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Rose

@stranger2rose

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Hey daya ..enjoyed reading the updt ..it was nice and refreshing ..good to see a different kind of nakku , who loves to pull dutta's legs , who is chirpy and full of live ...like the bond between dutta n madhu , thank god you have included madhu n not roops

ch3 ..felt a little sad for nakku as she couldn't mingle with madhu's friends but glad that dutta n baaji later on made her feel comfortable and i hope she takes maya's advice to consider dutta as more than a good friend , which we all know she will ..now waiting for tasha to dance ..i am sure they will rock the floor

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Hamlet53

@Hamlet53

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

I, Me & Myself reserved...

oyeee, baji just when you thought it was safe for you to come out... KMH! Roarrr... HAAN MAIN SAACH MUCH IS DUNIYA MEIN HI HOON!

ok read the prolouge... interesting start, different too, I think, him being from a humble back ground , certainly deviates from the original tale... i HOPE THIS protective male.. in the future does need some kind of nurturing... hummmh.. thanks pal...am going to read the next bit...xhammie
oyeee PAPPYYY. haan read chapter 1 ... just when i thought no PN... i get the much loved back ground... loved Naku ke taking the BG's to task.. nice one humour mein she gave them slaps.😆. UMMH as usual Dutta's intro was up to the mark.. and their meeting after twenty years too was catchy. Main facts mentioned , he's single and my expectation is ready to tingle with her...not sure about her though, there might be an older man in her life????hummmh .yeshh , ye mera brain inspire ho raha hai.. daya ,... doing my own thing. hooo hooo.. ok.. before lunch may try to grip the next chapter...xx hammie.
chapter 2...light interesting read Daya, enoyed their conversation , just flows through, which is its beauty. She seems to be on the ball, despite her simplicity, she knows what she is , and what she's not and is unafraid of people seeing her so... accept her for what she is. Dutta ,true to the LTL1 , story has been taken for a ride.. which clearly then brings in her TLC role... thanks enjoying this SS. Mate.. xx will be back after reading he next bit.. xx hammie.

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meriyaar

@meriyaar

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

haha I love Maya for suggesting the whole love thing now Naku is going to fall for him or is Dutta already in love with her? hmmm

LOL at Naku not fitting in with girls but hitting it off with the guys.

Really enjoying this story, how many more parts before you finish it?

xoxo

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afzal7861

@afzal7861

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

hi daya really nice updata 😊

the chemistry between tasha its great enjoyed reading the ud

naku not fitting in madhu friends 😒

good story waiting for next

plz updt soon

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emilymine32

@emilymine32

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

hi daya

thanks for the ud

naku enjoyng more wid the guys

dutta baji n other guys made her more comfortable

loved maya advice n naku should thinking dutta more than a friend

waiting for their dance

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Nakusha

@Nakusha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

hi daya

this ss is super superb😆loved it .naku feeling out of place & its natural catching up after 20yrs is a long period .dutta on her side is making it easier but maya planting 😆things in our naku mind .have to see how she deals with & dutta does he feel the same for her

its very interesting & waiting for the ud 😊

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

great update

both dutta and naku r so free with each other even after a gap of 20 years

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sona89

@sona89

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Hi daya loving it ...awesome UD 😊

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tahera57

@tahera57

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

daya thanks for another prompt ud. i can get used to doing this often😛. things didn't get any better for nakku as far as minggling with madhu's crowd. but as always boys are more welcoming towards the gentler sex. her conversation with her friend is usual girl chat when the first question is always about guys. don't know how much of the actuall conversation did dutta managed to catch.

well waiting eagerly for next ud.let's see what effect did dancing have on both.

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Warda.

@Warda.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

daya ... Surprise !!! yes its me here 😳

sorry for this delay im just being too lazy now a dayz...ermmm oki i know even earlier i didnt manage on time😳

very interesting prologue...a very simple setting...picturing the life of an ordinary middleclass yet contented family ...so dutta-naku and madhu are childhood friends ...just when the life was going smoothly and everything was perfect for the two families even in their limited resources that unexpected death of sriram patil turned the events... ahh the aftermaths...and even more now they have to part too...i hope they reunite soon...i know they have ive read all three parts 😆

chapter1~~so our dear naku is a school teacher ... ummhh interesting best job for her i guess with all those gyans she is always showering ...nothing could be more beautifull that the story shifted to patil niwas ...and ohh baaji's named made me jump...so dutta is going to be very soon his saala *lyks*

naku's encounter at security check was hilarious ...i love this chatterbox naku...the way she wantd to make those BGs smile was so funny but she succeeded too...that is typical naku not giving up at all...ohh great to see this new DSP ...businessman wow...that was amazing how dutta and naku went along so well ...it never felt it was a 20 years gap in between...enjoying their convo ...specially the ending bit dutta telling he is not married yet ...

Chapter 2~~~It was some where in the back of my mind that naku might feel some class differences here... the place which naku had of patil family in her heart and remembered them in all those years ...sadly lacked in madhu ... maybe few people take some time to mix up with new people ...so giving her the exemption after all she is going to be baajis wife 😉...rest her friends i dont like much...are they insecure because of her looks...kahin dutta pyaar na kar baithe 😉...ohh so dutta started with flattery and ended up flirting ...great going 😳

ummhh so there was some past love interest in duttas life...Dhoka 😆

oki coming to chapter 3 😛

Chapter3~~~ Another enjoyable update daya...the bonding between dutta naku strengthening a bit more...i like it how every time naku is questioning them about their absence for 20 years...it shows how much it had hurt her and how much she felt lonely...

i love this girl maya...she did it actually... 😉...making naku think of dutta more than just a friend...here i was thinking dutta might fall in love with naku first but here apni naku starting thinking of him... will be waiting to see where it will lead her...

the phone convo b/w naku and maya was hilarious ...dreaming about john abraham ohhh 😆

i like this caring dutta a lot ...protector...perfect word for him 😳

Waiting for the next part...plzz update soon...and i love this focus on tasha thoda sa baaji ko bhi add kar lou but not as KMH 😛😆...no entry between tasha moments 😉

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