you should be ashamed of yourself for copying someone elses story and saying it is your own. this is MY story which i wrote for Maneet back in March of 2011. How dare you copy it, change the names and say its yours and that you're "trying something different"...have you no ethics to steal someone elses work and ideas and claim them as your own!
Here is MY STORY
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1650762/os-there-youll-be
JAZ