Reason & Romance pg 4 part 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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credit for title goes to Myrika on theprettyflower.com
though the story is mine

Naina had learnt a lot in these few days at the military academy. How to keep her emotions to herself , how to hide secrets and learn to live away from her family. She was doing a very good job too. from BC to the psychiatrist she had managed to fool everyone too. well almost...

there was a person she couldnt fool or rather hadnt the will to fool
someone who could penetrate her tough outer self and touch her inner soul.

what it was in him she couldnt tell . but like a magician he could make her
nervous, sweaty , irritated just by his mere presence . he wasnt nice, he wasnt good, he had no special abilities too but still somehow he had managed to break through the iron wall that was Naina's Heart.

Naina:Listen to Reason Naina . You are here for a mission. you cannot let a mere boy distract u.
Alterego: Yes i know but.......
Naina : Dont let pathetic feelings of romance ruin your mission.
Alterego:(dejected) Yes

Breaking her out of her trance , there stood the man himself before Naina.

to be continued


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lalit1 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vikascena

thanks 4 sharing 😊



did u think that i shared an article
😭😭

is my writing that bad

i better stop then
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Posted: 19 years ago
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no your fan fic is really good u should continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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pls continue soon and pls tell me the guy is not huda pls pls but anyways whoever it maybe pls continue i'm waiting 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nyc fanfic.... plz carry on with yur FF...... 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Whoa..nice fic..i love alter-ego Naina 😳 😆 wished she wud listen to her heart and not reason 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please continue. And hope the guy is Rajveer.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Please continue dear.I just loved it.I too hope that the guy is rajveer.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey lalit! reading ur fic after a real long time.
du cont asap!!! i m waitin....... 😊


avani 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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sounds good, do continue 😃

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