OS: GUNS and ROSES ( note) pg - 4 - Page 2

Rose you took my hear away seriusly...loved this OS!!!

IM speechless...god bless you!!!

Rose first of all congratzzz for ur first anniversary of writing such wonderful FF'S. OS ,SS.👏

Obviously dude u deserve that the title of this OS has ur name..actially u deserve much more than that😊

U had started writing on this forum with "SWEET TASHA MOMENTS" in july and I had read it in January'..n u know how much I liked it'.itna that I read it atleast 2-3 times'and become a fan of ur writing skills.

Iam sure u have heard the old adage "THE PEN IS MIGHTIER THAN THE SWORD"''.many people have debated this particular quote for eons.while in the midst of fist-to-fist fight it may pay off to have a sword to win thje battle '.but when it comes to battles of heart '.a number of words can wield amazing power and the words, the lines . the dialogues comes from ur writing skills have that power.

Iam so happy'😊😊😊.to know that u write this OS in my request or wo bhi on the anniversary of completing one year with ur marvelous stories'..hats off to u

GUNS AND ROSES '.the title in itself indicates that the story is about two persons in love'.who are different from each other '..and the way u write it through POV's is just awesome.

Two strangers who met coincidently '..never knows that a single incident will change their life '.one who was criminal but still has a golden heart and has his own principles '.who even not care of his own life for some innocent human'..and another a girl who was innocent,beautiful,charming ,simle just like roses'..will fall in love with each other but can't express it till last.

I believe that two people are connected at the heart and it doesn't matter what you do, r who you are or where you live'..there are no boundaries or barriers'.if two people are destined to be together.

Rose the way u described the whole incident was just superb''I have no words to explain it.

Someone said :

Love at first sight is often cured by a second look

Love is sweet when its new , but sweeter when its true

Love is like a butterfly '.it settles upon u least expect it

Love is the hardest habit to break and the most difficult to satisfy

U know what rose while writing this comment I was hearing songs''earphones war in my ears '..clock strikes 1 am'.and guess which song was played'..yup the same u mention in OS'''''"GALI M AAJ CHAAND NIKLA "''WOOO lucky naaa'..hehehehehe

The way nakku cares for dutta after that incident '.clearly indicates her love for that stranger but she can't understand that its her one sided love for that stranger'..The scene of the morning when dutta leaves nakkus house with a letter under a red rose was tooo good'..iam speechless

Awww'. Dutta meet her again or wo b in a bar'wooop she is a bar dancer'..he recognizes her through her green eyes.

"if you are looking into the eyes of that person you love '.. u are going to be striking emotional gold'.."

Dutta saved her again '.but what he do after that was really painful'.not expected''the old rose which nakku has treasured as a symbol of her one sided love was missing'he took that rose with him and return her anklet too.,'.really hear touching''eyes get moist now '.. becoz from here I got the intuition that this story of dutta ' nakku love must be incomplete😭😭😭.( rose sach kahu aadhi adhuri love stories mujhe''''''''''''''..)''..and the way u uses the words was really painful'..don't know how u write it

"Sometimes words are not meant to grab someones attention . sometimes words are chosen to be painful,,,,but perhaps the best use of words is to soften or even melt the heart of someone you cares for'''."

Dutta want to help her by goving an appointment letter of job'..but nakku has not accept it.

The lines that nakku and dutta said respectively:

pyar karna mere bas mein hai jo maine kar liya lekin usko paana meri kismet mein nahin lekin mujhe zindagi se koi shikayat nahin, jab bhi in payalon ki cham cham sunungi toh samajh jaungi ki is duniya mein kahin na kahin koi hai , jise meri parvah hai, jo mujhe khush dekhna chahta hai, dur hi sahi lekin mera bhi koi apna hai, raat ke chand mein unka chehra dekh lungi aur jo ab meri palkon mein aansoo nahin balki ek namumkin sapna bankar palte hain."

Aur yeh koi zaroori toh nahin har prem kahani puri ho, kayi baar puri prem kahaniyaan bhi adhuri lagti hain aur kabhi kabhi adhuri kahaniyaan apne aap puri ho jati hain"

Some lines of titanic theme are roaming in my mind'..so want to writ them here too..

"love can touch us one time and last for lifetime and never let go till we are gone'"

Rose after seeing ur PM '..my heart was really happy that u write an OS on my request'..and showed my that happiness through previous comment''but after reading the whole OS '..i had no words to say''and that time I can't even able to do comment'that's why I take two days of time ''and and and even don't visit in the forum since two days'..but finally come up with this long comment expressing all my feelings'.. I hope that I hadn't bored u.😊😊😊

KAASH WO JARA SE PAL SANG BITAAYE NAA HOTE

JINKO YAAD KAR K AAJ YE AANSU AAYE NAA HOTE

KHUDA KO AGAR ISS TARAH DOOR LE JAANA HE THA

TO ITNI GEHRAAYI SE DIL MILAAYE HE KYU THE????????????

Rose thanx for this lovely and heart touching OS

Lots of love🤗

-priyanka

Originally posted by: komal_w25

Not Done rose...You can't leave it incomplete.. This adhuri premKahani should be completed...Tasha should get one...Please please continue from here on...I won't mind if you make this OS, an SS 😆.