Comic Crossover (Dialogues below)

Since probably most of you don't watch the other shows, I'll write the whole thing using Anamikaa's idea. I'm just giving you a brief idea about what I'd like to write, tell me if I should continue.

Characters in the crossover's 1st part:
LRL:
Naina (in a crybaby mood 😕 )
Ali, Pooja (totally normal, not lovey-dovey, no Rohit between them 😆 )
Shalini
MMW:
Randeep
Basheer(Bash)
Prem
Jughal
(For those of you who don't know, these 4 are always crazy after the same girl. Randeep works at his parents' cafe, Bash is a 'designer' at his and his dad's tailored garments store, Prem runs a unisex salon with an army colonel's snobbish wife and Jughal runs a gift store.)
Salim (Bash's dad, crazy along with Colonel Puri after the same woman, now falls for Shalini.)
What will happen:
Naina's very sad because BC had insulted her brother in front of all the cadets and faculty members a few hours ago. She arrives in MMW a bit after the other 5, as part of their mission. She has to meet Colonel Puri and asks the 4 guys, who are awfully depressed because Juhi (shweta keswani) has left the mohalla directions to the Col.'s house. On seeing Naina they all fall for her at the same time. Their hillarious 'kheecha-tani' begins.
Meanwhile, Ali and Pooja have reached 'Sal and Bash' where they meet Salim, who is quite sorrowful because Maaya (whom he's crazy after) has gone for a vacation. But, he brightens up when hearing Ali's a Muslim. He brags to him about his great 'Zuraani' (I think that's what it is) khaandan. In order to change the topic Pooja starts talking about dance. Salim replies he's a great Salsa dancer and ends up showing them a mix of filmy, classical and totally crazy steps.
They manage to escape from there and Yudi enters. He is totally aghast seeing a stick-like man dancing like mad. He walks without looking and bangs into a cupboard.
Shalini, who was passing by, sees Yudi faint. She rushes to him and bends down over him along with Salim. Their heads collide. Salim stares at her with a love-sick expression on his face. Shalini disgustedly turns away and funny thought run in her head.
If you like this, I can think of funny dialogues and continue it, so should I?

i dont watch mmw & ls....& i watch 4 sumtimes....
srry....cannot continue da story.....

ok......another idea.....those guys 4m mmw.....start running after naina......& think of all sorts of wayz 2 propose her....

I'm writing with the dialogues then.

Mera Bharat Jawaan
Part 1
Naina walked along the footpath weeping.
Naina(to herself):Brigadier ne mera bhai ko deshdrohi, gaddar, kaayar kaha. Wo bhi sabke saamne, yeh jaante hue ki woh mere bhaiyya hai. Aur yeh sunkar Abhimanyu ne mujhe gale nahi lagaaya, Huda ne mujhe manaane ne ki koshish bhi nahi ki aur Rajveer sir ne meri taraf dekha tak nahin.
Yeh kya ho raha hai? Am I losing my charm? Us shopkeeper jisne mujhe woh pandrah cream our saat face packs beche na, usko toh main goli se uda dungi!
(She walks further and stops in front of the 4 guys weeping on each others shoulders.)
Naina(thinking):Yeh toh mujhse bhi zyaada rote hain, pataa nahin kaisa hai yeh Mohalla Mohabbatwala, aur kaise hain yahan ke log. Anyways, main Colonel Puri ka address inse hi poochti hoon.
(Loudly) Excuse me! Kya aap mujhe bataa sakte hain ki Colonel Puri kahaan rehte hain?
(The fellows look up and are instantly smitten by Naina, they begin to think...)
Randeep:O, yo kaisi chorri hai? Neeru aur Juhi se bhi zyaada khoobsoorat!Manne ise kaisi bhi pataana hi hoga.
Bash:Mashalla, kya jach rahi hain yeh mohatarma. Meri begham main ise hi banaunga. Aur iska figure bhi kaafi accha hai, shaadi ke baad ise manequin ki jagah par rakhunga, abu aur mera kharcha bhi bach jayega!
Prem:Wah, inke aankhon main ek khaalipan hai. Shayad inhe bhi meri tarah apno ka pyaar nahin naseeb hua. Upar se, yeh toh kaafi acchi bhi lagti.
Jughal:Hmm...shakal se toh lagta hai ise smart ladke hi pasand hai, jodi khoob jamegi hum dono ki!
Naina:'Xcuse me, maine poocha Colonel Puri ka ghar kahaan hain.
All the guys shout out:Woh kya hain na aap intni khoobsoorat hai ki hum kho gaye.
(They all look at each other angrily.)
Randeep:Waise aapka naam kya hai?
Naina: Naina Singh
Randeep:Achcha! Kal Ho Na Ho ki Preeti Jhinta!
Jughal:Oh, matbuddhi, yeh Preity Zinta thodi hai. Yeh toh unse bhi behtar hai, hain na Naina? (Ruffling his hair, as always.)
Randeep: Abbey o Bansaari! Tu manne mat samjha.
Bash:Yeh kyaa kar rahe ho aap? Lilla ke vaaste bacchon ki tarah jhagadna bandh karo ab, you're grown up now (in his funny Eng.accent)
Prem:Aap inki baaton par dhyaan na dein. Colonel Puri ka ghar yahaan se daayin aor ki last building hai.
Naina:Thank you. (And walks away.)
Randeep: Kyon bhai bansaari, baniya, chashme waali badak, Preeti Jhinta se bhi behtar kehkar Naina ko maska maar raha tha.
Bash:Ab sach hai toh blonege hi na.
Randeep:Oy, Son of a Tailor, munh band rakh apna. Aur nauwwa, kyon bataaya tune address, manne bataane deta.
Prem:Han, jab tak tum apna jhagdha khatam karte, tab tak hum budhe ho chuke hote. Ab chalo humaari dukaan par customer aaye hain, aur tum teenon ke yahaan bhi koi badnaseeb intezaar kar raha hai.
Randeep:Oh, Nai! Aukaad main reh, mere customer badnaseeb nahin hai, meri body ko dekhne keliye to sab taraste hai (showing off his muscles).
Jughal:Iss baar toh ise samajh main aaya ki teri matlab kya hai Prem, nahin toh ye hamesha kuch aur hi samajh leta hai. Chalo ab,main Naina ke paas...mera matlab hai apni dukaan par ja raha hoon.
Randeep:Haan...main bhi.
Prem:Hum toh kabke jaane waale the.
Bash:Toh hum kaunse Abbu ko akela chod ke jaayenge. Jab tekho apni shaadi ke peeche pade rehte hai, pataa nahin iss baar kya shaitaani karenge.
(All of them pretend to leave for their shops, but decide to make up some excuses and show up at the Colonel's house.)
[No offence meant to any Naina fans or MMW fans. Sorry if this post hurt your feelings.]

Thanx 4 replying Natalie.
You guys don't like it or sumthin'? Many views but just 1 reply. I must be accustomed to this, mere fanfic ka bhi yahi haal hai! 😆 😆