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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
thankx a lot ppl i would be riting the first part rite now
just wait for 5 mins 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pyaar ka square

first part.............

it was a brite sunny day at KMA...............kanchunjunga military academy

all the ppl are jolly are happy..............all are in thier own mood.....why coz....afetr a long time they have a break for 2 weks in the academy.....taht means no drill............no BC ka lectures........no works......nothing at alll

all the cadets were soo happy and were all palnning their holiday....but inside the academy only 😭

now lets see in the rooms of the cadets what are they doing

int he room of pooja and naina

pooja:ooye naina tune kay plan kiya hain?????in 2 weks main kya karegi?????????

naina.....gives pooja an evil look:.....uus huda koo maaaja cakhaungi

pooja:kya?????????? huda???????par kyun????????

naina:tu nahin samjhegi....chal chal jaldi kar

pooja:kis liye??????????

naina:arrey woh tera ALI tere liye neche wait kar raha hoga na......main tere liye hi kehe rahi hoon

pooja blushes 😳:naina kya tu bhi naaa....chal

in the meantime in the boyz room

all the guys were together in alekhz and aliz room

alekh was in front of teh miror .......combing his hair......he was in his casuals....(was lookign awseom 😳)

yudi.....as usual....................huda.............cool as ever

and ali....the simplest

all were discusing abt their 2 weeek off

huda:ooye yudiye...tera kya plans hain.....ghar jane ka???????

yudi:dude have u gone sycked out?????? main aur gahr??????this 2 wek is our azadi week man c'mon lets enjoy

alekh:tum logg sab eere hoo

ali:kyun guru kya hua??????

alekh:areyy kya plan kar rahe hoo pata nahin kya ke hum logg academy main hi rehene wale hain....aur BC

huda:oye haan yar tau ke bare main toh maine soocha hi nahin

yuvi: dont woory yaron no body can stopp us from having fun

ali:lekin kyase????

yudi:mere pas ek plan hain

huda:kya kya kya?????

yudi:sooch te hain

alekh hits yudi on his head:abbey chup kar............chal chal neche chalte hain warna breakfast rehe jayega

ali:haan han chaliye....bohot late hoo gaya hain

huda,yudi:ohhhhoooooooooo ali tujhe itni jaldi kis bat ki hain

alekh:abbey dafar log....poojha se milne kii

ali..gets a bit shy:kya guru app bhi naa......accha hum chalte hain...and he runs away

huda:yeh toh bawla ho gaya hain

soo al the guys leave and go to teh dinning hall

and there meet the two luv birds...........ali and pooja

and there only met teh two biggets enemies...........naina and huda...no one could tolerate each other

naina:mera rasta choro

huda:phoolan mujhe tera rasta katne ka bhi koi shock nahin hain....dekh tuhi mujhe rook rahi hain....yuhi mere raste main khari hain

naina:dekho main tumhare raste main nahin hoon tum hoo......hatoooo

huda:tu hat phoolan

and a arument starts on

and ali and pooja comes to handle it

ali pooja holds them from their shoulders......they were imposible

pooja:naina chal na kya kar rahi hain chor usse

ali:haan bhai app bhi

after many things tehy leave each other and go and sit

but gusse main lal tamatar le tarah phuk rahe hain

naina:maaye uss huda ke bacche ko dekh lungi

pooja:kya karna wali ho tum???????

naina:ajj rat ke boon fire main pata chal jaye ga

on the other table

huda:main toh uss phoolan koo nahin chorunga

yudi:abbey pehele usseakar ke toh dikha

huda:arrey phikar noot mera jadu dekhna ajj rat ko........boon fire main

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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
guys plzzzzzz tell me how it was

as i have a biggggggggggggg eggjam tomoorow i dont think i would be online tomorow if not i would rite it on saturday 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#24
GUYS ISNT MY POST COLOURFULL 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
Hey,its gr888
Keep it up..........
i think u should continue........ 😃 😃 😊
tia_5 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
thankx a lot 3 cute
but no one is reading my fic 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
its awsome 👏
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon 😆 😆 😆
i m waiting for it 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
hey tia di i m always there 2 read ur fic.nd see i hv already did that.it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
👏
Very nice dear.Please do continue.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
tia di jaldi cont karo plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.

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