maine kaha tha na ki mere hote huye koi aapka yeh ghar nahin chin sakta. dekho mamma maine apna vaada nibha diya.

Shalini

(roti huyi) : Tu jaa yahaan se usse pehle me tuje kuch aur kahoon. And shalini goes to her room.

Mahi

(goes near Dadi) : Dadi, kam se kam aap to meri zindagi ke liye aashirwad de dijiye. And mahi bends down.

Dadi: Sada suhagan raho. Prarthna karti hoon ki tumhe duniya bhar ka pyaar tumhare sasural me mile.

Mahi: Dadaji aap to mujse naraz nahin hai naa.

Dadaji: Muje tujse yeh imeed nahin thi. Leela andar chalo.

Rewa

(in Shalini's room) : Mamma, Mahi jaa rahi hai. aap use bida nahin karonge.

Shalini:

(lookes at Rajveer) Mujse yeh nahin hoga lekin ek maa hone ke nate yeh lo maine mahi ke shaadi ke liye banvaya tha.(she gave rewa a necklace)

Rewa: Mamaa main aapki halat samaj sakti hoon lekin main bhi uski behen hoon. Mamma Mahi Shabd se bahot pyaar karti hai aur shabd bhi. Muje pura yakeen hai ki woh hamari mahi ko bahot khush rakhega.

Mahi was alone in the hall sitting on floor and crying hard. when someone put hand on her shoulder when she looks up it was shabd.

Shabd: Chalo Mahi, aaaj se tumhari nayi zindagi ki suruaat huyi hai.

Mahi just noddes her head. Rewa comes to mahi.

Rewa: Betho yahaan. tum bhi shabd. tune to muje teri shaadi me samil nahin kiya lekin badi behen hone ke nate mere bhi kuch farz hai.

(Rewa Mahi aur shabd ko tikka karti hai aur un dono ki aarti karti hai) Shabd main janti hoon ki tum Mahi ko woh pyaar aur sanmaan donge jo ek patni ko milna chahiye lekin phir bhi shabd kabhi bhi meri Mahi se galti hojaye to tum uski aankhon me aanshu nahin aane donge vaada karo mujse.

Shabd: Rewa main vaada karta hoon ki Mahi ko main apni palko pe sajake rakhunga.

Mahi Rewa ke gale lagkar rone lagti hai.

Rewa: Yeh kya Mahi kaisi patni ho. apne pati se tumhare kiye huye vaade khud hi tod rahi ho. Ab yeh aanshu phoncho aur chalo tumhe tumhare sasural jo bida karna hai.

Mahi and shabd step outside the house.

Adi: Rewa, ruko main Mahi ka luggege uthata hoon.

Rewa: Adi, waise muje yeh kehne ka hakk to nahin hai lekin phir bhi main nahin janti ki Mahi ne aur Shabd ne is tarah kyun jalbaji me shaadi ki lekin mere khatir unka khayal rakhna. Woh bahot akeli hogi use ek dost ki zarorat hogi to main chahti hoon tum uska khayal rakho.

Adi: Tum fikar mat karo main tumhe Mahi ki khabar deta rahonga. Aur vaada karta hoon ki Mahi kabhi bhi Apna Maayke ko miss nahin karegi.

Rewa: thank you adi so much.

Mahi, Shabd and Adi about to get in the car when Mahi saw Yuvi sitting on bench in the garden. Mahi runs to yuvi and sit next to Yuvi. Shabd also goes and stand next to yuvi.

Mahi: Janti hoon ki muje maafi mangne ka bhi koi hak nahin hai. Maine tujse diya hua vaada tod diya. Tujse vaada kiya tha ki tu hi meri doli ko ruksat karega.

Yuvi: Chup ek dum chup. bahot kuch bolne lagi hai. itna bada faisa kar liya lekin ek bar bhi apne bhai ka khyal nahin aaya.

Mahi: Khayal to sirf tum sab ka aaya tha. Main sab se jooth bol makti hoon lekin tujse nahin. Maine yeh shaadi is ghar ko bachane ke liye ki hai. Agar aaj main yeh shaadi na karti to aaj papa tut jate aur hamara parivaar raste pe aa jata. lekin tu mujse vaada kar ki iske bare me papa ko koi khabar nahin lagni chahiye kyunki main papa ki nafrat seh sakti hoon lekin use sharmida hote huye nahin.

Yuvi: Aaj pata chala ki tu kitni badi ho gayi. Main tujse vaada karta hoon ki jab bhi tu muje yaad karegi muje wahaan payegi.

Mahi: Pata hai tu mujse chota hai lekin phir bhi tujpe zimedari chod ke jati hhon ki is ghar ka khyal rakhna aur khas karke papa ka. Kabhi bhi apne parivaar se dur mat hona.

Yuvi: vaada karta hoon ki is ghar ki zimedari me nibhaunga. Chalo Shabd tumhara intazar kar raha hai.

Mahi hugs yuvi and sits in the car.

Edited by goodkashish - 18 years ago
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Part-10

(In car)

Adi: Shabd, maine teri aur Mahi ki aaj sham ki mumbai ki tickets kar di hai. Muje do din tak aur rukna padega yahin Shimla me kuch legal documents sign karvane hai Kapoor industries ke liye.But don't worry maine auntie se baat kar li hai. Woh bahot khush hai. bahot betaab hai apni bahu se milne ke liye. Waise tumhare pass do ghante hai airport pahonchne se pehle tum kahin jana chahte ho.

Shabd

(Mahi ki aur dekhke): Haa, Aage kisi bhi rasturant me rok dena. muje Mahi se kuch zaroori baat karni hai aur tum sidhe airport saman lekar aa jana. Hum log wahin milenge.

Adi: Jaisi teri marzi.

Adi Shabd aur Mahi ko rasturant me chod deta hai.

(On rastaurant table)

Shabd: Mahi, tum kya logi.

Mahi

(with very sad face): Kuch nahin. Muje bhukh nahin hai.

Shabd: Tumne pichle do din se kuch nahin khaya aur main tumhe yahaan se kuch khaye bina nahin jane dunga.

Mahi

(Looking at shabd): Kyun karte ho meri itni fikar.

Shabd: Kuch nahin woh bus doctor ne kaha tha aur waise aaj tum mom se milne wali ho.

Shabd

(to waiter): Filhal to tum do coffee lana. and waiter goes.

Mahi: Shabd, tum mere bare me to sab kuch jante ho lekin main tumhare bare me kuch nahin janti. Main ek aise anjaan aadmi ke saath chal rahi hoon jiske naam aur kaam ke alawa main kuch nahin janti.

Shabd

(with smile) : Main Apni mom aur apni choti behen Priya ke saath rehta hoon. Main sabkuch bardast kar sakta hoon lekin apni mom ko dhukhi aur priya ki aankh me aanshu nahin dekh sakta.

Mahi : Janke achcha laga ki koi to hai jis ko tum pyar karte ho apna mante ho. Waise tumhare papa.........

Waiter brings coffee.

Shabd (

looked at mahi in shocked): Dekho, Mahi hum pati patni hai aur is ristey ke nate main tumse kuch chupana nahin chahta. Mere papa ki 4 saal pehle ek car accident me maut ho gayi aur (pain in his eyes) us hadse ke baat hume pata chala ki Papa ka pichle 9 saal se kisi ke saath affair chal raha hai aur us hadse ke bad na papa ke naam ka ghar me ya business me kabhi zikr hua hai na kabhi hoga. I hope tum samaj rahi hogi.

Mahi: Puri koshish karoongi ki kabhi in baaton ko naa doharana naa pade.

Shabd: Chodo na in sab baaton ko. Tumhe pata hai maine kabhi spne me bhi nahin socha tha ki meri kabhi shaadi bhi hogi aur woh bhi tarah achanak. Maine sirf ek hi sapna dekha tha apni kamyabi ka kyunki main apne papa ki nahin balke apni pehchaan banana chahta hoon. Waise tumne bhi to koi sapna dekha hoga.

Mahi: Sapna dekha tha lekin shayad ab kabhi zindagi main na dekh pau kyunki jab sapne tootte hai to uske tootne ki aawaz bhi nahin aati.

Shabd: Haa lekin woh sapna tha kya.

Mahi; Mera sapna tumhari tarah bada nahin tha. Ek chota sa sapna jo har ek ladki bachpan se dekhti hai. Ki ek din mere ghar mere rajkumar ki baarat aayengi. Mere haaton me uske naam ki mehndi sajegi Meri Rewadi muje apne haaton se shaadi ke jode me sajayegi. Yuvi muje apna haath pakdke mandap tak le jayega. Mere mamma papa mera kanyadan karenge. aur bado ke aasshirwad se meri doli ruksat hogi. Lekin woh kehte hai naa sapne sach nahin hote.

Shabd: I am sorry Mahi agar meri waje se tumhara sapna tuta ho to.

Mahi: Nahin Shabd. Naa hi dosh tumhara hai naa hi mera. dosh hai to woh hai meri kismat ka.

Shabd: Main yeh to nahin keh sakta ki main tumhara sapna pura kar saku lekin tumse vaada karta hoon ki tumhe meri zindagi me woh pura hakk hoga jo ek patni ko milta hai.

Mahi

(Looking at Shabd) : Chale, Hume airport ke liye dair ho rahi hai.

Shabd: Aise kaise chal sakte hai abhi to tumne kuch khaya bhi nahin hai. and he calls for waiter.

Shabd

(to the waiter): Suno, Madam ke liye jo aapke rasturant ki sab se tasty dish hai woh leke aao aur suno zara jaldi karna.

After sometime waiter comes and puts the food on table and leaves.

Shabd: Yeh lo aur haa ise pura khatam karna.

Mahi; Tum nahin loge.

Shabd

(with cute smile): Nahin. main tumhari tarah nahin hoon main apna khayal pehle rakta hoon aur bad me dusro ka. Ab jaldi se tum ise khatam karo warna hamari flight miss ho jayegi.

Mahi khana khati hai aur Shabd bas use dekkhte hi rehta hai after sometime they reach the airport and meets Adi. Adi gives them their tickets and now they are sitting in the plane. The plane is taking off. Mahi holds Shabd's hand so tight and closes her eyes. lets see after take off what is going on.

Mahi: I am so sorry. Muje pehle hi tumhe bata dena chahiye tha ki muje Take off or landing me bahot darr lagta hai.

Shabd: Hum dono ke bich yeh sorry or thanks na aaye to achacha nahin hai. and mahi just noddes her head.

Mahi is looking outside from the window when Shabd fell on sleep. Shabd dheere se apna sir Mahi ki khandhe pe rakh deta hai. Mahi Just realise but she was feeling uncomfortable so she was trying to put shabd's head on other side when Shabd wakes up.

Shabd: Pata nahin kab aankh lag gayi. Woh kal puri raat so nahin paya na is liye.

Mahi

(with confused face): Woh kyun.

Shabd: Woh kal raat tumhari tabiyat kuch thik nahin thi na is liye. and shabd just start to read magazine and Mahi was just staring at him.

Shabd: Aise kya dekh rahi ho.

Mahi: Kuch nahin.

Air hostess anounnes that they are about to land in Mumbai.

Looking at Mahi Shabd just hold Mahi's hand so tight. and they were lost in each others eyes and plane land on very safely.

Shabd: Tumhe kabhi mere hote huye kisi se darr ne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai.

Shabd just stand up and leave and Mahi follows him.

They get out of the airport and sees a beautiful decorated car with flowers is waiting for them and they sit and went to their home.

Edited by goodkashish - 18 years ago
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please continue soon...this is very good..you are very good writer.
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i agree to ixl105. u r a very good writer
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Part-11

Shabd aur Mahi Sareen Palace ki andar dakhil hote hai aur Mahi sirf dekhti hi rehti hai ghar ko. Shabd Car se neche utarta hai aur doosari aur aakar Mahi ka darwaza kholta hai. Aur Mahi bahar aati hai.

Shabd: To Mahi aajse yeh tumhara ghar hai. Kaisa Laga?

Mahi: Achcha hai.

Shabd: Chale andar. and Mahi just noddes her head.

Shabd rings the bell and Megha and Priya comes with arti. the whole house is decorated as Adi told them earlier about marrige.

Megha: Aa gaya tu. Tujse main bahot naraz hoon. jo tune muje bina pooche shaddi kar li. Ab yeh to bata ki meri bahu kaha hai.

And Mahi comes forward behind Shabd.

Megha: Are wah! Shabd meri bahu to badi sundar dhundke laya hai. Bilkul chand hai.

Priya: Waise Bhaiyaa, Mom bilkul thik keh rahi hai kyunki agar hum bhi dhundne ke liye jate to bhabhi se khubsurat nahin dhundh pate.

Shabd

(looking at Mahi): Yeh to sach hai aur waise bhi tumhi to kehti ho " what is Best has to be Shabd Sareen's" .So here she is.

Megha: Ab tum dono yeh sab baatein chodo. Aur muje meri bahu se baatein karne do. Tumhara naam kya hai.

Mahi: Mahi...Mahi naam hai mera.

Megha: Bahot hi pyara naam hai bilkul tumhari tarah aur tumhare bol bhi bahot meethe hai.

Priya: Mom yahi per baatein karongi yaa bhabhi ko andar bhi aane dogi.

Megha Shabd aur mahi ki aarti karti hai aur phir Mahi Chaval wala kalash girake ghar me grahpravesh karti hai. Mahi apne pair kanku bhare thal me rakhkar ghar ke andar aati hai aur Shabd aur mahi Megha ke pair chute hai.

Megha: Mahi, yeh hamare khandani kangan hai jo meri saas ne muje diye the aaj me tumhe de rahi hoon aur iske saath Sareen khandaan ki maan maryada bhi. Main janti hoon ki main tumhe bahot badi zimedari de rahi hoon lekin muje yakeen hai ki tum ise bahot achchi tarah se nibhaungi. and Megha hand over the keys of the house.

Mahi

(lookes at shabd) : Nahin, mera ispe hakk nahin hai. ispe pe hakk bado ka hota hai. Muje khushi hogi agar aap yeh chabiyaan apne pass rakhengi. Aur zaroorat padne pe main hamesha aapki saath hogi mamma.

Megha: Kya kha tumne.

Mahi: Kya main aapko Mamma keh sakti hoon. woh main apni mamma ko bulati hoon na is liye. kyunki muje aapme unki parchai dikhai deti hai.

Megha: Kyun nahin. Aaj se tu meri bahu pehle aur yeh mera beta bad me. Waise agar yeh mera beta agar tujse kuch bhi kahe to bejijak tu muje aakar bata dena.

Mahi just looks at shabd in angar in her eyes.

Megha: Waise raat kafi ho gayi hai aur tumdono safar se thak bhi gaye honge. tum log jake aaram karo. hum log subaah beth ke baatein karenge.

Shabd and mahi goes to their room.

Shabd: Mahi yeh hai hamara kamra. i hope ki tum comfortable phil karo kyunki agar nahin bhi tab bhi tumhe yahin rehna hai.

Shabd washroom me kapde change karne chala jata hai aur Mahi khidaki ki aur jakar bahar chand ko dekhti hai tabhi uske kandhe pe Shabd apna haath rakhta hai. Mahi Gusse se uska haath hatati hai.

Shabd: Yeh kya Mahi. Main tumhara pati hoon.

Mahi: Pati. Pati ho tum mere lekin is kamre ke bahar. Tumne mujse shaadi karne ko kaha tha nahi ki rishta nibhane ko.

Shabd

(shocked): Lekin Mahi. Meri baat to suno.

Mahi

(in Angar): Yeh meri majburi hai ki muje tumhare saath is kamre me rehna padta hai kunki main nahin chahti ki Mamma ko yeh baat ka pata lage ki hamara rishta kis zabarzasti se joda gaya tha. Hum pati patni zaroor banke rahenge lekin duniya walo ki nazar me. Is kamre me sirf do anjaan banke. Yeh baat tum achchi tarah se samaj lo. kyunki yeh tumhare liye bhi achcha hoga aur mere liye bhi ki tum aage se meri life me koi aur musibat na lao.

Shabd: Lekin Rewa ne bataya ki tum mujse pyaar karti ho.

Mahi

(Bitterly laugh): Pyaar karti thi lekin woh pal to kabka chala gaya. aaj karti hoon to sirf nafrat kyunki agar ek pal ke liye bhi main yeh bhul jau ki tumne mere saath kya kiya. main kabhi nahin bhul sakti ki tumne mere parivar ko kitne aanshu rulaye. Tumne ek pal me mujse mera sabkuch chin liya. Mera naam, meri pehchaan, mera parivar. Aur jante ho main chahkar bhi tumhare saath aisa nahin kar sakti kyunki me ek maa ki nazar me apne bete ko girana nahin chahti aur Mamma tumse bahot pyaar karti hai.

Shabd wahaan se jane ki koshish karta hai tab mahi use rokti hai.

Mahi: Ruko, shabd ek baat to main tumhe kehna hi bhul gayi ki Congratulatios. Aaj tumhare best chizo ke list me tumhari biwi ka naam bhi samil ho gaya. jise tum sajake sirf ek khone ki sundarta badha sakte ho. Aaj to tumhe party karni chahiye. Jo tum jeet gaye lekin tumne jeet kar bhi apni puri zindagi ke liye haar payi hai. kyunki main tumse sirf nafrat karti hoon.

Shabd: Yeh mera tumse vaada hai ki ek din tum khud chal ke mere pass apna pyaar leke aaungi.

Shabd apna blanket aur pillow leke samne sofe pe sone keliye chala jata hai aur mahi sirf bed pe bethi roti hai.

Edited by goodkashish - 18 years ago
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woooooooooooo i love it 😊
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oh my goooodnessss!! i totally love it
u should continue ASAP!!lol
too dang good!!! 😊 😊
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Please continue soon..i am waiting to know what happens next..
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Part-12

Subah ki pehli kiran Sareen palace pe girti hai. Chalo jakar dekhte hai hamare naye shaadi shuda jode kya kar rahe hai.

Shabd sofe pe so raha hai aur woh dheere se apni aankhen kholta hai. Aur dekhta hai Mahi zameen pe bethi apna sir bed pe rakhe soyi huyi hai. Shabd uske kareeb jakar dekhta hai to uski aankh se sote huye bhi aanshu nikal rahe hote hai. tabhi darwaze pe koi dastak deta hai.

Megha: Shabd beta utho subaah ke saat baj gaye.

Shabd pareshan hokar sofe se apna pillow aue blanket bed pe rakta hai aur phir Mahi ko dheeme se jagane ki koshish karta hai lekin Mahi abhi bhi gehri neend me hoti hai is liye Shabd uske kandhe pe haath rakhta hai aur Mahi darr ke mare ek dum si khadi ho jati hai.

Shabd: Mahi.... relax. main hoon.

Mahi

(Nazar churati huyi): Haa...main to bhul hi gayi ki tumhare siva kaun ho sakta hai. Batao ab kya kaam hai.

Shabd: Mom bahar darwaje pe hai.

Mahi

(shocked): Kya.............pehle tum nahin bata sakte. Rasta chodo main jakar dekti hoon.

Mahi darwaja kholti hai aur samne Megha khadi hoti hai. Mahi Megha ke paav chukar aashirwaad leti hai.

Megha: Jiti raho. Sada suhagan raho. Shabd.....kuch sikh meri bahu se.

Shabd aage aakar apni mom ke pair chuta hai.

Megha: Jite raho. bhagwaan tumhari har manokamna puri kare. Wasie manna padega mahi ko jo tuje ek hi din me shidda kar diya. Kya jadoo kiya mahi mere bete pe.

Mahi shabd ko gusse se dekhti hai.

Megha: Main to bas yeh kehne aayi thi ki aaj subaah ki pooja main tum dono ke haath se karvana chahti hoon.

Mahi: Aap chaliye mamma hum bas yu gaye aur yu aaye taiyaar hokar.

Mahi apne beg se apne kapde nikal rahi thi tabhi Shabd washroom se bahar aaa hai.

Shabd

(mahi ki aur dekhkar): Main jogging ke liye jaraha hoon. aadhe ghante me aajaunga.

Mahi: Mujse kehne ki kya zaroorat hai. tum jahan jao jasakte ho tumhari marzi.

Shabd gusse me jooging ke liye nikal jata hain aur Mahi shower lene washroom me chali jati hai.

(aadhe ghante baad in Sareen palace's hall)

Shabd dining table ke chair pe betha newspaper padh raha hota hai. Tabhi wahaan priya aati hai.

Priya: Bhaiyaa, newspaper do.

Shabd: Nahin muje shares ki details padhni hai.

Priya: Nahin. muje fashion colum padhni hai. Mom aap hi kuch samjaye na bhaiyaa ko.

Megha: Ab ise samjane wali aa gayi hai. woh dekho meri bahu aa rahi hai.

Mahi is coming down from the stairs wearing this beautiful saree.

Shabd use bas dekhta hi rehta hai jaise woh koi sapna dekh raha ho. kitni khubsurati, sadgi, massomiyat usne aajtak nahin dekhi.

Megha: Kitni soni lag rahi meri bahu is saree me.

Priya: yeh baat to aapne thik kahi mom lekin patni ko khushi tab hoti hai jab uska pati uski tarif kare. kyun bhabhi thik kaha naa. Come on bhaiyaa dont be so shy.

Shabd

(mahi ki aur dekhkar): Wake me tum aaj bahot khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Mahi

( ignores shabd's comments): Mamma, pooja ki taiyariyaan ho gayi.

Megha: Nahin beta. Abhi to puja ki thali sajani hai. Aur yeh shabd abhi tak taiyaar nahin hua. Pooja kaise suru kar sakte hai.

Shabd

(reading newspaper): bus yeh aakhri page padhke ja raha hoon.

Priya: Mom yeh ab aapki baat nahin man ne wale. Ek bar bhabhi se kehkar dekho.

Megha: Mahi...ab tu hi ise kehde taiyaar hone ko.

Mahi

(with angar in her eyes): Shabd, tum taiyaar ho jao, pooja ke liye dair ho rahi hai.

Shabd

(with a cute smile) : thik hai. main bas yu gaya aur yu aaya. aap log chaliye main aata hoon.

Priya: Dekha mom....bhabhi ne ek hi din me bhaiyaa ko humse chin liya.

Megha: Tu chup kar aur chal hamare saath pooja ki taiyariyaan karni hai.

Megha, Mahi aur Priya sab log pooja ghar me taiyariyaan kar rahe hai.

Megha: Mahi, tumhare parivaar me kaun kaun hai.

Mahi: Mera parivaar bahot hi bada hai. Mere dadaji hai, dadi hai, mamma aur papa. mahi achanak wahan rukh jati hai.

Priya: Bhabhi aapke koi bhai behen nahin hai.

Mahi

(with smile) : Hai na. ek badi behen Rewadi aur ek chota bhai Yuvi mera matlab Yuvraj.

Megha: To tumhari shaadi yu is tarah kaise.

(Shabd is standing outside listing to the conv.)

Mahi: Main aapko sirf itna hi keh sakti hoon ki main ek bahot hi achche khandan ki beti hoon aur padhilikhi bhi. Main aapko itna yakeen dila sakti hoon ki main kabhi bi is khandan ki man maryada pe aanch nahin aane dongi. Aur nahi mere hote huye is parivar ko tutne dongi.

Megha: woh sachchi tumhare aankhon me dihkai de rahi hai.

Priya; Bhabhi, aap kahan padhi ho.

Mahi: Maine bechlor in business manegment top in Delhi University se kiya hai. Muje mere aakhri semester ke liye Australia beja gaya tha wahan ki expo marketing company ke annual project ke liye. Aur unhe mera kaam itna achacha laga ki unhone muje Austalia ki top university me MBA ke liye scholarship di lekin.

Megha: lekin kya.

Priya : Lekin kya mom, Bhabhi bhaiyaa se mil gayi aur unki shaadi ho gayi. right bhabhi.

Mahi just noddes her head when Shabd enters.

Megha: yeh lo ab yeh bhi aagaya. Mahi beta pooja shuru karo. Mahi aarti gana mat bhulna. main janti hoon ki tumhari aawaj kitni pyari hai.

mahi just noddes her head.

Pooja begins. mahi and shabd holding Aarti thali. mahi started to sing.

(Song from Movie banaras)

purab se jab suraj nikle sindoori ghan chhaye

pavan ke pag mein nupur baaje mayur mann mera gaaye

mann mera gaaye

om namas shivaay...

pushp ki mala thaal sajaaun

gangajal bhar kalash main laaun

nau jyoti ke deep jalaaun

charnon mein neet sheesh jhukaaun

bhaav vibhor hoke bhakti mein rom rom rang jaaye

ho mann mera gaaye

om namas shivaay...

abhyankar shankar avinashi

main tere darshan ki abhilaashi

janmon ki pooja ki pyaasi

mujh pe karna kripa jara si

tere siva mere praanon ko aur koi na bhaaye

ho o o o mann mera gaaye

om namas shivaay...om namas shivaay..

Mahi sabhi ko aarti dekar use tikka karti hai aur aakhir main bari aati hai shabd ki. Mahi bina Shabd se aankhe milaye use tikka karti hai aur phir shabd aarti leke janehi wala hota hai ki Megha Shabd ko mahi ki sindoor se maang bharne ko kehta hai. Mahi Shabd ki aur gusse se dekhti hai lekin Shabd aage badhata hai. Mahi dheere dheere piche chalti hai tabhi use ehsaas hota hai ki Megha abhi bhi wahi khadi hai. Shabd thali se sindoor apne haath me leta hai aur mahi ki aur badta hai. Woh mahi ke ek dum kareeb hota hai. shabd haste huye mahi ki maang bharta hai aur Mahi ke aankh se aanshu girte hai.

Megha: Ab thik hai. Mahi tum chalo mere saath kitchen me. mahi just noddes her head and looking at shabd left the room.

(In the kitchen)

Megha: to tum naste me kya logi.

Mahi: Kuch bhi. Agar aap bura na mane to main kuch madad kar du. waise main khana achcha bana leti hoon.

Megha: Bilkul nahin. Jab tak tumhari mehndi ka rang nahin nikalta tab tak tum koi kam nahin karogi.

Mahi: Lekin mamma hamare haath me to mehndi hi nahin hai to uske rang ki koi gunjaish hi nahin hai.

Megha: Phir bhi nahin. kal hi tumhari shaadi huyi hai. Waise tumhe khana banana kisne sikhaya.

Mahi: Woh dadi hamesha mamma ko danti rehti ki apni betiyon ko kuch ghar ke kaam shikhao aur papa chahte the ki hum business join kare. lekin phir bhi chutiyon me mamma muje aur Rewa di ko khana banana sikhati. Yeh kehkar Mahi ke aankh me aanshu aa gaye.

Megha: Apne parivaar ki yaad aa rahi hai. to unse phone pe baat karle.

Mahi: nahin kar sakti kyunki maine unke marzi ke khilaf yeh shaadi ki hai. Mamma aapse ek request hai ki aap kabhi mujse meri biti zindagi ke bare me na pooche kyunki main ek nayi zindagi shuru karna chahti hoon.

Megha: jaise teri marzi. lekin aaj ke baad tuje kabhi bhi apne parivaar ki yaad aaye to tu mere pass aayegi.

Yeh kehkar Mahi Megha ke gale lagti hai aur sochti ki kya mera parivaar muje yaad bhi karta hai ya nahin.

(

Let's check in Kapoor house in Shimla)

Pure ghar me shor machke rakha hai.

Dadaji: Mahi mere chasme nahi mil rahe.

Dadi

(pooja ghar se): Mahi, mere phool kahaan hai.

Tabhi Rajveer niche aakar sare gharwale ko bhulata hai.

Rajveer

(gusse me): Mahi mahi mahi. Agar woh hamare bigar reh sakti hai to hum bhi use bigar reh sakte hai. Aaj ke bad is ghar me kabhi bhi Mahi ka naam nahin liya jayega. Meri sirf ek hi beti hai Rewa, Meri dusri beti mar gayi hai is ghar ke liye.

Yuvi: Per papa aise kaise hum rista tod de. behen hai woh hamari.

Rajveer: agar tumhe usse koi rista rakhna ho to is ghar ke bahir lekin jab bhi tum is ghar me ho main nahin chahta ki tum uske naam ka bhi jikr karo.

Shalini: Aap shaant ho jaiye. sab kuch thik ho jayega.

Rajveer: main office ja raha hoon aur sham ko laute waqt muje koi bhi Mahi ki chiz is ghar me nahin chahiye.

Rajveer aur Yuvi office ke liye nikalte hai.

Shalini: Pata nahin Maa meri bachchi kaisi hogi us anjaan seher me anjaan logo ke beech.

Rewa: Aap chinta mat kijiye wahan Mahi ke saath aur koi na sahi lekin uska pati Shabd uske saath hai.

Dadi: Thik keh rahi hai Rewa. Hum bus uske liye bhagwan ke pass prathna ke alawa kuch nahin kar sakte ke bhagwan use duniya bhar ki khushi de.

(Back to Mumbai in Sareen palace's dining hall)

Shabd: Mom main office ke liye nikalta hoon. muje sham ko dair ho jayegi meri ek meeting hai.

Megha: Koi kahin nahin jayega. Aur maine office baat karli hai wahaan sab log sambhal lenge. Aaj maine panditji ko bhulaya hai tum dono ki shaadi ka murat nikalne ke liye.

Shabd: Shaadi

Part ends on mahi and shabd's shocked faces.

Edited by goodkashish - 18 years ago
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where is next part? i like this story and interested in reading more...hope they become friends...

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