PriDa FF: Confessions Of Love Epilogue pg 90

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Awesome update Maham!! Thanks for the PM!! you have done a great job!! And i think u stayed very true to the characters!! Awwww Prithvi cooking for Damz how i would love to see that!! And him actually going ahead to tell her the truth...sigh..how i wish that could have happened!!

It was as if that rhythmic beating was ingrained in her very blood… as if her heart knew who the person holding her was… as if it shared some sort of relation with that heart...u write very beautifully, these few lines are just exceptional!! Just wow!!!👏

If he gave in to his heart he knew he would lay it out for her and she could do anything she wanted to with it. Love it, take care of it or stomp on it and cut it into little pieces.--These words as well were just great!! Love ur writing!! Loved the way u described the whole setting as well!!

Keep it up and will be waiting for the next update!!!

-fatima

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

ooooooooooooooooh,............ good job maham...update soon!
Lots of love,
sheena

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liv2laugh

@liv2laugh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Maham

That was beautiful - Prithvi cooking for Damz - awww 😳
He burned his fingers and loved how he glared at the onions as if they had done him great personal harm 😳
beautiful.
Such a good pati 😳
Waiting for the next part 😳
Note the CVs: Take lessons from Maham. You don't know what the heck you are doing 😡

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Mrunal

@Mru_bee

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Absolutely fab post, Maham..👏👏 loved every detaill right from the secret date setup to Pri cooking.. to Damz insistence of hearing the truth....👏

now only if the truth had come out like this on the show...😭 .. instead of the press -tamasha😡

Please keep writing, Maham 😃

-- Mru

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Maz

@Maz.

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Loved this part Maham!👍🏼

Pri cooked lasagna and burnt his hands..awww..that is so cute!..i love lasagna too! that description of cheese n all made me all hungry now..and its almost 3am now!..

loved the whole dinner setting..and yes you maintained damz characteristics..she doesnt get flattered so easily..her demanding to know the truth first is understandable.

will look forward to your next part! 😃

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aashmi

@aashmi

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

How so sweet of Prithvi...Now I want a husband like him...

So there's a storm coming up huh?

Do update soon!!!

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Maham dalng... jus 2day i sat n read bth da parts swty... n im totally impressed !! 😳 .. its was FAB..⭐️

dats a interestn start u hv gvn us thr... really luvd da surprise..!! d descriptions... awwww.. BEAUTIFUL !! ⭐️

Pri cukn... awwww... he is such a swt hrt.... ..wish it happens smday in da shw too....wish..........😳

n da 2nd part.... ooo dat was a surprise too !! i mean a surprise 4 me.. i thot damz is gng 2 yield in... bt naa... !! dat was a PLEASANT SURPRISE indeed !!! i mean i always wantd damzie dalng 2 b a hard nut 2 crack.. unlike wat our CVs shwd us recently yieldn so soon 2 pri's wooing !! dis is gud !! u hv kpt da essence of her character.. 👏

Waitn 4 pri 2 say da truth... in his own style.. in ur own style...😳

- Luv Niki..😊

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maham

@...Maham...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: snehakapoor
hey maham.....thnx fr d pm hun nd d part ws lovely.......u did complete justice to d characters........👏 nd pri cookng fr damz😳

hey sneha! im glad you liked the chap.... im happi you think i did complete justice to the characters! thanks for commenting!😊

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maham

@...Maham...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: desigirl_18
Awesome update Maham!! Thanks Fatima! Thanks for the PM!! no prob! you have done a great job!! thank u😳 And i think u stayed very true to the characters!! oh im glad u think so.. thank God i didnt screw up! Awwww Prithvi cooking for Damz how i would love to see that!! wouldnt we all😳😳And him actually going ahead to tell her the truth...sigh..how i wish that could have happened!! so do i dear....

It was as if that rhythmic beating was ingrained in her very blood' as if her heart knew who the person holding her was' as if it shared some sort of relation with that heart...u write very beautifully, these few lines are just exceptional!! Just wow!!!👏awwwww thanks so much!! your compliments mean alot!😃😃

If he gave in to his heart he knew he would lay it out for her and she could do anything she wanted to with it. Love it, take care of it or stomp on it and cut it into little pieces.--These words as well were just great!! Love ur writing!! thanks once again.. you are much 2 kind😳😳 Loved the way u described the whole setting as well!! glad u like it!

Keep it up and will be waiting for the next update!!! thank you for commenting! loved reading it!😃😃

-fatima