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Maz

@Maz.

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#221

Honeyyyyy so good to see you back with an update!...

Can understand about work..good luck with it :)

The update was awesome....loved this line "Good you don't expect……makes it easy to be surprised"..too good!

PriDa eye talk and in black n white is just wonderful...

Inder playing cupid is very nice to see...hehe...

Looking forward to read more! 😃

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kmh2rockzz

@kmh2rockzz

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#222

hey hii
how r u
awesme part
really like d concpt👏👏👏👏
going on nw😃😃😃😃😃😃]
do conti it soon dear

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Kanchan

@LazyKid

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#223

finally u have updated it honey
Missed ur updated very badly
Coming to updated it was awesome as usual
Varun now having plan...😆
Have doubt over Inder's intension donno why
Coming to Prida dance was totally fab..
Must say u r a gr8 writer
DO continue soon

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#224

it's a nice part. i am totally confused by inder. god knows what's in his mind and you know too😆

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#225

res...

Maa's yelling at me, so I'll read later 😳

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Khwahish

@Khwahish

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#226

hey honey !!
nice part .....so varun has a plan ....so does inder ....i think both r planning to bring prida together....lagey raho ......i'm loving it ....😃
and pri cant take his eyes off damz....awsome....wat will happen to his Maksad now ??😆

loved the dance.......

thnx fr updating inspite of ur bzy schedule....

w8ng fr nxt part...update as soon as u can

-- khwahish😊

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Archna

@achumen

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#227

Great updates Honey....

Looking forward for more of Prida ....a dearth if chemistry around......otherwise

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maham

@...Maham...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#228

Awesomeeeee update Honey! That dance was HOT! can just imagine PriDa moving to the music like that... Loved the part in which Prithvi is observing Damini.. definitely something Prithvi Saxena always did... and Ha Ha somebody's jealous! Liked how you edscribed Prithvi's thoughts while he was sitting there and drinking..

Hmm so is Inder upto something in this one too.. well it hardly comes as a suprise...😆

Thanks for updating!

Maham