raj pri fic (plz read it)

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Yasmin

@Yazzi

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+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#11

that's good hmmm so huda is naina's ex, well he is such a loser to dump a girl like naina actually in a away i am happy because now raj and naina could get together 😳 😃

take care 😃
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Usha Rani

@quietrajpri1623

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#12

simply a outstanding ff...concept is soooooooo beautiful and interesting...really amaaaaaaaaazing...pleeeeeeeease continue dear...this is for u 👏

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parveen kahkashan

@coolhotkash

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

thank you so much for ur replysthank you so much for ur replysYour all replys only encourage us to write thanks a lot

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parveen kahkashan

@coolhotkash

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Here we go
Raj says dat if naina dont mind then he can b there Then suddenly naina said "y would i mind of course u can b with us actually it would b our great luck that rajeev khandelwal is with us".Rajeev was surprised by her words n voice her such a sweet voice has touched his heart he was so happy.(in the background for rajeev this words were playing"kahin pyaar na hojaye "imagine haan)
After doing so much of bakwa her frendz asked rajeev dat would he mind playing antakshiri but rajeev agreed(one more thing when her frendz were talking with him he was putting glances only on naina. Which did not got unnoticed by karan )now they also dragged naina to play antakshiri n she agreed (her frendz were very caring of her they always wanted her to b happy as she suffered a lot already in her teenage life)now they all sat together actually boys one side n girls one side those 5 boys also joined them bcz of raj insisted them so there were 7 boys n 7 girls. Now first boys started raj sang "pehli nazar main"just for naina only looking at her(karan was noticing all this)then it was girls turn naina started singing all sad songs like first she sang"dil ke raaste main kaisi thokar maine khayee tute khwaab saare ek mayusi hain chaayee har khushi sogayee zindagi khogaye "(form dil chahta hai -tanhayee)every 1 were stunned as of with ow much intense feeling she was singing dat .Then it was boys turn this time also raj sang n it was for naina they both were looking immensely in their eyes the song was "har ghadi badal rahi hai dhup zindagi chaahun hai kabhi kabhi hai dhoop zindagihar pal yahaan jee bhar jiyo jo hai samaan kal ho na ho"(raj gave his and to naina when dat line came"is haat ko tum thaamlo ye meherbaan kal ho na ho " and then "chahe jo tume pure dil se milta ai woh mushkil se aisa jo koi kahin hai bas wohi sab se haseen hai "(this lines were sung by karan seeing raj n naina )(but se had sung all the sad songs through out like "woh meri neend mera chain mujhe lautado"
from hum ain rahi pyaar ke then tadap tadap ke is dil se and ye dard ki aahein juda hui raahein)

Edited by coolhotkash - 17 years ago

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parveen kahkashan

@coolhotkash

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

actually sorry haan imagine dat beech main boys kuch bhi gaaliye then naina was only singing allthose sad songs so at last raj sang this song of kal ho na ho ok is it fine if any confusion ask me okactually sorry haan imagine dat beech boys kuch bhi gaaliye then naina was only singing allthose sad songs so at last raj sang this song of kal ho na ho ok is it fine if any confusion ask me

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parveen kahkashan

@coolhotkash

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

plzzzzz reply hope u all like it bye

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saivarsha

@*Rajeevian*

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

awesome,toooo good 👏.cont soon......

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Simran Kaur

@sim.07

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

its v.nice 👏 .plz include Shilpa Anand(Riddhima)also

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Usha Rani

@quietrajpri1623

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

wooooow...it was a great and a very cutey cutey update with fabulous songs...KHNH song is my most fav evergreen song...i love to read those lines which u write in a bracket...amazing update indeed...thanks dear for this marvelous update...superb... 👏 👏 👏