yudi proposes to dr. shalini .........

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey y'all - got your attention now didn't i?😉😆

well after my very brief free-lance writing for nair's changes ...... i decided that ammu was the best person for that and that i would try to write a change for another character instead ...... 😳 ...... actually the idea to write a change for someone else was kiran di's .... so if you like this change ....... the credit goes to her ....... and if you don't ........ i'll be humbly accepting your galis, tomatoes, and shoes in my pm box until noon😳 .... just kidding😆 .... no time limit .... send them whenever you like😉 .... waise bhi i need to get more tomato sauce😆

okay sorry now coming back to the main topic ..... i'm sure it caught your attention .... okay after today's i locking session .... oooops sorry .... ahemm .... concentration exercise😉 .... i though what would happen if the last two people left standing were yudi and dr. shalini instead of raj and naina😳 .... 🤔 .... and what if it was yudi and me instead 😍 .... beeeeeeeeeeep *car blares its horn outside the window and tasha comes back to reality*😆 .... ahemm okay so yudi and dr. shalini are engaging in a serious eye locking ... i mean concentration session in a hallway .... meanwhile captain chauhan😳 is trying to tune his guitar in a room there and ends up playing a certain chord from one of srk's films .... now this is a chord that makes lover boys start acting like srk ...... so ..... now get ready for yudi's change ..............

action!

yudi and dr. shalini - (looking into each other's eyes)

captain chauhan - guitar: toing toing toing

yudi - 😵 (upon hearing the chord, starts making faces which causes dr. shalini to blink back to reality)

dr. shalini - 😲cadet? ..... cadet? .... kya hua? .... are you alright? .... is anything wrong? .... cadet .... please kuch bolo😒

yudi - (now in srk-mode) mujhe k...k...k..kya hua ..... main tikh hoon ..... waise ma'am k...k...k...kya aap janti hain k..ke main nana muna rahi hoon .... desh k..ka siphai hoon

dr. shalini - 😲😕 ... okay cadet i think you need to get some rest .... tum tikh nahin lag rahe ho .... chalo mein tumhe ek injection de deti hoon .... then you can go to sleep .... c'mon cadet

yudi - nahin .... mein k...k.... ka.... kahin nahin jaonga ..... waise ma'am ..... (gets down on his knees) ....... tumhe jo maine dekha .... tumhe jo maine jaana .... jo hosh tha ... woh tho gayaaaaaaa

dr. shalini - 😲😕 ... cadet yudi!!!!! .... hosh mein aao cadet .... oh god (tries to pull yudi up but fails) ..... (notices abhi coming out with the guitar) .... captain chauhan ....could you please help me take cad .... get's interrupted by yudi

yudi - (jumps up with his hands stretched out🤗) k....k...kis k..ka hai yeh tumko intezar main hoon naaaaa ..... dekhlo idhar bhi ek bar main hoon naaaaaa

captain chauhan - mind blowing ... no ... mind blasting cadet .... 👏 .... very good ..... lagta hai ke tumhe finally suron aur music se dosti kar li hai .... very good 👏 ... (stops clapping when he notices dr. shalini holding her head) .... dr. shalini ... kya hua?

dr. shalini - captain .... i don't know what happened .... cadet yudi ek minute phele toh tikh the .... pata nahin kyon ab woh shahrukh ki acting kar raha hai

yudi - (turns to captain chauhan) captain apun bola tu meri laila .... woh boli pekhta hai sala

captain chauhan - shahrukh???😕 .... ek second ... just one second .... kya aap dono abhi yahin pe khade the .... (dr. shalini nods) .... oh no!!! .....that's why .... hum abhi srk ke gaanon se apna guitar tune kar rahe the ..... humne suna hai ke agar koi ladka kisi ladki ke aankhon mein aankhen dal kar kada ho aur srk ka koi geet baje ..... toh woh ladka srk ka avtaar dharan karle tha hai ..... but yeh kaise hua ..... kya aap dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe the?

yudi - (interrupts them and grabs dr. shalini in his arms) janam ..... dekh lo .... mit gayi duriyan .....main yahan hoon .... yahan hoon .... yahan hoon ..... yahan🤗

dr. shalini - ☺️ ... woh kya hai ....... actually ...... hum .... woh eye-locking .... i mean ..... concentration session hold kar rahe the ... and then i don't know what happened

yudi - sardi k...k...khasi na malaria hua ..... mujhe luv luv luv luvaria hua luvaria hua luvaria hua

captain chauhan - ahemmm ... no need to explain😉 .... interesting ..... very interesting ..... okay well don't worry ..... humare paas iss ka ilaj hai ... ek second ....(runs into his room and grabs his guitar .... comes back out and plays the same chord again) toing toing toing

yudi - 😵 (upon hearing the chord, starts making faces again and becomes normal again and then faints)

------ next day in the infirmary dr. shalini is looking after yudi and they're having another ahem concentration session when neelu, and captain chauhan come in to see yudi ------

yudi - yo bro .... i mean sorry .... captain chauhan ..... thank you so much for saving me ..... i thought i'd never stop singing srk's songs .... they're great no doubt .... but c'mon man .... i needed to stop😆

captain chauhan - no problem cadet .... the pleasure was mine .... and i'm sorry that humare guitar tuning se aap dono ko itni pareshani hui .... waise agar abhi bhi srk ka asar hai .... toh hum apne guitar ko saath le kar aaye hai😆

dr. shalini - no!!!!! i mean yudi is perfectly alright .... cadet aab tum wapas apne kumre mein ja sak the ho .... neelu .... please help your brother back (neelu escorts yudi to the door .... yudi turns around and his eyes meet dr. shalini's)

captain chauhan - (on his way out) seriously aab hum woh chord very carefully play karenge😆 .... maybe i'll tune my guitar with this chord instead: toiiiiiiiiiiing

dr. shalini - 😵 (upon hearing the chord, starts making faces) ..................................... (everyone looks at her shocked and scared) .... oh my good .... don't worry .... i'm perfectly alright .... wiase

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oh .... neelu tera bhaiya dewaaaana .... haye ram ...... kudiyon ko dale dana! ..... 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13 .... tere karoon giin giin giin ke inteza aaja piya aayi baharrrrrrrrrrrr😉

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okay ..... as i said .... if you liked it .... credit goes to kiran di .... if you didn't ..... i've emptied out my pm box and it is officially accepting your galis, tomatoes and shoes😆

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-Divyaa- thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh tasha i loved 👏 it bahuth mazaa aaya 😆 capt chauhaan ka role atleast tumne accha banaya nahin tho asal mein wo bahuth pakhatha hai yaar 😆 yudi and shalini so sweet isse padthe hi mere dukhi chehre par hasi aa gayi srk always does this to meiam saying this ecause you wrote srk songs i was unhapy coz theres no lrl today 😭 thanks for cheerng me up
tumhe tomatoes,shoes aur galis nahin padenge i assure you its really nice 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆

Tusi chah gaye gaye ho wah wah kiya likha hai tashu i m as usual impressed 👏 wasey i m wishing keh lrl drama main actual main yeh scene ho 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg 😆

i cant stop my laughing


fabulous work di 😳

pls continue with changes 👏

👏

waiting for next episode😉
Edited by nidhi2013 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome.... too sweet to digest! 😆 very nice... 👏
Edited by praks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Tashu....I am leaving the business...officially(Hey!!!! Stop cheering the rest of you!!!! 😆 )...
Tashu, it was simply awesome!!!!! 👏 Hans-hans ke haalat kharaab ho gayi.... 😆 😆 😆

Shahrukh ko aise mode mein dekhoongi, kabhi socha nahin tha 😆 😆 😆 ......Send this one to Kunal, or let me mail this to him, bechaara behosh ho jaayega... 😆

Aaj main Nair ka farewell change likhne waali hoon, wish me luck... 😆 😆




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Posted: 18 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣 OMG!!! HILARIOUS DI!!!! my sweettooo Ud n Dr Shalini!!!! 😳 luved d idea..n i jus cant stop laughing!!!! 😆 ur jus FABULOUS!!! 👏
more more more!! i want more!!!! 😃

n ya..my cutie pie Ud as SRK 😳 ..haii...me lost...☺️☺️☺️ kaash main dr shalini ki jagah hoti 😉 ..i'd hav fainted if Ud sang like dat 4 me...☺️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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toing!!!!!!dis is gr8...simply gr8 😆 toing!!!!!u r mindblowin at ritin 👏 toing!!!!!abhis charecter i ssimply osssom here 😃 toing!!!!!luvd ud 😳 😳 😳 ......toing!!!!!!dis is mind blasting 👏 toing!!!!weldun 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this is toooooooooooo halarious!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣

im imagining yudi as SRK and singing those songs!!!!! lol, its too funny!!!!! keep up the gr88888888888888888 work!!!!!!!!! write something else up like this very soon!!!!!!! ur too good!!!!!
Tasha1985 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow 😲
😳 😳 😳
thanks divya, kiran di, nidhi, prakriti, ammu, ash2busy(sorry .... should i call you ash?), pp_23(again, sorry .... what should i call you?), prerna, tukz, and sai 🤗
i honestly didn't think it was that great and i was really nervous about whether you all would even like it a little ..... thank you all sooooooooooooo much 😳
Edited by NaVy1985 - 18 years ago

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