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I will be updating today.
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As the winter holidays have started for me, I will be spending more time on LNMDJ Forum than I was before.
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The sun rises up from behind the shadows of the trees and lets its invisible, but beautiful and delicate rays fall upon Prithvi and Damini, who were snuggled up in each others' arms, underneath a wide and hollow tree, which they had chosen as their shelter from their very adventurous night.
Giggles coming from small children are being heard in Damini's mind. At first she thought, that it's Varun and Roshni goofing off again, but she had to think again as she saw Varun video taping everyone and Roshni being Varun's newsreporter. She saw a change in them. They were now taller, and had started taking better care of their appearances. Varun was wearing dark blue jeans, with a newly ironed, crisp white shirt. Roshni had on a hot pink dress which went up to her knees, with a white belt around her waist. She had some wide hoops on, and had her hair loose. Damini looked astonished to see her little Varun and Roshni grow up to be so different; and they were just a couple of years away into becoming teenagers.


Damini came out of her thoughts by the same laughter of two little children. Along with the video camera, Damini looked in the direction of the laughter. Seated on the sofa, she can saw Prithvi's brother and his wife along with his parents. They're all looking so happy with their faces lit up with laughter. They're eyes are so bright with happiness as if they have no idea that something like sorrow even exists.

Damini searches for Prithvi as she can see everyone except him. She hears the familiar laughter and looks down on the carpet. She becomes surprised as she had never seen him like this before. She sees Prithvi on all fours, with a small boy on his back. The toddler has black hair, with big brown eyes and pinky rosy lips. Prithvi starts moving, still on all fours while the boy on his back, tugs on his hair and laughs. Just as Prithvi was laughing, a petite hand gets caught into his mouth. This was a girl's petite hand that had gotten her hand in the edge of his mouth. She has dark brown hair and has medium sized brown eyes, with small lips. The girl starts tugging on Prithvi's mouth as she feels left out from Prithvi's attention and love.

Prithvi loses his balance for a split second and falls down beside her. Everyone is shocked along with Damini who sees the fragile boy on Prithvi's back, fall towards the floor at a very high speed. Damini reaches her hand out to catch him but stops as she sees a pair of hands, capture the boy in her arms, protecting him from his fall. Damini looks up to see who saved the boy and is astonished to see herself. She sees herself there, sitting down beside Prithvi and with the boy and girl. The rest of the family take a sigh of relief, as they know that she'll always be there to keep everyone safe.

Damini sees herself carrying the little boy in her arms and shushing him. He stops instantly, as he gets distracted with what the other girl was doing. He gets out of Damini's arms and goes towards her to play. Prithvi comes to rest alongside with Damini. She makes herself comfortable by leaning against Prithvi's chest, as his left arm goes around her. They both look at the little kids entertain themselves.
Damini looks at herself and is mesmerized. She has no worries, no sorrow or grief. She's geniunely happy. From looking at her, no one can tell that she has anything to worry about. From looking at her, one can only say, that she must be so lucky to have everything that she ever wanted.
Damini shifts over to the little kids playing together. She sees the little boy, tug on the girl's dress. She hits his hand away and is crawling over to Prithvi. The little boy feels sad since she's going away leaving him alone. He goes on all fours as well, and starts crawling after her. He tried to pull on her dress to make her stop, but instead she falls down. The little girl starts crying and the little boy gets scared at first, then starts crying as well.

"Avni." Damini hears Prithvi say.
"Sameer. Ro mat beta." Damini hears her voice reassuring the little boy.
Damini sees herself and Damini pick up the little kids into their arms and start soothing them.
"Wow. Meine toh sirf suna tha, ke twins ek hi thara feel karte hai. But aaj meine dekh bhi liye." says Roshni.
"Thanks, Aunt Dams." Roshni comes around and gives Damini a big hug.

Damini sees herself smile at Roshni. Damini herself, feels a big smile come upon her lips. She turns around to let her future family be to themselves for now as she knows she'll join them again very shortly. She starts playing around with the idea of having twins in her mind. Of having two of Prithvi's children in her womb. Of taking care of them for nine months, knowing that no matter how she's feeling, he'll be there with her and for her. Damini puts her hand on her stomach and closes her eyes.

She slowly opens her eyes, and sees herself underneath the cool shade of the dark green leaves above her. She can feel the warm heat, that is coming from the sun's rays through the small gap that the leaves give here and there, thanks to the wind. Damini realizes that what she had witnessed just right now was all a dream. But deep down in her heart, she knows that it'll come true in one way or another. She sees her hand on her stomach and feels a shy smile come upon her lips. Damini looks towards the path that would lead them back to civilization.

Prithvi opens his eyes and remembers the previous night. He smiles as he knows that, yes Damini did love Arjun. But all that was in the past. She now loves him and only him and she proved it to him last night. His smile disappears as he starts realizing as to what he was about to do. He regrets for ever doubting her in the first place. If he hadn't found her, then who knows what would have happened to her. It's a miracle that in the past ten days no harm had came upon her. But what if the miracle wasn't to happen? Then... then what would have happened. Would he ever had seen her again? Would he ever had heard her voice again? Would he ever had smelled her fragrance? Would he ever had felt her the touch of her skin?

His body goes stiff, and Damini feels it. For a split second she's scared as to whether he changed his mind about her again. Now that he had had the pleasure of her body, would he abandon her, like he was going to? Her doubts were proven wrong, when she felt his arms around her securing her and never wanting to let go.

They both lay there for a very long time. They don't know how long but they know that it's very long, as they can now feel the sun right on top of them. The sacred relationship like marriage was on the mind of Damini when she dawned upon something and made her heart pound like mad in her chest. She sat up, making Prithvi get up as well, seeing her surprised and scared.


"Damini" he puts his hands on her shoulders. "Damini kya hua?"
"Prithvi... woh..." she turns around to look at him. "Prithvi... shaadi."
"Shaadi?" he thinks hard, as he knows that there is something very important happening regarding marriage. He looks at Damini for some help. But she also doesn't know as to what is so important regarding marriage that is just tugging at her.
It is around three in the afternoon and Damini has her head leaning against Prithvi's shoulder while he's driving. He's trying very hard not to stare at Damini and try to remove the fringe of hair that caress her cheeks once in a while. He smiles looking down upon her, seeing her sleep like an angel. It's just when Prithvi takes in a deep breath that Damini decides to wake up. She looks up at Prithvi sleepily and smiles seeing his face. They both stare at each other happily. Damini looks upon the road and sees a car coming full speed ahead at them.
"Prithvi!!!" she screams.
Prithvi looks up at the road and sees the car coming right at them. He makes a sharp left turn and goes onto a dirt road. He was about to stop his car, when he looked into the rearview mirror and saw the same car coming behind them again. He kept on driving without stopping as the car behind him followed. The road that they were on was a very long one, therefore, Prithvi and Damini didn't see a clearing until it was dark. Prithvi rolled out into the clearing, just to find himself ontop of a cliff. Prithvi stopped the car, while Damini looked around her to see if there is any other way out. The car that was following them stopped a few metres behind them, while the driver remained inside. Furious, Damini stormed out of the car and marched her way over to their stalker. Once she reached the driver's window, she started knocking on it, expecting to see who it is that is harrassing them.
"Damini. Come back." Prithvi warned her coming out of the car.
He started walking towards Damini to bring her back, scared of what danger lies before her. To prove his fear true, the door to the driver's seat opened and scared Damini to death. Her face lost all of its color and seemed as if she was about to faint. Prithvi ran over to her as Damini started taking a few steps back. Prithvi held onto her, protecting her from whatever it was that was scaring her. Prithvi looked at the figure that stepped out of the car.
At first, it was hard for Prithvi to see anything as the stalker's clothes were camouflaged against the dark color of his car and the darkness of the night. To Prithvi and Damini, it seemed as if they were now surrounded by darkness and there was no way out. Prithvi put his hand on Damini's cheek and looked into her eyes. Some of the color that was lost in Damini's face, came back as she saw that Prithvi was right there by her side. She knew that with him by her side, nothing could possibly go wrong.
They both looked back at the stalker as they heard a hmph sound coming from him.
"Kaun ho tum? Kya chathe ho?" asked Prithvi.
The stalker tilted his head so that he was looking at the ground on his right. He then looked up at Prithvi and Damini, although all they could see was pitch black as his black hood was up, covering his face from them.
"Damini."
This shocked Prithvi but not Damini as she knew who it was. There was only one person who could go this extent to attain her.
"Tumne mere sawal ka jawab nayi diya." replied Prithvi possesively. "Kaun ho tum?"
The stalker put his hands in his jeans pocket and held his head high up. He remained silent and stared at Damini. She had changed so much since the last time he saw her. He just realized that this is the first time that he's seen her in a sari. Oh God! She looked so beautiful in the orange sari. Oh! How he wished that it was him who was holding her so protectively. Oh! How he wished that it was him who Damini looked at so lovingly. Oh! How he wished that it was him that she felt so safe with. He could do anything to get that right, which he believes is rightfully his. He knew that Damini knows that it's him. He also knows how much she loves him. She didn't want to get married. She was forced into this. And now, he would free her from this prison.
He extended his hand out to Damini as she said his name. A tingling sensation went through Arjun as he heard his name come out of her lips after so long. He closed his eyes and had flashes of all those beautiful moments that they spent together. As he opened his eyes again, he found Damini standing just a few feet away from him. He encouraged her to put her hand in his. Arjun saw Prithvi standing from behind watching them with pain in his eyes. It felt good to see him in such pain and agony. He deserved it for separating them.
Damini hesitantly started lifting her hand to put in Arjun's. This was it. This one decision of hers would change three lives drastically along with all those people who are connected to each other. This one decision of hers would break one's heart and mend the other's. But either way, it will be her who would lose, as she'll lose a part of herself. Arjun, who meant everything to her once would fade away in the past, whereas, Prithvi, who is her future, the one man to whom she has given up everything to - her home, her past life, the old self she used to be, her very soul - they all belong to him now. If she rejects him, then what is she? Just a living corpse. She'll be like a rock. It's there. You can feel it, you can touch it, you can damage it, break it millions of pieces it won't do anything. It won't react, it won't defend itself.. it's useless. Just like what Damini would be without Prithvi. Damini looked up into Arjun's pitch black hood with teary eyes. She hesitantly put her hand in his. Arjun squeezed her hand and she gave a very faint smile back.
Prithvi, who was watching this from behind, looked down at the ground and smiled. He should have known that she would go back to him. No one is able to forget their first love. How stupid could I get?! he thought to himself. Slowly, Prithvi started heading back to his car. Before getting in, he stopped to take one last good look at Damini. Damini was looking back at him, confused at seeing what he was doing. When the realization dawned upon her, tears started spilling out of her eyes non-stop. Arjun embraced her and started consoling her. Prithvi looked away as he couldn't stand to see his only love in someone else's arm. He got into the car and left them alone forever. While leaving, he took as many glances as he could of Damini in his rearview mirror. Damini watched him leave while her tears just poured out of her.
Throughout the whole drive, Prithvi just cried and cried. Even if he could he didn't stop them. It seemed as if now these tears are the only friends that he'll ever have. He drove out of the dirt road and came onto the highway and started driving somewhere. He didn't know where, just somewhere. Somewhere far from here. Somewhere where he wouldn't be reminded of Damini.
It was over an hour and the fuel level was becoming low when Prithvi finally stopped his car. His eyes had become red and stuffy from all his crying. He rested his head on the back of the seat and closed his eyes. No good that did as Damini's face kept reappearing in front of his eyes. He opened his eyes and looked at the passenger's seat. He couldn't believe that she was gone now. It was only a few hours ago when she was sitting here laying her head on his shoulder. It was only a few hours ago when she looked up at him so lovingly. Fresh tears poured out surprising Prithvi a little as he thought that for sure all his tears would have finished by now. He looked at the back of the car and saw the handbag that Damini used when she ran away from the house. He pulled it over to himself and opened it. He smelled in Damini's fragrance trying to keep it in storage. He took out a duppatta from her sari and held it to himself. He started feeling the silk that had adorned Damini's slender body once. Then he started crying into it even more. At one point, Prithvi wondered if it's possible to die out of despair.
Back at the cliff, Damini broke out of Arjun's embrace. Arjun pulled down his hood so that Damini could look at him again.
"Kya hua Damini? It's me Arjun." reassured Arjun.
"I know it's you Arjun. That's why I have to stay away from you. Arjun, you're too late. Mein kissi aur ki ho chuki hoon." replied Damini.
"What?" he asked confused. "Are you trying to say that, you would rather stay away from me than him?" Arjun said the last word with disgust. "You would rather leave me, your one and only true love, for him?"
"That him is my husband." she said with pride. "You better watch out for what you say about him, because I won't bear another word against him."
"I can't believe this." he grabbed Damini by the shoulders. "Damini we love each other."
"Used to." said Damini breaking out of his grip. "We used to love each other. You still might, but I don't. I love him. It's a sin for me to think of anyone else other than him."
"Damini. I love you. And nothing in this world can take you away from me. Do you understand?" he threatened her.
"No. Nothing in this world can make me become yours. If we were to be each other's then why do you think we were separated in the first place? Huh?" she asked.
"To prove our love." he grabbed her by the shoulders again. "To prove our love Damini. Don't you see, this was a test. Why else do you think I came back to you?"
Damini tries to get out of Arjun's grip, but it's too strong this time.
"Arjun, let go. You're hurting me." she whined.
"I'm hurting you! YOU'RE HURTING ME!!" he yelled at her. "Can't you see that?!! I LOVE YOU!!!"
He forcefully kissed her, shocking Damini. She started hitting him hard, trying to make him loosen his grip on her, or even better let go of her. He removed his lips from hers and started kissing her on her neck.
"NO!! Let go!! Arjun!!!" she screamed.
She felt his hands going all over body and she started feeling disgusted.
"No!" she cried.
She started crying as she found herself helpless infront of this monster. She started hitting him even more and she hoped even harder. Arjun tried controlling her hands, but it was futile. He slapped her hard across the face, making her loose balance and fall down by the car.
"It's time to teach you a lesson that you'll never forget." he said attacking her.
Heart-wrenching screams were heard as Damini screamed out for help. She called out one last time, hoping that her plea for help would reach him.
"PRITHVI!!!!"
Prithvi looked up feeling something. It felt as if someone is remembering him. He doesn't know why, but he felt as if someone was in trouble. Prithvi started the car, and first went to the nearest gas pump and filled up his car. Then he went back the way that he had, driving at a speed which he never went on. He broke all rules regarding speed limit and earned himself a police car following him. He looked into the rearview mirror and saw the police officer telling him to pull over.
"Great." he said to himself.
Prithvi pulled himself onto the same dirt road that had made him lose Damini.
"So, he wants to do it the hard way, huh." said the police officer. "Follow him." he said to the constable.
They followed him onto the dirt road, not knowing where this would lead them to. As they got proceeded, they heard high piercing screams. They wondered as to where the heck have they come to. Is the place haunted? The two officers looked at each other and gulped.
As Prithvi came closer and closer to the clearing, he heard the same high piercing screams. Horrible thoughts started coming to him. Getting scared and angry, he slammed on the accelerator paddel and speeded even faster towards the clearing. Once he came out of the clearing, he didn't stop. He kept on going and going. He went so fast that he almost reached the end of the cliff. One would have thought that he would go flying off the cliff and meet his death over there. Luckily, Prithvi made a sharp right turn, and the car just brushed off from the edge. He started speeding towards Arjun's car.
Arjun who was confused as to what was going on, left Damini in the state that she was in, and got into his car. He turned it around to go out from the entrance, but he slammed on the brakes as he saw it was blocked by the police car. Arjun got out of his car, and tried to make a run for it, but he got captured by the police before he could.
They started beating him and took him into handcuffs.
"Wh-what are you doing? Wh-why are you arresting me for? I didn't do anything!" Arjun tried to defend himself.
"Oh yeah. Then what's that!" the police officer made him turn around and look at Damini laying on the dirty ground.
Arjun tried to say something but he couldn't.

"Huh! I didn't do anything. Try saying that to the judge now. Chal!" the police officer started hitting him with his baton.
They put Arjun into the back of the police car and they left from there while Arjun looked back at Damini and Prithvi who had just gotten out of the car. Arjun looked into Prithvi's eyes, but quickly averted them as Pritvhi's eyes told him, that if the police hadn't taken him away right now, then he would have been truly dead.
Prithvi ran over to Damini and scooped her up into his arms. He started lightly patting her cheeks, trying to make her wake up.
"Damini. Damini, aankhein kholo Damini." he requested.
He put her slender hand in his and kissed it. He then looked over at her body to see if he did anything horrible. But he was relieved to see that he came just in time.
"Damini, please utho." he said while his lips were upon her forehead.
"Prithvi.." said Damini weakly.
Prithvi couldn't describe how he felt to hear her voice again. They both looked at each other. Damini held her hand up with something in her hand. Prithvi gently opened her hands to see what it was. He was surprised to see her mangalsutar in it.
"Damini, yeh..." he asked confused.
"Meine, apna haath Arjun ko dene se pehle uthar diya tha. Mein sirf tumari hoon Prithvi. Kissi aur mard ki pas jaana toh kya, soch na bhi mere liye paap hai."
"Damini..." he silenced as Damini put her finger over his lips.
She blinked reassuringly at him.
"Humhe koi juda ni kar sakta Prithvi. Shaadi ka bandhan aisa hai, jo kabhi toot ni sakta."
"Shaadi ka toh pata ni, par han, pyaar toh kayamath tak rahe ga."
They both smiled at each other.
Prithvi and Damini are both just finishing off their prayers. They take their respects and face each other. Prithvi holds up the mangalsutar and ties it around Damini's neck.
"Ab yeh mangalsutar kabhi ni uthre ga." he says.
He kisses her on the forehead and they hug.
"Damini, beta tu aa gayi." says Prithvi's grandmother.
"Ji." she replies.
Everyone in the family come to see Damini again, in the house temple.
"Ab agar tu kahin bhi jaogi, toh Prithvi ko apne saath lekar jaana. Tumare bina bilkool akela par jaata hai." Prithvi's grandmother said.
Damini looks at Prithvi who is embarrassed. She just smiles looking at his cute expression.
"Aap fikar maat ki jiye dadi." she goes over and takes Prithvi's hand in hers. "Ab mein kahin nayi jaongi."
They both look into each other's eyes, knowing that, now, finally after a long battle, they are finally united.
Hello everyone.
I just want to take this opportunity to thank all those people who have read and liked my first fan-fiction on Prida so much.
I also want to thank all the readers who always take time out to post down their comments.
It's only because of all your love and support that I have been able to finish my first fan-fiction ever.
Thank you all so much once again. 🤗🤗🤗
I'll see you all in another world, in a whole entire different scenario in LNMDJ Fan-fic. 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow love ur FF very nice=)
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Beautiiiiiiiiiiiifulllllllllll ending gurleen!! Keep it up dear!! U really write so well for your age! you are blessed with this talent....keep it up!
I would miss this ff like HELL!!
All the best for your future fan-fictions!
Rach
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Posted: 15 years ago
Fab FF Durga.. loved it..

had my fav prida in it and your imagination... 👏👏

any more coming up??

-- Mru
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Posted: 15 years ago

@Rach

Thank you sooo much for loving and appreciating it so much. 🤗
Your comments really mean so much to me. 😊
I hope my next fan-fic is loved as much as this one. 😊😳
@Mru
Thank you so much Mru. I have one more coming up. It's based on all three couples. I have already started it. I just have to update it now. 😊
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Tnx gurleen for this wonderful journey.

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