FF : Tere Mere Darmiyaan LAST PART pg-87 dt.10.10.14 - Page 43

Hi oxy rose

Loved the ud... naku thinking about dutta ...slowly her life has taken turn which dutta has become epicenter for her...with anay...is she falling in luv with a man who had warned her not ever think in that context...

Naku waiting for him...but it turned ugly ...his out burst...naku broken heart feeling ...so well written... will naku go back in shell...can't wait for the next ud

a rose for a rose

Hi rose

Fab ud...dutta seem harsh with naku...he did realized it later...she is trying to bring up anay like normal boy...she is crying...sad...pls ud fast😊

TMD~ chapter 12

Hi Rosie,

So his absence.. makes her heart fonder, things seems to gravitate towards the right direction.. ahhh the reference of asking her to catch some sleep was so nostalgic of LTL1..

Interesting peep into his mind , he rescued her from a poor quality of life, out of the goodness of his heart.. but a large section of his heart where desire ,passion or love for her may grow, still lies dormant .. his past possibly prevents him from sharing anything beyond benevolence with her.. it seems he disciplines himself and disallows to go any further with her.. Dutta is lucky though , despite everything, his attitude and the words he uses , refrains her from any complain ..but rather she gets on with her[tongue in cheek] married life.. with a man who wants to stay at bay with her!

Loved his reflection , about his concern about her , and how he can never be the ideal husband for her. If only he could discern that he does focus on all the things she has done since the day she has arrived! that is giving credence to her.. Dutta is too hard on himself. He also has moments of possessiveness if others look at Naku beyond comfort ..sadly he cannot get a simple emotion in place.. this strange girl grows on me...

But he feels himself slipping and hence he churns up things like she defies me, but still cannot deny the great interaction she has on the lad.. he seems to be blooming.. and isn't that what he as his uncle want to see?

Ohh it's looking good! he's noticed her beauty.. external one too.. internal he knows but denies..

Work cannot stop him from thinking about her.. but will he think why?

Such an endearing annay scene.. yes, like adults, children love to please adults they look up to.. but what a pity ,Dutta's emotional insecurity of losing a loved one deters him from appreciating the real effort of Annay in practising and mastering riding a bike!

Rosie ,you have portrayed well how children imitate adult behaviour , in the scene when annay was tempting Naku with the savouries he bought from the market. Sad how children get caught in adult unpleasantness.. poor annay..expected praise but instead got chastised for his hard work and initiative..

The final section was quite poignant.. her silence did get a what seemed like an apology from him.. but when she questioned him.. he clamped up! and she in frustration ends up hating herself..

Fantastic , flow of human sentiments rosie.. so universal in nature.. continue please with your great writing.. much love hammie..

Hi rose

Superb thread...naku is emotionally drained...she never got happiness in life...dutta has his own ghost...can't wait to read further like all ud soon